|| SS :His Last WINTER || Part 13, Page 80 - Page 26

awesome update
with lots of mysteries
Aisha was superb
and Ariya convo was really nice
seems a big trouble on its way
interesting precap
thanks for pm
cont soon

superb update...charlie is suspicious about hadwin...that file will unrevel everything i guess...

i loved ayesha,she is perfect at everything but at the same time weak for her loved ones even arjun, and u framed her so beautifully 👏👏

hats off girl...continue soon and thanks for the pm...

P.S- plz unres ur comment in my story...😊

Vampu Awesome dear Wonderful

Superb
Awesome part
Its thrilling and mysterious
eagerly waiting for the next part
cont soon

manna padega..aisha is a damn strong girl...
sabko acha ullu bana rahi h..
evn i think tht d chief is involved..nai to usko file me itna kya interest hai??
aww..aisha ne ria se milne me arjun ki help ki..
how sweet!!
but ria..hmm..she is right in her way!!
update soon!!

Awssuumm Re Mystery Queen! Intrestingg Precap..Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonzz!!

it was awesome and thrilling update vampu..

Comment on part-1,2,3

The concept was mind blasting n as usual way too mysterious yet so much interesting...!!!!

You have done a complt justice to every character whether that person played a major role or is in just a guest appearance...!!!!

The beginning was picture perfect...Ariya were in relationship n have such decent jobs but thn everything seemed to be shattering btwn thm coz of some earth-shattering revelations...!!!!

Their convo over the breakfast was kinda scary as I guessed wht he wanted to told her...!!! Thn after reading his POV that he was cheating her... I really felt like killing him at that vry moment...!!!!

Thn his encounter with Nadiya n his reaction was way too much confusing...!!!!

Taliya n Riya seemed vry close n shared such a close bond that thy both don't needed words to understand eachother...!!!! This kind of frndshp is vry rare...!!!!

Riya's POV about how their relationship started n progressed was well written...!!!!

Fb related to Arjun n Nadiya were hell shocking n confusing...!!!!

Whm was Arjun talking on the phone...??? Wht do he mean by target...???

OMG Sam was his target...!!!! Wow Nadiya n Sam r married n hv a kid too...!!!

Who is this BH...?????

Awww Riya poured her heart out in front of him n also proposed him for marriage but he vry cruely broke her heart n also left her alone in that chilly weather...!!!

OMG she was cmpltly broke down after that n held herself responsible for their break=up...!!!

Wht the hell is going on...???? Nadiya is Aisha thn why she didn't recognised Arjun...????? Sam knw about her past...!!! How come she is here...????? Wht happened in the past that made her to take such a big step...????? Sam is Arjun's best frnd n Nadiya who was his love is now Aisha n is married to Sam...!!! My head is spinning vry badly...!!! Hell shocking revelations...!!!!!

Loved how Taliya barked on Arjun for whtever he done with Riya...!!!!

OMG Riya got so shattered n Arjun find her in such a horrible state...!!! Thank god he reached there on time otherwise her condition will be worse... Feel so bad for her...!!!!

Loved Taliya concerned for her...she really cared for her a lot just like a big sissy...!!!

The confrontation part btwn Arjun n Taliya was mind blowing..!!

I thought he was seriously worried for Riya n felt guilty for whtever he did to her n that's why supported her n cared for her but nope he did all that just so that he can used her to fulfill his motive...!!! His love That's really disguisting...!!!!

Taliya's convo with her boss was rather intriguing...!!!!

Who was Sam talking to n why didn't he wanted him to call while he is at home...?????

I really don't have words to describe Arjun's POV... She trusted her so much but he was playing with her felings all this while...!!!!!!

OMG Aisha suspected Sam n checked his files n cell n find a map n got suspicious about it...!!!!

Who r those two men...n Indian man which thy were talking about is Sam..????? OMG thy have the footage of Arjun n Aisha...!!! Wow thy also knw Arjun...!!! Wht were thy planning about Samjun...????

Wow he was hell confused about Sam's involvement in n I m confused about his...Is he really a spy or there is something more to it...????? So finally he decided to have a talk with Sam... N there Aisha got the call that Sam's life in danger... wht the thy all r in such a mess...!!!

Riya was shocked out of her wits whn she knw the truth about Arjun...!!!!

OMG FBI chief shot Arjun n thn there was a blast in which Riya aslo got hurt...!!! Wht the hell is going on man...!!!!

Awww Aisha was continuously pleading to the hospital staff to save Arjun whereas Taaliya was barking on thm to do the same for Riya...!!! Loved both their concerned for Arjun n Riya respectively...!!

FB was quite frightening... everything was messed up beyond hope...!!!!!

Wow head of the commandos is C.K. Patil...Is is Chnadrakanth aka Chotu...?????

I don't get this...If he is that much important...thn why did he shot him...???? Can't he think that before..????

Sam seemed damn confused about the recent happenings whn officers put him behind bars...!!!!

FB related to Samjun academy days n their friendship was fantastic...!!!!

Wht made Arjun resigned frm IAF n sounded a bit worried n thn he disappeared just like that...?????

Loved Sam's interrogation by Charlie... he seemed so much irritated by his replies...!!!!

Aisha n Shaan segment was so sweet...!!!! Wow Saakshi is also there n she is Aisha's frnd n take care of Shaan until this matter is resolved...!!!!!

Who is that boss... n why is he playing with their lives...??????

Hats off to you dr for such a intriguing concept...!!!!!!

thanx for pm...n extremly sorry for so so so late reply...!!!!

Will comment on rest of the parts soon...!!!!!

awwwsssmmm part
amazing...
loved it
cont sooon
thanks for PM