SS Arakshi: You belong with me..Part 5. 13/6 Pg.26 - Page 3

Superb and beautiful...
Waiting to knw abt Arjun's POV...
Sakshi coming back to ETF...
Will her love for Arjun ever be reciprocated?
I hope so.
Thanks for the pm.
Thumbs up.

Plz pm me next part dear :)
It's awesome story...really I loved it :)

Well, my dear Avantika, here I am.

Though I am an odd woman out here, being neither fish nor fowl nor fruit, that is to say neither an Arjunian nor an Arakshian (sounds like an alien from a distant star in the Aries constellation) or a BB, whatever that may be, I have nonetheless read part 1 of this two-parter.

And I wanted to tell you that it is very promising, despite Sakshi's trademark, mandatory sighing and dreaming over ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte's manifold attractions of mind and body, which latter of course include the face, with those oh so deep black eyes. Not, I am glad to note, coal black, just plain old black😉. Oops, that is wrong, I meant hollow eyes, but black, of course.

I was relieved to see that Sakshi still has her pretty feet fairly firm on the ground, and I do hope you will not make her faint at the first sight of him, so that he is forced to catch her in his arms, That hugging scene in Arjun today was so stagy and artificial, but I am sure that, being a far superior writer as compared to the CVs. you will avoid such unconvincing scenes and do much, much better.

So, en avant, and I look forward to Part 2.

Shyamala Aunty

Hey BB's, Arjunians and Arakshi-ans, Me is back with yet another Two-shot on my current favorites! 😉

It's a bit different.. Well, not really.. But anyway.. 😆 This is a two-shot.. And the next part will be posted in a day or two.. 😃😉

And this one as well is dedicated to my lovely BB's.. (B1, you'll know why!) 😉

Hope it makes sense..


PART 1..

Awesome start! Love the song and this story. Can't wait to read the rest! Thanks for the PM!

Well,
I had my eyes totally glued to the screen the whole time.
So well written..
Shakshi grown up in London went to India for studies and ended up in ETF.
A believer in horse and Prince Charming fell in Love with the ever arrogant and ruthless, the one believed to having no-heart type man,
*it was bound to happen anyway*
She wanted Arjun to stop her but he didn't stop her and so she left..
But now she's coming back to India, to Mumbai, to ETF, to him...
Maybe he'll realise her Love for him now..
The phone call may change the situation..
What's she going to tell him?
What does he think about her?
These questions are continuously lingering in my mind..
Curiosity increasing..
It was Awesome..
Loved it..<3 <3
Continue soon..

that was such a beautiful and emotional start :) loved it

An entirely different concept on Arjun-Sakshi. Keeping the show's storyline intact, you have added a past and moreover a painful future. I am really eager to read Arjun's POV. Whether he too misses the lady who had come and then gone. And how he is going to react to her sudden arrival. Hope the phone call works wonders.

loved sakshi's character and arjun was exactly opposite to her

amazing start avantika di😃
i loved the whole concept😃...i cant stop wishing that the cvs build up her character like this on screen too...a Strong,dedicated n ambitious woman!
i loved her POV...so she already is in love with him!
i loved the whole flashback thing😃...really well written😊
umm so sakshi did have an effect on him...n he did mellow down!
n wow so ayesha n rathod are already married...nice!
i loved paul n emma...though not much about them...but seems like the couple shall set things right for sakshi n arjun😊

i think even u r intrigued by the new couple just like me...but the major difference being u write lovely stuff about them n have the talent to do so...n well me i shouldnt even think of writing😛

thank you so much for the PM...will be waiting for the other part!