HOLI OS: GULAAL *ONHOLD**will update soon.* - Page 3

interstinggg!! very interstinggg!!!

nice start dear
riya nd sik r friends
update soon
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Awsmmm plz update soon 😊

Ch1
She kept waiting n alas...
he came,
the super cop n his glares
She tried to smile.

Ri: thank u, arjun aap aaye...
ye aakhri mulakat toufe me dene k liye shukria..
Ar: bas karo riya!!
tumhari in fizul ki baate aur ye naatak mujhpe koi asar ni karte,
Samjhi tum..!
Riya's eyes wellup..
Ri: nhi arjun, ye natak ni, mai to bas aapko ye batane aayi thi k aj k baad mai aapse kabhi nhi milungi...
bas aapko kuch dena tha...
she gives him an envelope...
Ri: is me aapki saari yaadein hai...
ab jab aapse naata toot gaya,
in pe bhi mera koi haq nhi..
bas ek aur baat..

she takes out a sindoor pot
Ri: ek akhri baar k liye bhar dijiye meri mang..
Ar: nahi riya..
kis haq se?
Ri: pls arjun,
sindoor nahi to gulal samajhkar hi sahi..
he applies the sindoor...
Ri: happy holi arjun..
ho sake to mujhe maf karna,
aur ishq na sahi par nafrat karna na bhuliyega, isi bahane ek to rishta rahega aapse..
she turns to go
Ar: alvida riya.
they both take separate ways..
never to meet again but fate intervens. With a twist.
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wow nice start...!!!

Just read all your parts, very interesting, but i sincerely hope that something stops them from parting, last part was so emotional when Arjun applied the sindoor and yet told her to go😭

Ch2
Arjun went back 2 his home, their home...
aftr roshni he had with gr8 dificulty fallen in love again only 2 find that his riya was frnds with sikandar, his worst enemy, the 1 who killd roshni..
all his love turned into hatred n widout lisning 2 any explnatn he threw her out of the house...
he even sent her signed Divorce papers which she however refused... And after 1 month, on holi, she begd him 2 meet her..

he remembrd, the envlop
he took out the thngs.
a butn, which had falln from his shirt on their vry 1st meetng,
a pen, which she had borowd frm him,
a pair of anklets which he had giftd on their wedng day,
a bullet the 1 she had shot to save HIS life,
all the love lettrs he had sent her,
bt 1 lettr caught his eye, it had a tape wrappd in it.
he was about 2 chec wen he got a phn cal,
he put those in his pockt n answrd the cal, it was frm riya's phn but a man spoke..
Man: ACP Arjun?
Ar: aap kaun, aur ye phn aap k paas kaise?
Man: ji is phn ki ownr ka acidnt hogaya hai
Ar: what!!
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What the????
Ariya seperation????
Kiska accident hua????
Please Ariya ko seperate mat karo,meri behna.

Wat the???? Arjun threw Riya out jus coz Sik ws her friend... dats cruel... Arjun filling her maang with sindoor jus b4 dey part their ways dat ws so emotional... nd end Riya met with accident oh no wats happening in their lifes esp Riya's... b/w wats in dat envelope???? update soon

great update...
but riya ka accident?? :O plz let her be okay...
aur whats in the envelope???
continue soon...
happy holi..enjoyyy :))