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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
So ye sab natak tha.
Bt riya ne arjun ko accha samjhaya..
And love it a lot.
Thnx fr pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: madmadona

awesome update
riya's silence treatment was nice & her speech after that
wow arjun itne saare questions in a go great
glad arjun took her words seriously & tries his level best
ayesha is curiosity to know abt arjun's life poor her
cont soon


Thanks for loving my work.. Keep commenting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

So ye sab natak tha.
Bt riya ne arjun ko accha samjhaya..
And love it a lot.
Thnx fr pm.


I mentioned earlier n yes it was n thanks for comment..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Awesome update...continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
sorry guyz for not updating it for long.. here u go:
The knock on the cabin's door brought him out of memories that carried the happy moments.. He glanced at clock n saw it was time to go back n to visit hospital so he asked the person to get in.. He was surprised to see shree there n asked what's the matter n he said that there was a call from hospital n they said riya was moving her fingers n she moved eyelids too.. That was the happiest moment for him.. He hurried n they went to hospital n doc informed them that she will be gaining her consciousness soon.. All the boys were rejoicing to hear that.. They shared group hug n were having tears in their eyes.. They were waiting for her to gain consciousness soon.. It was really torture to see her so dull n lifeless.. The person who used to be definition of chirpiness n liveliness of the team was numb was creating havoc in their life.. They remember her non stop chatter n banters with them.. When she went silent means the storm that followed silence.. They were used to her antics.. She couldn't stay stably at a place.. Arjun who never spoke other than duties too use to speak to her casually.. Whenever she is upset it seems that day was not good enough for him.. HIs moods depends on her behavior.. They missed her coffee.. They missed each n every thing related to her..
They went to meet her n spoke to her n went back home to start a new with new hopes.. Next day was usual to them but something was unusual.. The ever angry bosses were cool n were not on neck to neck discussion.. They were handling matters coolly.. During that case Aisha uttered those statistics that reminded them of riya as she was named as miss statistics by her samjhe ya samjhaun.. They had sparkle in their eyes listening to it n it was not missed by Aisha as well.. She seems to confuse so arjun recovered easily n said to Aisha, 'tum koi statistics ki teacher ho jo apni bekar ki theory use kar rahi ho.. Agar itna hi statistics ka shauq hai to jao research desk aur karo data aur statistic collect aur dusro ka kam mat badhao..' n went away.. Aisha was stunned to hear that.. while others knew he didn't like others using it.. He liked it only from riya's mouth.. He though showed it irritated him but they knew better it was pretence.. he use to wait for her statistical comment on the case they got.. If no statistics meant trouble to them.. hearing it after long time from some other made him behave so..
Arjun went to his cabin n he remembered how they met on their first case in etf.. How she used to give her statistical analysis on each n every case.. Though it bothered him initially but eventually got used to it.. He always seconded her in opinion.. her statistics also usually helped them solve the cases.. Whenever he criticized her statistics she would crib n make faces on him n he found it cute n lovable.. He would sometime do it intentionally to see her reaction.. If she didn't gave any he would pester her to do so n eventually she wouldn't disappoint him.. he was not angry on Aisha but the memories that flooded had brought an emotional side at that moment so he behaved that way.. he was thinking, 'u will be here soon miss statistics.. n I will see to it..' n later joined all n solved the case.. Aisha thought to apologize if she did mistake n did n he said it's ok..
Aisha was left in thoughts, what made him react so?? what she did?? what was her mistake so on?? but didn't voiced out.. She did her work efficiently n went home thinking about todays occurring n had confused mind..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Yippieee me first.

Thanks for updating dr.

Awesome update dr.

Waaooo their is some movements in Riya's body. That's great.

Yeeyyy She will get conscious soon.

Awww Aisha's statistical data reminded thm of Riya.

Loved it!!!!!!

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.
Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Awesomeee Update...Continuee Soon..Thanxx fr d pm..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
yayy so riya is good and arjun missing his miss statistics
plz update jaldi jaldi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
interesting concept... so Riya ke hosh mein aane ke baad Riya-Arjun-Aisha ka love triangle hoga kya ? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
AWESOME STORY

read all 3 parts

riya in coma 😒

arjun missing her 😭

riya shows improvement soon she will be out of coma

aisha statistics remind them of riya

update soon

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