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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

superb start :) loved it

so rathore is going to be working as a thug

and arjun is working undercover to catch sikander

riya working as intern with deepak

arjun coming back to arjun to meet miss banerjee

can't wait to know which banerjee sister is coming

looking forward to read it

continue soon

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NeethuEli

@NeethuEli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Me confused.

Any ways great update. Who is the elder sister??????

Loved the last line.

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

as ur story is all about disguise nd undercover missions...
bt we all knw dat who these me r
so as per my opinion u cn use the title------ "FAKE DISGUISE"
wat say
tell me if u dnt like it
I cn suggest some more...

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

superb start...
wow arjun already working as undercover and sam and his team gonna work as thugs... are they doing this to help arjun in undercover operation??
riya working with the guy whose helping sik... :O
and arjun's last line which banerjee sister was he talking about??
continue soon... eagerly waiting for the next part...

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Hey nice concept
bt
the tile is similar to my

ariya FF- the very known stranger..

May it reate confusion..
Its my request pls change the title..
Pls..

Sorry fr that bt..pls change it..
Requesting u.

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Sia Di... awesome...!!

Bohot confuse ho gayi mein...!!!

But please continue...!!!!

Title... I dont know... concept itna samjh mein nhi aaya...!!!

Depends on ur story...!!

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

The undercover Prince😉, how about this?

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: haruhi26
The undercover Prince😉, how about this?

Wow di..

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Wow di..

of course, our Arjun is no less than a Prince nah😳

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Arooj Arain

@aroojarain

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

ohh wow..great start..
So arjun is undrcover cop..
Nd sameer is reallie nyc supportng his team..
Nd nw arjun cmng mumbai.. Wow
contniue soon.. Nd for title.. Em very bad at it.. Koi suggstions nahi aa raha..