Ariya FF: Pyar sirf dard deti hai....!!! updt on pg40 on 24/4/14 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
rely nice start
do continue soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
woow amazing..

chroee was damm good..


and arjun could read hearts and minds both
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
it was awesome, blossom and amazing update dear.
loved sasha stealing glances each other.
Shree and chotu talk was so funny.
and arjun listen this and smriks.
omg arjun is waiting for riya.
finally riya come.
and arjun is stealing glances at her.
rathore scold riya and arjun also.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept Great update Love it Continue soon My like botton is not working . I don't know how to sent buddy request . If possible then pls pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
nice starting
hoping for great update
plz do pm me when u update next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
nice start..
great update :)
update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hiee guys i was really getting bored wid d paper wrk in d offc so thght of contin my nxt part so i wrote dis part in d offc so if der's ne mistake or not leave up 2 d expetns den m really sry so here's d nxt part n thnx alot 4 all ur likes n cmmts its really very special 2 me thnk u n sry cnt rly every1 personally nxt time will try 2 n yaa sry 4 d spelling mistake


Chp 2
continue...

dey went 4 d case n der dey wer busy wid der wrk. rathod n arjun wer tlking to d inspector shree n liza wer busy wid d dead body, chotu n aisha went to enquire others present der n riya was speaking to mr.rahul who 1st saw d girls dead body bt he was concentratng more on riya rather den her qstns n arjun was getting annoyed by it as riya ws also busy happily chatting wid him


riya: hello mr.rahul so aapne sab se pehle yeh body dekhi n police ko infrm kiya ri8?


rahul: ji actually mein yahaan roz subha jogging k liye aata hun toh aaj bhi aaya n tab mujhe yeh body dikhi


riya: ok toh aapne yaha body ke pass kisi aur ko dekha yaa suna ho?


rahul: ji nhi woh kya h nah mein logon ki baaton mein zyada dhyaan nhi deta mera sara concentration toh apni jogging pe hota h as u knw ki aaj kal ladkiyaan ladko ki fitness dekh kar hi line deti h


riya: excuse me...? aap kehna kya chahtein h ki hum ladkiyaan sirf ladko ki body dekhti h
(as u all knw ki humari ri ladkiyon k baare mein kuch nhi sun sakti toh turaant jawaab diya bt poor she, she din't knew ki arjun was not happy wid her tlking to sum other guy dat to wid a handsum 1)


rahul: ji nhi nhi mein sabki baat nhi kar rha hun aap jaisi beautiful ladki ki toh bilkul bhi nhi u knw aap toh police officer lgti bhi nhi h model lgti h (yeh sunkar riya naa chahte hue bhi smile n blush krti h aur arjun aur gussa ho jata h)

riya: aap baatein banane mein bahut expert h mr.rahul bt kahi iss case mein toh baatein nhi bana rhe coz agr aisa hua so it won't b gud 4 u


rahul: are nhi nhi ms.riya mein khubsurat ladkiyon se jhoot nhi bolta
dats wen arjun came n heard d last line actually he was keeping an eye on riya 4 a long time so he left rathod n came 2 dem wen it was byond his tolerance level n said rudely


arjun: riya puch taach ho gai?


riya: yes sir


arjun: so chale sab humara wait kar rhe honge n mr.rahul thnk u agr zarurat padi toh fir milenge (bit rudely)


rahul: sure sir (confused)


n den dey left...rathod had send shree n chotu 4 sum wrk n liza went 4 doing d autopsy so it was just our couples left in bth d suv's in 1 of d suv's ariya n in d other raesha


in raesha's car


ayesha: sir aapko kya lgta h kim iss case mein suspect kaun ho skta h?
rathod: pata nhi ayesha koi bhi ho skta h yaa toh uss ladki k jaan pehchaan vale ho skte h yaa woh jo usse bahut nafrat karta ho...!


ayesha: ji sir vaise yeh nafrat bhi kitni ajeeb hoti h naa kya kya karvati h...!


rathod: kyun pyaar bhi toh ajeeb hota h woh bhi kuch bhi karvati h


ayesha: sir...(bit hesitant)


rathod: hmm


ayesha: sir kya aapne kabhi kisi se pyaar kiya h?


(rathod luks at her n a small smile playing on his lips)
rathod: abhi tak toh nhi (ayesha feels sad) bt shayad ab ho jaye (n luk at her wid luv n ayesha blushes bcoz of his intense gaze) aur tumhe?

ayesha: ji...? (rathod raises his eyebrow as if askng her to answer) ji mujhe bhi nhi par kya pata ab ho jaye ( n blush which makes rathod smile as well)
n aft dat small convo dey reach etf offc feeling happy abt each others feelings on d other hand


in ariya's car


arjun is very angry n driving d car harsly wer as riya knws der's sumthng wrng coz arjun is very angry so she gathers herself n speaks


riya: umm...sir...kya hua???
bt arjun keeps quite n keeps driving wer as riya gets more distrubd...at last dey reach etf n riya cnt hold more so she ask's


riya: kya hua sir aap thik toh h???

ab arjun aur chup nhi reh pata n gusse mein gaadi se nikal kar riya ki side darvaje ki taraf jaakar pulls her out n pins her to d car betwn his hands n yells


arjun: how dare u riya...!


riya(confused n scared): sir meine kya kiya?


arjun (yells more loudly): kya kiya? tum uss rahul k saath itni kya baatein kar rhi thi...?


riya: sir mein toh puch taach kar rho thi aur (bt arjun stops her in mid n yells more loudly)


arjun: chup...bilkul chup! u knw wht...tum jaisi lahparvah ladki meine aaj tak nhi dekhi tumhe toh etf mein hona hi nhi chahiye tha tum research desk vapas kyun nhi chali jaati? vaise bhi tumhare yahan hone se yaa naa hone se kisi ko koi faraq nhi padhta...!


riya: ( tears continuously flowing 4rm her eyes shez really hurt by arjun's wrds coz she don't even knw d reason 4 his yelling) sir...!


arjun: leave...!


riya: bt sir...!


arjun: (yells) i said leave...!!!


riya gets scared n strtd crying very badly n rushes inside d etf bldg


aft riya left arjun bang's his hand on d car which hurts him very badly bt not more den riya's tears, he yells on her coz he wanted to release his frustation of seeing riya wid sum other guy bt he knws dat he has hurted her n now its hurting him more his eyes also gets moist n says


arjun: m sry riya...m sry dat i hurted u bt agr tum mere kareeb aaogi toh tumhe sirf takleef hogi isliye plz mujhse nafrat karo...hate me plz riya hate me

whereas riya in her cabin crying badly n saying


riya: kyun sir kyun aap humesha mujhse naraaz hote h kyun...kyun aap k mujhe itne hurt karne k baad bhi mein aapko bhul nhi paati kyun...?


arjun: kyun mein chaah kar bhi tumse mohabbat nhi kar pata


riya: kyun mein chaah kar bhi aapse nafrat nhi kar paati...?

( i knw dis lines r copied 4rm IPKKND's show bt kya karun its my fav show n dialg's...so thgth to put it in my ff hope arshi fans don't mind...sry ) n bth gets clouded wid each other's thgths.


{ piu }


Edited by piupan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awesome update dear.
loved rahul and riya talking but arjun doesnt like this.
he becomes angry.
loved sasha talk.
kuch kuch ho raha hai.
omg arjun ne riya ko kitna suna diya.
loved there last dialog.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Amazing update dr.

Loved the convo of Riya n Rahul.

OMG he was flirting with her.

Wow Arjun felt jealous coz of that.

Awww Samsha's convo in the car was so sweet.

Wht the !!!!! Arjun vented out all his frustration on Riya.

Ht doesn't he accepted that he loved her so much?????

Aaarrgghhh Arjun made her cry.

Whts wrong with him??????

Their MV was really emotional.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Awesome...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊

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