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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

awesome part...

atlast mystery revealed...

arjun's outburst and his qn directing to riya...

sam, shree, and chotu...

update soon

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Awesome amazing update👏
love riya pov
It was mindblowing
I m feeling very bad for her
she feel disguisted with herself she didnt blame them
she felt shree reaction was justifed and her pov about rathore shree and chottu and ofcourse arjun was heart touching
no doubt rathore is an example ..a great chief... a supporter and a very nice person and like an elder brother to riya
choree bonding with riya was very strong and special
and her pov about arjun was awesome
riya dislike for arjun turned into respect and respect into admiration and admiration into love that part was my favourite
Arjun pov was awsome and very well written
he wanted to shout at her but he didnt
loved rathore and choree concern for arjun they were really very worried for him
Arjun didnt like the fact that riya boss was someone else he always thought of himself and rathore to be her boss
Finally Arjun got to know the truth about her real identity
riya joined etf becoz of sikander
That was DHAMAKEDAR UPDATE API
LOVED IT👏
THANK YOU SOOO MUCH API FOR THE UPDATE API AP HAIRAAN MAT HO MAY APKI JITNI BHI TAREEF KRO KAM HY
You deserve this appreciation🤗
UPDATE NEXT PART SOON
THANKS FOR THE PM
LOVE U
TAKE CARE😊

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Anushass

@Anushass

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

thats really a nice update dear... feelings are expressed beutifully...
so riya was here for sikender... continue soon... .cant wait to read more

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Suryatapa sengupta

@1993.ssg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Fantastic update Love it Love Riya pov. She respect rathore as a true leader and as a brother . Shree and Chotu as friends . At first she hates him but now she loves him. Rathore thought that N.I.B. does not exist. Love the way how Riya ans the Arjun's question. OMG she joint the etf because of sikander. Love the arjun's reaction after knowing the truth. He through that he and rathore are riya's boss and mentor. It is a very well written chapter. You are a fantastic writter. Thanks for the pm conti soon

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Where were you jaan?
We missed u a lot
btw thnx thnq so much 4 such a wonderful update
i jst loved it
it was amazing
gr8..superb..awesome
love u sweety
update soon

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abjeya

@abjeya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

yes it is a dhamaka,hope to see arjun's reaction. please update soon.

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

kya damaka hai boss

me also blank like arjun

sikender

update is wonderful,outstanding dr

thanx 4 pm me

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APPY

@IshqDewaani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

congo on the new thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved everything about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

superb yar...!!!!

i have no words.. truely beautiful...!!!

the words you used to describe riya's pov was awesome... lovely 👏 ⭐️

poor girl is feeling guilty for betraying her ex team like that... she knows what everyone is thinking ..!! and thinks that shree was right in hitting her? she expected that.. n i guess the bond they shared n the lie she said.. it was bound to happen...!!!!

arjun's pov was again beautiful...!!! the way he his mind and heart battled and ultimately the mind won..!!! he is really trying his best to not burst on her...!!!

poor guy is so heart broken and so are the rest of the members.. they never thought that she would lie..!!!

and his sudden realization...!!! that he hurted his team members in a way by not telling them about his condition and whereabouts..!!!and his thoughts on his and sam's friendship.. too good and beautiful...

although they are not on talking terms but still care for each other and there for each other whenever one is in trouble .. well thats the beauty of friendship... its never lost... it remains with you somewhere deep down inside...!!!

okay so finally now the mystery is revealed...!!!! they know that she works for NIB..and was here to catch sikander...

awww and arjun felt a sharp stab when he saw that anita as her boss.. he can't see someone else mentoring riya haan now😉

omg how could you stop at that point?😲 not fair yar...😭 finally they know about her reason of coming into ETF.. to catch sik and you stop at that point...

what will be arjun's reaction now??? am sure he's gonna blast... sambhalna mushkil hoga usko...

i am fearing for riya...!!! kya karega wo???😲 we knwo how he gets on hearing sik's name..

aur ab sath mai riya ka lie bhi hai😲

continue soon...

eagerly waiting yar...!! biting off my nails in tension ki aage kya hoga...!!!!

update very very very soonish...!!!samjhe ya samjhaun😈

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: -Amri-
My Devil! Welcome😊

Mera story superb hai woh toh pata nahi, but your comment surely is:) I think yours in the longest!!! 😲 😲 😲 comment ki tareef?😆 itna bhi kuch khas ni tha yar😉😳

My response in RED.

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