HOLI OS: GULAAL *ONHOLD**will update soon.* - Page 2

concept is interesting
waiting 4 d update
continue soon
thanks for pm
well the new lead in the show is female
the name i liked is kripa. Or sargum

O MANN BAWRA ZARA TU BOL,
RAAZ HAI JITNE SAARE, AAJ SAB TU KHOL...
ZINDAGI HAI KORI MERI..
BHAR DE CHAND RANG...
SHAAME HAI TANHA MERI,
AA BITA LU TERE SANG...
MERE NAGAR K SAARE LOG AAJ JHOOME HAI KHUSHI ME...
LAKEERO ME NAHI MERE CHAND LAMHE KHUSHIYO K.
AAJ BAHAR HAI PAR YAAR NAHI...
INTEZAR HAI PAR PYAAR NAHI...
AAJ SAB K CHEHRE PE RAWNAK HAI, KHALI MAI THEHRI UDAAS..
ANJAAN TO BOHOT PAR KOI APNA NA HAI PAAS...
NA JAANE KAHA REH GAYA SANAM MERA...
WO INSAAN SAB SE KHAAS...

EK KO MANA THA APNA,
PAR WO NIKLA BEGANA...
RANGO KI BAUCHAR MEI NA JAANE YE HAKIKAT HAI YA FASANA...
DIL SE DIL MILAO SANAM..
NAZRO SE NAZAR,
APNI KALI KISMAT KI NA THI MUJHE KHABAR...
AAJ MEHFIL HAI,
MAUKA HAI,
AUR HAI SHABAB...
ZINDAGI TO WAISE BHI NASHEELI HAI LO PI LO THODA SHARAB...

YE GULAAL NA CHHIRKO HUM PE SANAM...
TEHZAAB BAN JAYEGA..
MERE DIL ME HAI ITNA DARD,
ASHQ BHI LAHU BAN JAYEGAA...

INTR0.

a lady in white sari was sitting in a park bench...
with colours here n there about her...
it was holi today... She was waiting for someone special. It would be her last meeting.. For she had decided to go very far away from him...
he was a man of ice whereas she was a glass doll.
she looked at colors around her.
people dancing n celebrating holi she wondered if her dull life cud ever get colorful.
alas.. He came
____
Man: riya..
ye tumhara personal decsion phir bhi...
please ruk jao...
Ri: rukna to mai bhi chahti hu... Par nhi, i cnt stay.
im sorry Sikandar...
Sik: Riya!!
i kno mai bohot ghatiya hu...
ek mujrim hu...
maine us insan ko ghayal kiya hai jise tum chahti ho, uska pyaar chhina hai jo mafi k layak nhi...
par...
mai bhi to tumse pyaar karta hu..
Ri: ha siky. I kno..
Par mai arjun se bohot zyada mohabbat karti hu..
aur chah k bhi mai tumhe maf ni kar sakti...
akhri bar ye mulakat hamare dosti k nam...
aaj se tum sirf mere arjun k dushman ho...
alvida sikandar...

For sure please continue. And um...how would priya sound like for the new girls name?

@ rinku95 & zebbie...
comnt karna bhul gaye ho kya aap dono?
its not fair na yaar... :(

please continue and try to ur updates longer

interesting start...
so sik and riya friends... :O
continue soon

wow nice start...👏

wow nice concept and great start,
continue soon