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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all congratulation for the new thread🤗
I will say , you are one the person who always made me breathless by every word that comes from your thread. This story define the pure perfection of your writings. Hats off woman😃.

Secondly accept my heartly apology for being this much late ! I am sorry *vampy face*😔🤢
no excuses haan😉

Coming to the update. First tell me why the heck you stopped at this point, for toturting for till the next update😡.

Well life is unpredictable , but it is too much unpreditable for Arjun I guess. That shocks & surprises life is giving him , if any comman man would have been in his place , no idea what he would have done. But this man is enough capable for handeling this .

This part as a whole was a roller coaster ride of emotions, pains , some realities and beliefs. Man i could hardly imagines chotu in such trauma. Poor he!! And the thoughts his best friend held for him.
After that rathod. Gosh!! This situation is being worse for everyone man. Poor chief tried to maintain himself infornt of his juniors but for how much time. Finally he he vent out his anger for the sake of his own peace.

But later what happend, left me shocked. Shree slapped her??? Don't know if have done the wrong or right. But i am sure the situation complelled him do so!

Between , I like the way you expressed the phrases in the perfect and accurate time span. Awesome job dear.

Ah this lady Anita amazed me this time. The attitude of leading the team, and the way she handeled the situation. Hats off to this lady. And the way Dustin behaved with her was awe to read. I am really impressed with her. For certain agent of her department she was ready to expose themselves and she did too. And this a pure example of the intensity of the relation between Riya with her. Claps for this.
Then loved the way she expressed her department and being humorous that time. And sameer , haha.. Man he termed the department as bullshit..haha. Means they are doing they job perfectly.

Now comes to ACP Rawte.. How perfectly this man kicked aside the Arjun who have the desire and longing for his love and the true Acp took control over. Hats off to the way he maintained the professionalism. Sam supporting him and his thoughts of being selfish was beautifully written.

I was also amazed by shree when he said james bondish style haha! This is the best part as they maintained the professionalism.

And poor riya. She was silent at first just waiting for everyones retreating back! Poor she even thought Arjun would kill her instantly. Not so easy gal! He won't do that in any way! He is not that fool when he behaved as a mad man ..lol.

And the silent sensation, his anger, her helplessness , his feeling of bitrayl and her guilty emotion portrayed very well.

And then the way Riya accepted herslef being the culprit of her best friends, of the man whom she termed as her brother, and the finally the man , for whom she have her love and desire.

That was the best part you expressed the increasing desire of Riya for this man! He have this effect on her. This gal did all ths to save him without even caring about her job or what! And he was thinking , she never cared about what they shared. Gosh!
Rather he is shooting daggers on her as question. Huff

I am just imagining when finally they will confess their love. Well i am imagining too much but i would love to see their real passion dude. This is gona make me crazy.

And finally he came to the actual point and burst out everything! But the answer that came was unexpected! Yeah dude let the game begin. I guess he have never thought about this point. And now he is speechless afet barking all the things! Lol
i only could laugh at the last part. You know why? Yes you better know.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry my word limit did not allowed me to comment further! Lol

continue soon!
This update made me crazy gal!
Once again hats off! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally read all the updates of this story and yes definately the last update was really a dhamaka...👏

i really loved the picturization u hav done of all the characters in ur story...specially arjun and riya, they seem so real...
even rathore, shree, chotu...potray of all the emotions were extremely well...

and offcourse ayesha and liza...women showing love and men r blind...😛

shree slapped riya...evident and justified...anyone would have hav done the same thing given in that position...

every part of ur story is intriguing...

u have left the story in such a curious edge its difficult to stop reading and wait for the next update...😕😕

plz plz plz continue soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
AUTHOR'S NOTE


Thanks a lot, everyone for your awesome comments, PM's and responses.


I know that I am very very late! Please forgive me, I had my reasons, I swear.


Update tomorrow at 10 P.M. Indian Standard Time. And I will reply personally to all of you!


TC
Amrutha.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeah finally!!!
It feels like it's been ages!!! 😆
I am glad you are back!!!
Update soon!!! and do pm me!!!

I missed you sis! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
After more than a month i unres my comment on page 3😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unresed my comment on pg- 2 n 16
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Posted: 11 years ago
Author's Note:


Thanks a lot for patiently waiting so long, dearies. What can I say? Real life got pretty hectic. And to add insult to injury, my laptop was in for repair for nearly two weeks. I was only able to convey this to my behna Live-life. Sorry for not keeping you guys in the loop.


Still, I kept reading your ROCKING messages and PM's on my phone. And I regret that I wasn't able to respond earlier to you guys. All I can say is, please accept my apologies and forgive me. And take it from me...YOU GUYS ARE SHEER AWESOMENESS.


This update is dedicated to my dear friend and behna Megha whose birthday was on 20th Oct. Sorry for the late wishes, dear, and I hope this chapter makes up for my belated wishes! Hope you had a rocking birthday, honey. And may you have a great year ahead😛.


Once again, thanks to all those who commented. I am grateful for your love. Seriously, I am😊. I will reply to your posts tomorrow, for now I am posting the chapter!


Without further ado, I present to you: Chapter 8A. Hope you enjoy it.

-Amri
Edited by -Amri- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hope i dnt come in btwn waited for more than 6 minutes
*Unres*

Finally me 1st after a Looong time🥳

What the Arjun and Riya Jeej-Saali????😲 😲 😲

Amri i'm telling you before your every update give statutory warrning that u will not be responsible if anything happens to us after reading the update and weak hearted people should arrange Ambulance in advance... otherwise for sure you will be in trouble...

Do you have some old vengeance against us that you always give update which shook us to the core and u leave it cliffhanging???😡

finally Arjun couldnt take it any more... Sikki one name that brings worst out of him... His outburst was expected and as always it was directed towards HER... well only she can handle that...

Woah Riya Mukherjee nah nah Riya Kashyap answered back to her Arjun sir that too with this much confidence ... well like Sam Choree i too am suprpised👏
Arjun eventhough he tells her to stop and shouts at her his demour clearely saying how much vulnerable he is now... Him calling Sam is best example of that....

Riya she is ashamed of her lies... well i know she is compelled to say those but still🥱
and who else other than Arjun can understand sincerity in her confession!!!

well Riya is dropping bomb after bomb which can destroy everything well thats what is happening...
So She joined ETF coz of 2 reason's !st as an officer and second one well just hearing her sir name Arjun got it... Riya Kashyap cousin of Roshni Kashyap urf Roshni Rawte!!!! Great just Great... things will be much more easier now🤢 God how is it going to complicate already complicated things????
Shock to RATHORE, Choree and readers!!!!😲😲
So Riya knew from start Arjun is her Jeej!!!! Great aww Arjun Roshni FB abt Riya ya Rolu was nice... Rolu lovely name😳
WHAT THE??? RIYA THOUGHT ARJUN IS RESPONSIBLE FOR ROSHNI's DEATH???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How can she???? well this time even Rathore cant blame Riya when he himself thinks so
Well I have no idea how Arjun will take this allegation even if she says she now knows Arjun was helpless and he is not responsible... well he is not going to take it lightly!!!
So how will this newly found Jeej Saali relationship will affect already complicated Ariya's life???

Update soon

P.S : I do remember that Photo part😳

Done with my backwass... Phew!!!
Edited by Leki - 11 years ago

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