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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum concept and cs...
continue soon... eagerly waiting for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Looking forward to reading it!
Continue soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prologue , character sketch i liked this,
waiting , continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start n cs.. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-1
We can see a room whose walls are white n the color other than was blue.. Other colors r dull in there.. We see many equipment n machines r there n in the middle of the room, we see a figure lying lifeless n dull many wires r attached to show it alive but lifeless.. The 4 persons surrounding her r helpless n very much hopeful that one day she will open her eyes n show them her beautiful dimple smile that once brightened their life.. Whoever knew her once, couldn't believe the jovial n bubbly girl who couldn't keep quiet more than a minutes is battling for her life n is still from 2 months.. Though these 4 person were much differ in every thing came together well due to her.. Her friends had tears seeing her like that n others two were no less.. The most effected was her love for whom she could do anything that relieves his pain.. He was in tears but she was not in her sense to go to him n console him.. She could sense their pain.. She wants to console them n gather them in her arm but her each n every cell of body refused to obey her emotional mind.. She wants to be there with them but was helpless..
Samjun n choree came to hospital n specially this ward because their life, their joy, their strength, their bond, their unity, their reason to come together was living a lifeless life which is no less than a death.. They were helpless to see her so quiet n dull caged in 4 walls for 2 months who can't stand hospitals environment.. She brought the light in their dull life.. She spread all the happiness n in return never asked anything.. Even her 'samjhe ya... Samjhau' was missing her jovial aura.. Her aura was itself very alluring that automatically brought relief n a small smile on everyone's face.. All went to her one by one n kissed on her forehead n were moving away.. When arjun went to her he hold hern said, 'jaldi wapas ajao' n kissed her hand n was about to move when he felt her grip on his hand n he saw one sign that she is going to be back soon..he motioned other to see it n all had happy tears in their eyes.. Shree hurriedly went to doctor n said the news.. Doctor came n gave them news that it was good sign.. She could n feel them.. If the continue to talk with her she will start responding.. All sighed in relief.. All went to etf in happy mood..
The two ladies were stunned to see them coming together n happy as well.. They were curious to know the reason but remain mum so that their akdu boss don't blast on them.. They had seen them happy earlier too but today their happiness seemed to be genuine n day seemed to be easier for duo.. They were surprised to see akdu lost in thought n smiling as which was unusual.. Ayesha had always a curiosity to know arjun.. His aloof behavior always attracted her.. From the time she joined etf she had been face to face with his different facet.. The more she got to know the more curious she became..
Whereas arjun was away from such things.. He always was occupied by work n riya's thought.. He was always a loner but riya brought the real him in those days when she was with them.. He loved to be left alone as he had not much friends due to his short-temper.. But riya never gave up.. Whenever all indulge themselves in chatting in free time, he would simply choose to sit in a corner sit but riya anyhow made him be with them n engross him in the topic as well.. He remained so even after many attempt.. One day riya was furious of his behavior n thought to give his own medicine..

Hey don't be confused why i wrote about riya in this ending line of this part as i said earlier arjun was lost in his thought n m describing him as an individual.. His behavior n what made him fall for her..
Precap-past memories..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice dear
luv it
continue soon
thnx for pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...good start😊 Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow wow wow wow...

All 4men love riya so much...she is really precious for them...

Hey this update is really beautiful...I just imagin it...

Riya in that room and arjun lost in her thought...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it...
continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice, simple n sweet. dr.

loved it .

thanks for pm.

continue soon.

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