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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Eeks, your reaction is making me nervous, behna ! And yes, I am finally back from purgatory😆 Update coming soon:)

And I can never forgive myself for making you cry! Hope this update pacifies you:)

Behna!!!

Mein to tumhari story padke emotional ho jati hoon yaar!! 😭 Ab kya karen itna atrong emotions hote hai!! I can't help myself!! 😆

Don't think I cried because I didn't like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲Never!!!!!!!!!

I just can't stop myself from crying cause your updates are that emotional and they are sooo good!!!! 👏 (I am kinda jelly!!!!! 😆 JK)

And I am glad you back from purgatory!!! 😃 Nahi to mujhe laaga tha ki tum wappas hi nahi aaogi!!! 😛

But now that you are back!! mEIN nahi chodne waali!!!!! heheheheh *evil laugh* 😈

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aaditi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

wonderful update...
loved ariya's pov...
continue soon and thanks for the pm...

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Suuuppeerrbbb... awwsssmmm... wonderful...
truely dhamaka...
loved it
cont sooon
thnks for the PM

Thanks a lot, Nikita:) I am glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: khemanisarita
WOW
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE
LOVE IT

Thank you, Sarita. As always, a pleasure seeing you here.😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: AbhiyaMaaneet
WOW Superb, Awesome, Mind Blowing...
Loved It...
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part...
Continue Soon...

Thanks a lot, dear:)

Originally posted by: Leki
Am i only emotional wreck after reading this part??? Gosh i cant even read it fully...

Leki, tumne abhi tak comment hi nahin kiya! Mein tumse kutti hoon.

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

By the way sis

Next update kab milne wali hai???????

Jaldi do na!!!

pleasheee!!!! with a cherry on top!!! 😆

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devildiva21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

update soon madam..!!

waiting😉😳😃

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Aabish_02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Plzzz update soon api

Edited by Aabish_02 - 11 years ago

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Anjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

when is the next update????

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benaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Hey! I had read your chapter 7C but wanted to take my time in commenting. So here I am today reading it for a second time :)

Reading the first part of this chapter about Riya's inner guilt and turmoils, I'm wondering like she has so much to make up for and how you're going to get the others to warm up to her again. that should be some task which I'm sure you will excel in portraying :) and can't wait for it. Arjun's self-control is indeed commendable and him denying this attraction renders him all the more 'cute' :P I like how you made him acknowledge Riya's strength and not making the mistake of again underestimating her.

Your touch of comedy amid all this tension is welcoming through Commissioner Coelho who stands as a direct contrast to Shukla.

As always your update is neatly balanced between the serious moments like from the start and the not-too-serious elements. Shukla's explanation brings a sort of comic relief and the tension is somewhat dissipated...but not for long and this was quite nicely done. Arjun's outburst is indicative of his repressed feelings which manages to come out in the open. I can't wait for when you start focusing on their relationship once the 'manaofying' part is done :)

I certainly wouldn't have expected the connection between Riya entering the ETF and Sikander cropping up. I was nicely surprised by this new twist. So now the story is getting somewhere.

So Riya has now the task of regaining the whole group's trust and that already seems to be a huge step. Hopefully she will succeed and hope to see the romance bit started :P

Take care and sorry for the late comment. Been busy with Uni lately!

Update sooon!