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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Of course not, leki! And you are FIRST!

Update at 10:)

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Yipee!!! Hope i wont be last to unres... last 3update i unres yesterday only... sorry

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638783

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Excited...😊

eagerly waiting for clock to strike 10😊

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

@ Leki

That's okay, yaar. You can always UNRES later:)

@Jia

Thanks honey:)

@Aks

Welcome, dear!

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

I'm glad that you are back Api🤗
Read the chapter
Awesome Mindblowing and Dhamakedar update
arjun's emotions were beautifully described
arjun doesn't want to hear the name of the person who killed his beloved wife
riya was so confident
she wanted to clear everything
she was sent as an undercover agent in etf by commishner
The second reason was shocking
RIYA IS COUSIN OF ROSHINI
RIYA JOINED ETF BECAUSE SHE SUSPECTED THAT ARJUN HAD KILLED HER SISTER
how can she think like that
API IT WAS AN AWESOME UPDATE WITH DHAMAKEDAR REVELATIONS
LOVED IT
WAITING FOR NEXT PART
UPDATE SOON
THANKS FOR THE PM
TAKE CARE 😊

Edited by Aabish_02 - 11 years ago

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beenish

@beenish248

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Unress ...

finally you update yarr...

BAS!!! BAS KARO, RIYA!!! BAHUT HO GAYA," Arjun screamed, every cell in his body screaming a very clear message to her. "SHUT UP. SHUT THE HELL UP. I DON'T WANT TO LISTEN TO ANY OF THIS. NOTHING ABOUT HIM. NOT A WORD. DO YOU HEAR ME?"

i was expecting this kind of reaction from arjun ..

loved the way you portrayed his emotions that was not any one cup of tea simply superb ...

the way she say strressing on riya kashyap i was sell socked when i read Rolu from roshni , i was like what the roshni is riya's sister ... 😲

riya suspected arjun kill roshni that y she join Etf .. So my guess was right though not totally but atleast sikander is his sister killer ... Eagerly waiting yarr update soon ... 😊

Edited by beenish248 - 11 years ago

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Can't wait more dr...plzzz update soon...

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638783

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

WOW!!!⭐️

that was a blast at the end... i never expected riya to be roshni's cousin...

and i do remember shree seeing the photograph of two girls...

so one was riya and other was roshni...👏

and riya suspecting arjun?? that was the most shocking part

awesome...

continue soon😊

Edited by jia03 - 11 years ago

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Endless_sky

@Endless_sky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

omg what an unexpected twist. I never thought that Arjun and Riya would be connected like that. I loved the update but you can't leave it that I am eager to know more. Update soon