|| SS :His Last WINTER || Part 13, Page 80 - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

Strangely the story left me very breathless😕You have described the tension & nervousness of the three characters so well👏

Yeh kya locha hai?Ash is Nadiya is Ash! How come Arjun does not know his sweetheart is married to his best friend for five years? Sam knows about Nadiya then he must know about Arjun also na?

What happened to Riya? Oh!Kitna tension wala story hai.Cant wait to know what happened to Ri.Hope Arjun realises Nadiya/Aisha is lost to him forever & he should accept Riya.

Please update soon!

Superbly written👍🏼

P.S: Will u believe I was looking at A winter night pictures on the NET.Snow, warm cottage, fire and all.And here u r with a Winter Story😳

aww thanks a lott zuby 🤗
yes that was actually shock for me! I have never written this much locha wala chapter
but that was the biggest mystery. And also it would be a story about national security and so much confidential 😉
so the real thrill will be in next part. 😛
and i will answer all your question!

Really! I just love surfing such images. I just love snow, and snow filled vally n all that!!

I am glad that you liked it.
And about Riya!! Never now, what shock is waiting for her!! And for aisha now!😉

thanks again

Originally posted by: princess_pari

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">hey vampu...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">nice story i must say...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">i have not read most recent updates of stories made by you...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">apni GA ko maaf karegi naa??!!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">aaj bhi dekh i am online from morning but active now...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">well...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">coming to this story, i loved the way you wrote the turmoil in riya arjun and aisha o i can say nadia???</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">i am very much curious to know the rest of the story..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">continue soon hon...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">PS: who in this forum does not like your work VQ????😉sab aapke bade phan he ji...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">teri</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">GA😳</font>

aweeii meri Golden angel🤗
why sorry re? I can understand! Studies🤢..but abhi college elections hai toh i ma little free.

Aww i am glad you liked this piece!!
Hun!! I know abot phans😆

ankita hugs
so locha in d os
shayad thoda epi ka asar h lol
well very beautifully
described d emotions of ariya
n ya wat dis aish is nadiya n nadiya is aish lol
superb story
lovely
ps. i really don't know i m ur fan or not
but love ur honesty
u r gem of a person
so keep up d gud work
no grudges ever
uptto me right ?
like button on strike..

tht was an awsm part..
beautifully portrayed!!
omg..arjun was playin with ria??
but why??
another shck...Nadiya...
Aisha..arjun's love...
was sam's wife..
arjun ko kuch zyada hi shocks mil rhe h!!
omg...
ria ne kuch ulta sidha to ni kia na??
taliya..u bttr strangle hm!!

Originally posted by: Leki

Arrrgghhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what is this?????!!!!

update tha 😕
don't tell me you will lobb me

Thanks for pm
The story is tooo good
Ariya already in reation
Arjun loves nadiya and broke relation with ria
nadiya trned toayesha is now wife of sam arjuns best freind
Arjun gets a call about ria
I swear if a person gets tese many shocks on one day he wil surely die
Precap is very excitingplz update soon

Originally posted by: Payal_156

ankita hugs
so locha in d os
shayad thoda epi ka asar h lol
well very beautifully
described d emotions of ariya
n ya wat dis aish is nadiya n nadiya is aish lol
superb story
lovely
ps. i really don't know i m ur fan or not
but love ur honesty
u r gem of a person
so keep up d gud work
no grudges ever
uptto me right ?
like button on strike..

didu 🤗

sach mai show ka i asar hai! Next week remember

thanks for the complement 😳

no never! Wht was there is now cleared! I am more relived now. Thank you for that. 😳
😃

thanks again!

This like button i tell u 🥱
kaam ke time hi kaam nhi aata

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

tht was an awsm part..
beautifully portrayed!!
omg..arjun was playin with ria??
but why??
another shck...Nadiya...
Aisha..arjun's love...
was sam's wife..
arjun ko kuch zyada hi shocks mil rhe h!!
omg...
ria ne kuch ulta sidha to ni kia na??
taliya..u bttr strangle hm!!

yup he was cheating on her
bt why ye baad mai pata chalega!
Exactly, agar mai taliya hoti toh kar deti 😡
pyaar ka mara! Arjun! Kafi shocks lage hain usse
thanks ishita! 😳

@sony

hmm! Ek aadmi din mai itne shocks nhi jhel payega! But arjun ji mentally bahaut jada s trong hai!
Aage aage dekho kya hota hai!


@zubiya

thanks dear.

@srividhya
thanks.