SS Arakshi: You belong with me..Part 5. 13/6 Pg.26 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Here I am behna, finally.🤗

Never fear when I am here.😉😆

Okay enough of my drama queen act, unlike some I don't enjoy it as much but its fun for few seconds.🤣


First of all I am so glad you are making this little longer than expected, not that I don't like your one shots but I always wish for them to be long with lots and lots of romance which I have come to associate with your name. Perfect name for the romantic gal in you.😉

I loved this part and didn't think it was filler at all. So he does feel something but hasn't acknowledged this to himself even, but the thought of something happening to her does makes him restless, well well, I am glad Emma took it upon herself to probe him, at least now he will be much prepared to face his feelings when she finally lands in India and show up in front of him.

I know it is my wishful thinking but I wouldn't mind if his doormat feelings are live and kicking by the time she show up so that he could carry her off into the sunset to live happily after. (Please ignore this, I am losing it.😃)

Anyway as I was saying at least now he has inkling of what she may be feeling so he will act accordingly and of course I have full confidence in your ACP Rawte.😉 More than that I have full confidence in the romantic you to do justice to this story and leave us all with a satisfied smiles.🤗


P.S. I repeat myself, listen to your heart and follow your instincts, you will never go wrong.

P.S.S. Doc is a very lucky guy in more than one way.😉
Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Awesome parts! loved how her friend and her husband is so very concerned about her and take this initiative to talk to Arjun

yeah it was kind of filler but as u said it was much required...

Gave an insight into both the sides of the story..
both miss each other...but akdu toh aakhir akdu hi hai

hope he accepts the truth soon...and her return to ETF proves to be lucky for both and their lives together!

cant wait to have her back in ETF!

Cont soon!
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Nice update... So Both miss eachother hmm...

Love Sakshi's friends dey r so concerned for her... continue soon
Edited by Leki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
👏super nice...

this was like introspection of arjun,.,.,.,.

tfw
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
great update
emma is such a sweet friend
hope arjun will now think about sakshi
waiting for the next update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
its a really good story so far
keep going :) :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Nice One gabbar !!!
So now we know both sides of teh story 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
That Was Interesting.. Well Iam Confused Reading 1st Chap... About About Arjun Feelings.. Don't He Have Any For Sakshi.. ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum di
lov it...
me done wid paper 1
phew
yay
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Posted: 12 years ago
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God, I have no idea what you do with me. You know what Avantika you make me love the characters I haven't ever watched or ever had a glimpse of them. To be really honest I want to tell you I din't know about some sakshi anand entering in ETF as in in Arjun. As far as I remember it was from you new collaboration on Arakshi with Shilpa that I went back to the serial that day. You know I wasn't a viewer of Arjun at all. But you made me a hard core fan of Ariya and arjun and ETF. Its through your fiction I loved these characters.

Now, this one is just the best. You are just perfect, bringing up new plots and stories. You are an entertainer. Your language, the way you narrate the story and the way each character is introduced makes me love the story, the plot and more over I see my self falling for the characters. I must say I have started loving Arakshi...

Splendid work dear!!!
Do continue soon , I m waiting way too eagerly.

Dee
Edited by Enchantress - 12 years ago

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