Ariya FF: Pyar sirf dard deti hai....!!! updt on pg40 on 24/4/14

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Pinky pan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
hie dear
awesome cs and prologue.
so riya is avoiding arjun.
continue soon.
and please pm me when you update

thnkew dear m glad dat u luv d prol n yaa will cs n if u wnt pm plz send me a buddy req dat wld b easy to pm u

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Pinky pan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Jorja
Awesome prologue [BR]Cont soon

thnx dear n will soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wow a wonderful concept

can't wait and plz pm me

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HawasKePujari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

awesome idea dear...pls update soon

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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Vry Interesting prologue dr.

Continue soon.

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Pinky pan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Christeee
wow a wonderful concept
can't wait and plz pm me

thmx dear m glad dat u luvd it n yaa plz send me a buddy req to get pm plz as dat wld b easy 4 me k

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Pinky pan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
awesome idea dear...pls update soon

thnx a lot dear n yaa will cs

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Pinky pan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Aks13
Vry Interesting prologue dr.
Continue soon.

thnkew n yaa will surely cs

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Sumbul Qaiser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

first welcome to AF
wow one more Ariya fan is increased
Nice prologue
Continue soon

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Pinky pan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Chp 1

morning 9:00am in etf

It was a normal day in etf no case till now so every1 is busy wid der own work, rathod as usual sitting wid a file n luking aisha 4rm corner of his eyes & aisha doing her paper work n having glances at sam n blushing where as arjun too sitting with a file n sipping his fav cutting chai n r choree is busy chatting n waiting 4 riya as she has nt arrived yet

shree: yaar chotu yeh ri humesha late kyun aati hai

chotu: are yaar tu jaanta hai na madam ko samajhseva se fursat hi nhi milti hogi isliye humesha late

shree: haan yaar yeh toh ri8 hai par kuch bhi bol humari ri hai badi helpful sabki help karti firti hai par yeh humare khadoos bosses ko kaun samjhaye daant toh pakka padhegi ri ko dekh lena

chotu: haan yaar iss samjhe yaa samjhaun aur dammit se toh bhagwaan hi bachaye aaj ri ko

shree: hmmm

bt dey wer unaware dat der samjhe yaa samjhaun was listening 2 der tlks 1stly bcoz it was related 2 riya n 2ndly bcoz he was unable 2 ignore der tlks n by listening dis der was a small smirk on his face which he was hidding bhind his poker face n was desperately waiting 2 hv a glimpse of riya as his dy never starts widout hving a glance at her face.

He was thinkng abt riya n she entered d same time breathing heavily as she was running 2 get less scolding 4rm her 2 khadoos bosses.

Choree saw her n signald her all d bst n she lukd at arjun who seemed dat he din't saw her bt at real he was lukng at her 4rm corner of his eyes riya was thnkng

riya: hey bhagwaan aaj bacha lena plz plz plz mein subha subha marna nhi chahti plz

Den rathod saw her n den luk at his watch n yells

rathod: yeh kya hai riya aaj phir late...dammit ! tum karti kya rehti ho??? n she fumbled

riya: vo...sir...vo mein vo

arjun: use apne samajhseva se fursat ho tab offc time pe aayegi nah rathod !

By listening dis choree's n riya's eyes poped out den choree lukd at riya n she was glaringb at dem coz she knew dat dey must hv only said dis n arjun might hv heard it n den riya thght

riya: yeh arjun sir nah jab dekho mujhe taunt hi marte rehte hai pyaar se baat nhi kar skte kya sadu...!

arjun: agr mann mein badhbadana ho gya ho toh aakar beth skti ho n by listening dis riya was hell shocked

riya: yeh mann ki baatein bhi padh sktein h kya???
n on d other hand arjun was njoying lukng at her expressions
riya came out of d shock n came n sat between choree n said

riya: sry rathod sir sru arjun sir (wid apuppy dog face)

rathod: its okagle baar se dhyaan rakhna all ri8?

riya: ji sir (wid a cute smile)

n den choree started

shree: aaj toh baal baal bach gai ri vsrns ssj toh pakka teri band bajhti

riya: haan yaar bach gai

chotu: vaise rti aaj kis vajha se late hui? n riya was going to say d reason bt at d same time

rathod's phn rang n dey got a case n he ordered dem to leave 4 d case

riya: baadme batati vaise koi khass reason toh h nhi par baaki sab badme batati hun ab chalo varna teeno marenge

choree: haan chal n dey left 4 d crime scene

I knw its not dat interesting bt it was jst d start so thgth of shwng der (etfians) bond's wid each other sry if not leave up to d expectations bt nxt time will try n giv a better n a long updt n sry if der's ne spelling mistake n yaa whoever wnts pm plz send me a buddy request n yaa plz do cmmt n like as it means a lot to me n yaa dat wld decide d nxt part's updt k

thnkew

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