SS Arakshi: You belong with me..Part 5. 13/6 Pg.26

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Honey Panjwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Hey...

It's awesome loved it

Thx for pm :)::)

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Santhosh Banda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

So.. Its Clear That Arjun Also Fighting His Feelings From Long... Continue Soon.. And No Sad n Heart Wincing Updates Only Light n Romantic Update Please ... Samjhe .. Ya ... Samjhao...

Edited by Santhu.The.King - 12 years ago

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kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

At talst you have decided to make it an SS.

good choice..

see meine bathaya tha na ke you have a good scope on it...

(patting my back) Genius me!!!!

coming to the chapter, its revelation time...

happy to know somewhere Arjun was also missing Sakshi

lovely friend... a good one indeed..

the way you described each type of smile was too good buddy...

come back soon

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Sabia Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

'I think, she's left a part of herself behind, back with you guys...'

Waao, Avantika Aapi...for me, this line is the heart of the update. And yeh, heart se yaad aaya, I think, the part, which Sakshi left in India...is her heart. She left it to Arjun. But it seems, he doesn't even know that. But why?

Update sooon Aapi. I'll be waiting for that answer.

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

yeh kya??? cliff hanger mein chod diya...not fair...

paul and emma are the bffs...so sweet of them to call arjun.

update soon.and again i have to tell u r perfect at writing emotions

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

nice updated
well description of emotions
thanks
continue soon

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ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Amazing update avantika di😊

I wouldnt call this a filler but an important n intense conversation that was so needed!!

I loved the way emma handled the whole conversation..she only spoke that was truly necessary n important for him to know...n by the way she spoke about sakshi she did manage to touch a chord in his heart!!

I really liked how she threw the ball in his court at the end n left him with thinking part as for now...it is really important for him to decide now how he sees all of this!

arjun's point of view did depict that he did have feelings for her n he too missed her deeply...but what is now important is that he needs to clear his head n decide whether he wants this n whether he accepts this or not!

Howmuch ever i may be partial when it comes to arjun but this time it was emma who stole the show😉

N avantika di m really glad u turned this into a ss...it will be fun reading about this marvellous new couple 😊

Continue soon...n thanks a ton for the PM😃

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

hmm you are right i felt it was a filler...

but much needed indeed...i hope arjun opens up his mind and understand his feelings for saakshi... coz after that only he can make saakshi happy ...

will be eagerly waiting for coming parts and not to forget thanks for making it a short story...

nice part

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

The phone call has been made.It was a much needed one.
Shakshi can fit every where due to her friendly behaviour..same goes with ETF
Arjun too misses her...just like the way she does
Arjun heard just half of the conversation.. she had been talking to Shree about him...her Prince Charming!!
He was worried about her...he had been thinking if she had landed herself in yet another trouble.
Shakshi had written about Arjun in her diary.. where's the diary?
Even I want to read it..:p
well written..
It was a great update..
Loved it<3
Glad to know that this OS is gonna be a SS now...
Continue Soon..