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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

are yaar...

ithne jaldi kyu stop kiya??

it was going very good.

I'm not in a stand to comment on seperate chapters...

loved each one of it...

Arjun saving Sree..

Arni's kurbani...

it hurts...

great job girls...👏👏

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Pari its my pleasure to do something wid u re
after exams
all d best..
bt i never want my name in d wrk!!
love u
n we r arjun bro pankhas
claps again 🤗
Enjoy n never forget me
samjhi ya samjhau..
tightly hugs n kiss on ur foreahed
thank u fr tolerating me lol
gn sd tc..!!

di i had fun working with you...
and yes arjun bro's big pankhas😉
i can neva forget you di...
🤗🤗
ab aap samjhi ya...samjhau?!!!!!!😆
i am going now... tata... kal milte hai...muah!!
all the best kaho...kal ka mera exam acche se guzre...😛

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: kunchu
are yaar...
ithne jaldi kyu stop kiya??
it was going very good.
I'm not in a stand to comment on seperate chapters...
loved each one of it...
Arjun saving Sree..
Arni's kurbani...
it hurts...
great job girls...👏👏

we know di...
but planned plot itna hi tha...
thanks for liking our work di...
its actually not just about commenting or liking individual parts...
total no.of views is going at the pace of tortoise...
anyways... we ll be here to bug all with nonsense na... no worries😉
aapke liye🤗

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Pari
all d best dear
do well n rock
keep smiling
love u tc 🤗

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

thnx for pm dear

continue soon

what about rathore ki behan??

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

hi pari n payal🤗... i'm literly sorry yaar i couldnt able to read bcoz of time of lack...😭😭😭...what else i can say...those guys who missed it will never know what they have missed...😭😭😭... roshani bear all the pain...but when arjun put the acid on her leg i was😲😲😲...i know he did all to save the country but phir bhi😭😭😭...roshani was tortured brutually everyday n arjun also bear the pain everyday😭😭😭😭😭... when the roshani n arjun scarficed their lived to save nation i can only proud of them...but y u enede this so soon yaar😭😭😭...well respect ur decision...hope to see u back...with more new concept but this one was brillaint n memorable one alaways😃😃😃😃😃😃

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

that was such an emotional ending 😭 loved it

thank god shree is fine

felt so bad for shriya 😭

sikander and abdul tortured her too much

thank god arjun saved shriya from these monsters

sikander kidnapped roshni

sikander is so disgusting and cheap 😡

felt so bad for arjun and roshni

just because of sikaner arjun had t slap roshni

roshni and arjun sacrificed their life for country 😭

literally had tears in my eyes while reading this chapter

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Emotional one..
Roshni was so much tortured...that hurts..
Beautifully written..
Loved it..

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: amanarjunkaran
thnx for pm dear

continue soon

what about rathore ki behan??

Ur welcum
ss finish dear
i guess u r confused
roshni is rathod sis..!

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Ah wat a tragedy...I never read ones
I believe in happily ever after stories
I can't bear arjun dying...love the character so much...
pari n payal awesome concept...very well written...
duty is above all...arjun proved it...
the ending was so cruel...
I had tears in my eyes...
u potrayed emotions very well...
sikander tortured roshni so much..
poor soul had to undergo so much..
arjun was also dying one death each tym he saw roshni lyk dat...
I have no words to praise u too...
u nailed it...

Edited by samiya.059 - 12 years ago