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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Kya yaar???
Itna emotional update thha...
The letter was emotional.
Read bothe the parts.
Aww...
Arjun took a pinch of her sindoor and applied it on Riya's tummy...
Tht was very sweet...
Please jaldi continue karna.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Nice update... the way Ariya talked to their baby ws cute... the letter ws emotional one... update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Ch4
Arjun finishd readng n lookd at her..
Ar: samajhni paraha hu, k tumpe gussa karu,
ya mafi mangu?
Akhir kis mittise bani ho tum riya?
maine itna bura saluk kia, tumhare sath,
phir bhi mujhse pyar karti ho?
Ri: jun, aap jaan le lenge phir bhi karti rahungi..
mujhe maf kardije
Ar: No, riya..
pls, mafi to mujhe mangni chahiye..
im sory
Ri: arjun..
he reachs out to hug him
n spend a momnt togethr wen a voic intruptd
Voic: very sorry to interupt ur romanc...
they turn to see DCP n entir ETF smiling at them
riya tries to sit up
DCP: are lete rahiye mrs. Rawte,
bytheway congratulatns...
aur ha riya pehle to ham aapse mafi mangte hai,
aur apki begunai sabit hogyi hai isliye apka suspensn cancl hogaya hai,
aur ek gudnews ye hai k Sikandar mara gaya hai..
He luks at arjun
DCP: im sory rawte bt it was a natral death..
Ar: sir i cnt beliv this..
DCP: nithr cud we..
bt humne uski deadbody witnes kari hai.
Oh! Choro in baato ko,
we hav organisd a holi party, n aap sbko ana hai.
Riya? Wil u?
SCROL 4 MOR
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Ch4b
DCP: Riya? Wil u com?
I mean only if u feel lyk it ofcors,
n doctr tumhe 1 ghante me release kardenge n party shaam ko hai...
Ri: yes sir mai pakka aungi..
Ar: par riya, is halat me...?
Ri: arjun hamsab jayenge aur mil k ye tyohar manaynge..
ye holi hamare liye dherh sari khushiya leke ayi hai...
DCP: yes mrs. Rawte,
dua to yahai rahegi k aapki aur ham sabki zindagi khushal rahe...
ok ab mujhe chalna parhega..
c u all at the party...
happy holi.
The DCP leaves
Ra: riya, arjun, congratz yaar...
he looks at arjun n says
Ra: saale tu to papa banraha hai..
Ar: oye sala to tu hai, wo bhi mera,
meri riya ne to gudnews suna di,
ayesha!!
tumhara train itna slow kyu hai?
Riya n ayesha blush
Shr: sir..
congratz,
Ri, tu mujhe itni jaldi mamu banarahi hai..?
not fair huh!
mami bin mama,
hamare princes ko pasand ni ayegi
Li: ha riya di,
mujhe itni jaldi bua ni bana rahe ho..
OMG!!
me bua! Wow she wil cal 'pishi'
Ar: no, she wil cal u 'Atya'
Par tumhe to mami bulana chahiye ni shree..
they blush!!

SCROL 4 mor
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Ch5
hearng arjun's words shree was grining lyk a geek n liza was all red.
shayintani snickrd n rest smiled.
Sh: k kya sir aap bhi...
Li: ajjun sirrr!!
bohot naughty hogaye ho aap...
Sha: dado to hai hi aise,
aur ab vahini agaye hai to...
Ar: shayu!!
tu na pitegi..
she sticks her tongue at him.
Ar: Wese, Chotu!
'kay zhala' itna chup kyu ho..
C: nhi sir, kuchni,
bas kuch soch raha tha...
Ra: kya, bhai, hame bhi batao..
Aye: mai batati hu..
wo kya hai na,
k hamare chotu ab bare ho gaye hai..
matlab ye k jis ko dil de baithe hai,
unko isne ek luv lettr likha hai.
par us khubsurat haseena ka bhai,
ek hitler hai,
aisa hamare Chotu sahab ka khayal THA,
ab bichara ye sochraha hai k wo larki dil degi, ya jooti..
C: ayesha!!
itna exagr8 na karo..
Ar: oh ho chotu,
no tensn, Mai tumhare sath hu.
C: uh, um..
ji sir.. Thnx.
*whispr 2 shree*
isi baat ka dar tha..
aftr somtym riya was released.
it 4pm
they all went 2 their homes 2 get ready n run few errands..
___
next update.
dhoom of holi..

Edited by Sumu4JayD - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
nice update!
wow riya is pregnant
they got together again & she proved innocent nice
liked ariya & etf convo
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
awsum updates...
ariya together and riya proved innocent yupiee...
letter was very emotional... awww the baby se convo wala part was very sweet...
love the way everyone was teasing each other...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Awesum updates
loved it..
so heart touching..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
awesome OS :) loved it
read all parts in one go
that scene was so emotional when arjun applied the sindoor :(
arjun is giving her divorce just because she is friends with sikander
riya met with an accident 😭
and awww riya is pregnant :)
loved arjun's conversation with baby and riya
the letter was so emotional
thank god sikander is dead
finally ariya are together and riya is proved innocent
love the way everyone was teasing each other
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
awesome os... loved it.. riya is pregnant.. ariya got together... sikki is dead..

loved the teasing!!

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