PYaar Ka DArd--15 DAYS OF SEPARATION n LOVE last - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb yar...
very beautifully written...
loved sweet shana moments...
their talks were lovely...
and the way they fed each other awww...
finally everything is alright...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
atlast donon ka patch up hogaya...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely!!!!
awww patch up...after so much pain now they are back together...
Thank U for such a lovely update :)
You have written it very well...hats off...
Loved all Shana moments...
Aww they feed each other...
The best part is that they feel each other pain so well...loved the way U wrote that part in the story...
Waiting for A blasting epilogue...
573339 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update :) loved it
shaleen and sana's scenes were lovely :)
awww he kissed her wound <3
and then he kissed her on her cheek :)
awww she was sitting in his lap :)
love the way they were feeding each other <3
loved their conversation :)
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally their patch up...

loved their moments...


they feed eachother.. she sits in his lap..


want an hot epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry I can't hit boton it show some errors

Awesome,fantastic,fab,wonderful


Happy sha. Said something to sana

Really feel bad tht they hurt ech other

Thanx 4 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aweee

Finally patch up ho gay to dance to banta hai boss

Their movement lovely soswttt

Thanx 4 pm me

Hatts off to u dr

Me fan of u

Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
epilogue:



next day they were supposed to back on set... working...she was in




the kitchen preparing breakfast and lunch for them...




he cme out of the shower and see a brand new blue shirt which




she told she bought for a friend.



Shaleen: babyyy.





Sana: ha kya hua?





Shaleen: do minute ao na yahan.





She goes to the room.





Sana: kya hua?





Shaleen: yeh shirt toh tumne gift karne ke liye li thi na?





Sana: nahi it was always for u.. So lets start our new day of ur life




with ths. u Liked it?





Shaleen: its perfect. Bt size?





Sana: wear it and see. It will be perfect...







(it was a blue shirt.. pic cnt can be uploaded...




he wears it and says:




Shaleen: I love the color and its perfect




Shaleen: want to help?




She smiled and came forward close all the buttons kissed his




cheeks.





Sana: breakfast thanda ho raha hai jaldi ao.




He comes out and she serves.




Shaleen: kaisa lag raha hoon?




Sana: bohoot bohot achche.




Shaleen: bas aaj toh koi fida ho hi jayega.



Sana: agar bhul gaye na toh remember toti puti hi sahi shooting




ati hai mujhe.




Shaleen: wooow matlab abhi se warning.




Sana: strict warning. Yahan wahan dekha bhi toh khair nahi. Yaad



hai kya punishment decide ki thi maine?




Shaleen: nahi room ke bahar nahi sona.




Sana: so behave urself and be a good boy. Only my boy get it.




Shaleen: absolutely.




For ever and ever




they reach the set... bt today they weren't sad..




again they were happy, giggling,joking around. stealing glances...



sending cheezy and lovey dovey messages...


their life was again wat they have always wanted to be... lovely,



happily working together..



This was a 15 days of love and separation. 15 days of their life



they lived made them understand.. that



they are made for each other... made to be with each other for ever ...



and can only survive by having each other by their side..

😃😆http://min.us/luHAXpP6bZEgp


so finally i end this here... hope u all like it... i will miss my story..



hope u all too...



Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such a lovely ending :) loved it
awww riya gifted a shirt to shaleen :)
can literally imagine shaleen in that shirt
loved their conversation <3
finally both of them are together
gonna miss this story so much
thanks for the pm
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
will miss the story ...but a beautiful ending dear

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