Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
reswa re
i had read the surprised part amri, will unres after i came out of shock and read full update
oh damn...i am going to reply on 3 parts now...please dnt be bored🤢 Of course, not. Aisa ho sakta hai, kya?
1st part
ok...ACP arjun was also shocked like riya when the first time he show smone? why oh why i thought him as stone hearted? of course he was a human pre roshni dead thing...its only natural. but if i want to imagine him horror stuck at his 1st shooting experience , like riya was in show...damn its hard maybe i am only used to see the dare devil i care a damn wala ACP, imagining him less destructable is hard
Kya baat kahii hai, tumne!!! Yes, very true. He is so emotional, yet he hides everything!!!
aww he was stumbling while proposing to rosh? that is cuteee😳 but again life...it cant stop without taking tests can it? rosh was killed by that SOB sik Haan
then...like after an eternity, he saw around his office, and was mad as hell to riya...well who can blame him? i would have think the exact if i was in his spot...the happiness that she is alive after all over powered his sense of betrayal and intense anger...whoa i am shivering only thinking if riya arjun was in one room alone, what will happen...🤢 and oh damn...sadistic pleasure and smile? RIP miss mukherjee we will miss u very much...Exactly, no one can blame him!!! Now both of them are in the same room, I hope the chapter was liked by you.
and then if it was not enough...the reactions of ETF...shree losing sanity, chotu thinking should he gv shree space or console him...and rathore! he is only pretending...inside he is so broken that he can never trust on anyone...shit yaar its so intense, so wrong yet so right. Thanks yaar! I am glad that you liked it!!! It means a lot to me!!!
and then...she entered. and i was like oh shit run away riya, they will kill u😆 and their accusing eyes shouting she is not welcome...its so painful😕Bilkul sahi!!🤢
part 2
phew...riya's POV about this whole mess...from the time she was in ETF, the cover of naive research specialist who is scared to shoot.Hope you liked that twist!!!
whats with this bad...or should i say tough guys and us woman? why we are attracted to them like moth to flame? is it our ego when they dnt give us footage? or their tough macho attitudes which make us feel special? whatver it is...we are attracted. and riya is not different. she fell in love with him, and now she is under the danger to be shot point blank by her love...romantic, eh? killed by ur own love, dying in front of him... Kya analysis kiya yaar tumne!!! You hit the nail on the head!😊
and boom...breaking this tension like shattering glass, shree slapped her hard and yelled on her. go shree, there u vent it all out, and i suspect the others are proud on him and giving him bravo in their minds😆 That was painful, na? Poor Riya!!!
anita shukla...this woman is ultimate face of calm calculation and boss. she is like...fascinating character, its really amazing to see her between all this mess, like she has a power to calm the fire with her bossy authorative nature.Thanks for liking the characterization!!!
and now wait for the storm to enter this ETF building. the name of storm is ACP Rawte.Haha...so true.
part 3
again riya's POV about all this mess.
she knew their reactions are justified toward her...even slapping. her self loathing also adding salt to wounds... her feelings for these 4 men...those men who loved her so much, whom she had made her universe unknowingly...its hurt when u saw hatred in the eyes of ur loved ones, and she is feeling the same. its like u can feel her...and i am feeling like suffocating.Again, bang on. You know, it's such a pleasure reading your comments!!! You must write more stories, because you've got a lot of perspective!!!😛
rathore is like brother, who bear and accepted her faults. shree chotu, her supporter partner in crime and pillars of support.Ekdum sahi!!!
arjun...this man is a puzzle itself. he love/ like, he never show it. he dont behave the way it is expected. one hand he mock her faults, then he is the one supporting her to get over of shooting fears. he is the one holding her in place when she cries her heart out in shower after killing a man. who wont fall in love with this man? and he had such an effect on her...she threw her life, her mask of indifference, her mission to save him from gun shot. Again, superb analysis of their relationship!!!
facing this man now, is not at all easy.Yes!!!😛
this man...when i was expecting him to shout at her and make a scene, suddenly all world's peace entered in his body and he become epitome of calm...wah😡👏 god rawte pls smtime behave the way we think, will u? its almost frustrating to see he is nt behaving the way he should have... i want to see him scream at her, as in later time it will get worse only.
Yup...that is our ACP. Bahar se shant...lekin andar se volcano:)
then...he got a chance to come out of his dream land and cursed himself for behaving like a jerk. he started to think abt sam and others, felt sorry for making them worry. yeah rawte now u know it...u are a first class idiot congrats!⭐️👏😡Hehe😃
at least he has got them with him...Riya is totally alone to face their wrath.Poor thing!!!
then...all attention to riya and this whole matter. it was actually amusing to see arjun trying very hard to be detached from her, but when he felt its not him and rathore her boss and mentor, he is sad, almost jealous.😆 sirf haq hain ek mera ...Bilkul sahi kaha tumne...
and then NIB...like in the films MI series, IMF...it works for national security yet none knows about it. so cool...and riya is part of it awesome! secrecy...bondish...and i loved it !Thanks! I was very nervous about getting that part right:)
haah, ACP Rawte had an epic fall after knowing she is Riya kashyap from NIB. see its not u only who is so heroic, she is one for example. its really impossible to match this riya and that riya they all knew in ETF...poor guy is on the verge of panic attack...and ah i am smelling his blasting anytime now. and ohhoo he didnt like that riya is so indifferent to this all, like as he said "as if we shared meant nothing!'' cool rawte i was waiting for this😆😆 bring it on Yes, Arjun will learn a lot of things about Riya...she is certainly not whom he thinks her to be:)
and after his blasting...as expected riya answered him. its really awesome they were so lost in each others eyes, after her self loathing, his supposed hatred... it must be love. So true:)
and then...well well look whose name got mentioned? the devil of the story...sik. now it has come in full circle...hope now at least ETF for some time forget, or calm down their anger for riya and togther NIB ETF will kill that SOB Sadly, Arjun's history is incomplete if you don't mention that bas****, so I had to have him in this story!!
whoa my reply is almost length of OS as expected. sorry if u slept through but cant help it.😳Don't worry...I love it!!! Thanks a lot, your comments really make my day!!!
ps u are awesome writer.pps update soon Thanks dear. And looking forward to see you again!!!!
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