PYaar Ka DArd--15 DAYS OF SEPARATION n LOVE last - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
superb update yar...!!!
finally ariya patched up...!!!
their moments were very sweet...!!!
awww they love each other so much...!!!
kiss was hot...!!!
continue soon...!!1
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 7


Shaleen: she is fine. neha thanks u brought us together. Agar tum


sach nahi batati aur agar sana ko kuch ho jata toh.



Neha: thanks mujhe nahi god ko kaho. Yeh unhi ki marze hai tum



dono hamesha saath raho and nw No sad talks anymore. Tum



dono ek saath ho yehi important hai. Waise I m proud of u



shaleen.


and I m really sorry agar mein sana ko break up ka idea nahi deti



toh wooh shayad yeh nahi sochti aur tum dono bhi alag nahi



hote.waise tum kab shift karoge yahan? Sana ko akele nahi chod


sakte she is weak.



Shaleen:abhi toh apne kaha ki no sad talks. I m nt angry with u.


apne jo bhi kaha apni dost ki le yeh kiya. And kahin na kahin is



dorri ne hume yeh ehsaas dila diya ki hum ek doosre ke bina



adhore hai. N well jahan tak mere wapas ane ka sawal hai toh



abhi toh its almost 7. So I think kal hi. Mujhe sab pack karna



padega and kal shoot se chutti bhi leni padegi. I had a day off



today bt I think kal bhi.



Neha: no need I cn stay here for the day bt she will need u in the



night.



Shaleen: neha aap bhi na. chaliye kuch khane ko banate hai sana


ko kya dena hai doc ne kuch bataya,?



Neha: khichdi dene ko kaha hai. And u stay here tonight if u dnt



mind.



Shaleen: I vl stay here dnt worry and u vl please cook khichdi for


us...



Neha: I m started to prepare also u go stay with her.



Shaleen: she hates khichdi. She will shout on me again to eat it.



He goes to the room and finds her sleeping. She had a smile on



her lips and senerity on her face.



Aftr sme time food is ready so neha brings the khichdi.


neha: tum khichdi kahoge?????



Shaleen: mein nahi kahunga toh sana bhi nahi khaigi isliye dnt



worry I cn manage. Ab aap ghar jana chahe toh jaa sakti hai.il do



the rest work.



Neha: I l go nw. kal tumhe kitne baje jana hai?



Shaleen: 10 to 10 ka shift hai bt I vl try and cme soon.



Neha : ok mein aa jaungi 10 . see u then,.



He goes to the room and wakes her up.



Shaleen: jaan utho dinner time.



Sana: uuu



She wakes up rubbing her eyes bt with smile.her reason to live



was back to her.



Sana: khichdi…….. no.. I hate it.



Shaleen: u have to eat it. and if u dnt want to eat it again. Dnt do


such things then.



He saw the wound and he took her wrist and kissed it slowly.



Tears started to roll down his eyes.



Sana: baby mein thik hoon. please ro mat.



Shaleen: hw could u even think of hurting ur self like ths. Dnt u



knw hw much u mean to me?



Sana: I m sorry jaan. Bt u didn't even try to convince me once


before leaving. Why?



Shaleen: I promised I would never force u for anythng neither I




forced for beginning this relationship so hw would I do it even if u



wanted to end the relationship



Sana: man of ur words? Bt remember u are only my man and I m



only yours. And listen lets start smethng new. Whenever I do


smethg wrong ul tell me and if it's a mistake ul scold me even bt.



Shaleen: bt wat?



Sana: thoda dhere se daanta k. tumne itni zor se mujhe slap kiya.


It hurts.



He kissed her on the cheek where he slapped her.


Shaleen: sorry baby ok cme lets have dinner.



Sana: yahan nahi.



Shaleen: toh kahan?



Sana: tumhari goodi mein.



She gets up and sits in his lap and feeds him the first bite.



Sana: thik se khao itne dino se pata nahi kya khaya hoga.



She sees his trashed hand and understands hw he gt hurt.



Sana: bohot dukha tha yeh.



Shaleen: haa wooh thik se ata nahi na...waise kafi halki ho gai ho



tum.




sana: matlab mein moti thi pehle??? haan????




shaleen:(wooh toh gaud mein uthay uski ko pata chale),,,nahi



nahi mein aise hi keh raha tha,...



Sana: tum yahan kab aoge?



Shaleen: kal aa jaunga. Bt shoot hai 10 to 10 so neha will be here



wid u. I told her i vl take leave bt she told that she woud be here.


So my dear tk care of ur food and medicines mujhe ake shikayat


nahi chahhiye.



sana:okkk



Both feed eachother and he cleans the kitchen. He comes to the


room and see that she is thinking smethng and smiling.



Shaleen: kya soch rahi hoo?



Sana: bas aise hi sab kuch kitna badal jata hai ek hi pal mein. Uss



ek pal mein meri akhon ke saamne hamare sare pal aa gaye the.



Shaleen: mein jab tumhe aise dekha toh jaise……….. he becomes


teary and she wipes his tears.



Sana: I promise u I wont let anythng affect our relationshp nthng .

precap: epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Read all story from one
to all ...
it was beautifuly
written..
lv shaleen n sana..
both suffer lot
n last their patchup grate...
waiting foe epilouge...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Read all.
It was awesome
fantastic fabulous
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Nice n sweet update dr.

Finally thy r together.

Loved Shaa's care n concern for her.

Loved their convo.

Waiting for epilogue.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
lovely update.. Thanks for pms..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
such an emotional update that too on shana...


loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Wow...
Such a sweet update...
Loved it a lot.
Shana scenes were beautiful nd lovely.
Brought tears in my eyes...
Waiting for the epilogue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Awesome update...so finaly shana are happy and together...loved it...shaleen will be shifting with sana...update epilogue soon...thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part thanks for pm plz cont soon

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