Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue..'#3:New thread link:P 47 - Page 20

Originally posted by: IshqDewaani

congo on the new thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved everything about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: abjeya

yes it is a dhamaka,hope to see arjun's reaction. please update soon.

Originally posted by: Shivi1997

Where were you jaan?
We missed u a lot
btw thnx thnq so much 4 such a wonderful update
i jst loved it
it was amazing
gr8..superb..awesome
love u sweety
update soon

Originally posted by: Aabish_02

Awesome amazing update👏
love riya pov
It was mindblowing
I m feeling very bad for her
she feel disguisted with herself she didnt blame them
she felt shree reaction was justifed and her pov about rathore shree and chottu and ofcourse arjun was heart touching
no doubt rathore is an example ..a great chief... a supporter and a very nice person and like an elder brother to riya
choree bonding with riya was very strong and special
and her pov about arjun was awesome
riya dislike for arjun turned into respect and respect into admiration and admiration into love that part was my favourite
Arjun pov was awsome and very well written
he wanted to shout at her but he didnt
loved rathore and choree concern for arjun they were really very worried for him
Arjun didnt like the fact that riya boss was someone else he always thought of himself and rathore to be her boss
Finally Arjun got to know the truth about her real identity
riya joined etf becoz of sikander
That was DHAMAKEDAR UPDATE API
LOVED IT👏
THANK YOU SOOO MUCH API FOR THE UPDATE API AP HAIRAAN MAT HO MAY APKI JITNI BHI TAREEF KRO KAM HY
You deserve this appreciation🤗
UPDATE NEXT PART SOON
THANKS FOR THE PM
LOVE U
TAKE CARE😊

Originally posted by: benaz

Hey! I had read your chapter 7C but wanted to take my time in commenting. So here I am today reading it for a second time :)

Aww, that's such a great compliment!

Reading the first part of this chapter about Riya's inner guilt and turmoils, I'm wondering like she has so much to make up for and how you're going to get the others to warm up to her again. that should be some task which I'm sure you will excel in portraying :) and can't wait for it. Arjun's self-control is indeed commendable and him denying this attraction renders him all the more 'cute' :P I like how you made him acknowledge Riya's strength and not making the mistake of again underestimating her. Thanks for noticing that. I wanted to make Riya less of a wimp than she was on the show:)

Your touch of comedy amid all this tension is welcoming through Commissioner Coelho who stands as a direct contrast to Shukla.Hehe. Thanks!

As always your update is neatly balanced between the serious moments like from the start and the not-too-serious elements. Shukla's explanation brings a sort of comic relief and the tension is somewhat dissipated...but not for long and this was quite nicely done. Arjun's outburst is indicative of his repressed feelings which manages to come out in the open. I can't wait for when you start focusing on their relationship once the 'manaofying' part is done :)I am looking forward to that as well:)

I certainly wouldn't have expected the connection between Riya entering the ETF and Sikander cropping up. I was nicely surprised by this new twist. So now the story is getting somewhere.

So Riya has now the task of regaining the whole group's trust and that already seems to be a huge step. Hopefully she will succeed and hope to see the romance bit started :P

Yes, the group dynamic is a little skewed, and so is the relationship between Riya and Arjun. But we'll soon correct that!

Take care and sorry for the late comment. Been busy with Uni lately!That's okay, honey!

Update sooon!Will do!!!

Originally posted by: beenish248

Finally read most awaited update ...

only one word DHAMAKEDAR update ..👏

arjun wanted to yell at her an want his answers aww my poor arjun can't do that what he want to ... 😆

finally they come to know the truth that riya is an agent of NIB

they were shocked to know her identity ..

so finally riya appolgies i hope they accept her appology and give her second chance they should give her atleast one chance ...

so she work with ETF because of sikander ,

seems like she has past connected with that sikander its my thought...

waitng for next update ... Yar plz update soon

Originally posted by: devildiva21

superb yar...!!!!

i have no words.. truely beautiful...!!!

the words you used to describe riya's pov was awesome... lovely 👏 ⭐️Thanks a lot, honey!

poor girl is feeling guilty for betraying her ex team like that... she knows what everyone is thinking ..!! and thinks that shree was right in hitting her? she expected that.. n i guess the bond they shared n the lie she said.. it was bound to happen...!!!!Hmm, I guess you're right

arjun's pov was again beautiful...!!! the way he his mind and heart battled and ultimately the mind won..!!! he is really trying his best to not burst on her...!!!Our ACP is such an emotional man, isn;t he?

poor guy is so heart broken and so are the rest of the members.. they never thought that she would lie..!!!Yup!

and his sudden realization...!!! that he hurted his team members in a way by not telling them about his condition and whereabouts..!!!and his thoughts on his and sam's friendship.. too good and beautiful... Thanks yaar!

although they are not on talking terms but still care for each other and there for each other whenever one is in trouble .. well thats the beauty of friendship... its never lost... it remains with you somewhere deep down inside...!!!Very true! Kya baat kahi hai aapne😛

okay so finally now the mystery is revealed...!!!! they know that she works for NIB..and was here to catch sikander...Things are going to get exciting from now on!!!

awww and arjun felt a sharp stab when he saw that anita as her boss.. he can't see someone else mentoring riya haan now😉Yeah!!!😆

omg how could you stop at that point?😲 not fair yar...😭 finally they know about her reason of coming into ETF.. to catch sik and you stop at that point...

what will be arjun's reaction now??? am sure he's gonna blast... sambhalna mushkil hoga usko...

i am fearing for riya...!!! kya karega wo???😲 we knwo how he gets on hearing sik's name..Exactly! Arjun's reaction is going to be...interesting😉

aur ab sath mai riya ka lie bhi hai😲

continue soon...

eagerly waiting yar...!! biting off my nails in tension ki aage kya hoga...!!!!

update very very very soonish...!!!samjhe ya samjhaun😈Samajh gayi😊