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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
confusing but nice one...!!!!'
what is a pregnant doing buying papaya..??
and how did she bend to take the hanky...???
and loved Ariya FB
haha Riya entry was seriously funny...skin color haha!!!!
now Arjun in fix about his color haha!!!!!!
nice update!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
wow
lovely update

awww...arjun misses riya so much...

feeling bad for him...

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
awesome. ..
papaya...omg!!!
dark complexion...
awesome. ..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
love Ariya Fb scene, i miss Riya too.
please bring her back
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

that Lady is not pregnant... and I think I know who she is... If I'm right..

PAPAYA FOR BABIES?! Aunty... Dimaag to theek hai na.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
awsum update...
ariya fb was lovely...
omg she actually slapped him to make him stop talking😆
and that dark color scene😆
looks like the pregnant lady isn't pregnant... she doen't have any knowledge about what is good and what is bad... is she the killer???
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
nice update
ariya fb was so nice😳 hehe riya naughty girl😆
samjun convo was nice
omg arjun is worried abt his skin colour great🤣
something really fishy with that pregnant lady
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Part 8:

Arjun goes into his room freshens and he thinks about the pregnant lady and sleeps

In sleep he gets the day when he proposed ria and she left him

Arjun shouts ria's name and gets up

The whole night he spends remembering his moments with her

At midnight at nearly 2 clock he sleeps

He wakes up at 5 and does his daily routine

He opens the alamara and sees ria's photo talks to it and opens the dairy to read

Dear arjun

Aaj mein bahoth kush hoon for the first time you took me to the date for the beach you know I saw a very cute incident their one father became mother

Arjun:kya

Nahi samjha na mein samjhathi hoon waha ek ladki aya with a child I thought she was her mother suddenly the child started crying for her father then that lady took all the wig and I was surprised to see that the girl is actually a man and who bacha papa kehkar vusko hug kiya mujhe nahi batha who ye sab kyun kiya but the father daughter bonding was cute batha nahi tum hamari bache keliye kya banthi ho ok bye arju

Arjuun goes for jogging and came to office

They discussed about the case

Sam:ok guys any clues

Sakshi:sir I think the watchman is behind all this or any person whom he knew

Arjun:ho saktha hain lekin vus samay agar koi bhi ladka aya then any of the girl may have seen but no one saw him so so

Arjun again sees imaginary ria

Ria:kya arju aaj apki dimag mein kuch nahi choot raha hain haan mein apki itni clues diya chalo aur dethi hoon arjun kabhi bhi aurath ki kabilyath par shak nahi karna kahi who aurath ho ya aurath dikne wali mard

Arjun:the man can come in a disguise like a women

Shree:sir I checked register and I saw no one came to meet the girl before murder

Arjun:teke call the pregnant lady to the office

Chotu:yes sir

pregnant lady came

Arjun saw the pregnant lady he went near her and saw top to bottom

arjun goes near sakshi and tells something in her ear

sakshi and liza took her to interrogation room she is sweating a lot

after some time liza came

liza:sir she is not pregnant I checked her pulse

arjun goes into interrogation room and pulls the girls hair the wigs come off

everyone is shocked

arjun:chalo abh sach sach bathao

the boy is frightened and blurts out the truth

boy:sir maaf karo mujhse galthi hogayi I loved the girl she said no I gave kaka some mony he made me enter in disguise when I went inside I saw her sleeping then I put cloropham and raped her so that after I can threaten her to marry me but she died so I entered into hostel next day as a women in disguise so that no one can have a chance to doubt but I don't know how you came to know

arjun bet him and went outside again everyone is surprised by his intelligence

sameer:good job arjun

arjun:mujhe nahi vusko bol wohi solve kiya case

sameer wants to divert his mood from ria

sam:who sab chod aur bata tumhe kaise patha ki who ek ladka hain

arjun tells about the bending for kerchief and papay incident then

arjun:aur who bhi vusi spray use kartha hain jo riyu ne mujhe gift kit hi

days are passing

Ayesha deliverd a baby boy and she is still in rajasthan

Arjun still imagines ria in her dairy

Sameer trie hard to change but he failed

i know i solved the case in very simple way what to do i dont get any ideas in crime scenes and my story is normal love story so instead of focusing on crime i wanted to focus on ariya's love

thankyou for reading

hope the part is nice and hit like button or comment for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice dear... Loved it.. Thanks for pms..
Edited by unishaz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Fab job
Diary sai imagine karvana aur depict it is difficult task
Hatts of to u dr
Update is awesome,brilliant,amazing dr
Thanx 4 pm me such wonderful work
Mishti

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