SS- Ankahi batein - part-7 pg -7, may 1 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
awsum update...
fb was nice...
arnika scenes were lovely...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Thank you sooo much for ur comments..
Here is d next part


part- 4





...'''every piece of my broken part reflects u bt i still can't see my image in your eyes'''...


Bus reached the ratnagiri forest.
Rathod, ayesha, chotu, shree all ger down..

Anika was still sleeping on arjun's shoulder...he was confused ..
He thought' uthau ya na uthau..'
nahi uthaunga toh rathod chillayega ..uthaunga toh ye chillayegi...
Rathod ko hamesha sunta hoon..
Iski daant bahaut din baad sunne ka chance hain..

Flashback

'' trrriiinnn...trrriiinnn...
'Oh ho kaun mar gaya subhe subhe..'
she picked up the phone

'ooye kumbhkaran aab tak so rahi hai...uuth'

raute...tu chal college mai tujhe dekhti hoon...
She thought
Aaj college mai kubhakaran ka bada bhai nahi banaya toh mera naam anika damshing rathod nahi

'' ooye phir so gayi kya''

''tere jaisa alarm ho toh koi chain se kaise so sakta hai''

haan ..haan baad mai daant lena ab uss khusat teacher se toh bach le phir mujhe dekh lena

she thought ...
'Dekhungi toh mai tab jab khusat tujhe dekhega'

at college..
Arjun- oh ho kaha rah gayi hai hai..
Anika- mujhe kisine yaad kiya..
Arjun- nahi... saitaan ko kiya tha bt tu exchange ho gayi..
Anika- ok!
She left to bring their cutting chai..

Arjun- kuch toh chut raha hai ..ye itna normal behave kar rahi hai..

Anika bring his chai..
Usne chai pee li hai..

15 mins later..

'Arrjjuunnn'... Mr arjun raute..
Mr raute..
Khusat barked at arjun...
He was feeling sleepy..
Teacher comes to him..
Tech- arjun..
No respond..
Anika- in her mind- respond kaise karga... Respond toh iska body kar rahai hai... Sleeping pill ko..
Uummm cutting chai kfi tasty thi..

Next mrng:
arjun was still sleeping.
Trinnn...trinnn.

Arjun- hello..
Anika- ooye kumbhkaran uuth..

Arjun- tujhe nahi chodunga..
She cut the call


flashback end

arjun slowly moved his hand towards her head..
In mean time she was now out of her sleep..
She saw arjun's hand is so close to her face..
She looked into his eyes..
Bt still she can't found herself..it was pain all over his eyes..

Arjun n she have an eyelock..
Many unsaid words..many unheard talks of their heart now is slowly coming out..

Anika thought
arjun bas ek baar meri baat sun lete uss din..sirf ek baar arjun..

No anika tu kamzor nahi pad sakti..

She shouted-
kya hua? It was so loud that he remove his hand from her face n his face too...

Arjun- tum so gayi thi?
Anika- kyun insaan sote nahi hai kya?

Arjun- tumhare saath toh baat hi karna bekar hai..
Anika- toh kaun bolta hai karne ko..chup raho na...
He rolled his eyes..

By then rathod enterd the bus

'annii..annii'

anika turned her head n saw rathod was there..

Anika- haan sam kya hua?

Rathod- niche utro ..stop aagaya hai..
Anika- ok ..

She got out of the bus.
At the door..

Mr . Arjun mehera
asst. Bio scientist.. Mera saman mere room mai pahuch jana chahiye..

Then she rolled her eyes to front seat.
Arjun n rathod saw the driver n one other passenger was there..
So she said that..

Arjun- jee miss anika mam...

They all reached the hotel which was for tourists n others .

At afternoon arjun n anika decided to go to the woods..

Anika n arjun was walking parallely in the woods..

Arjun was walking observing the woods..
He turned to say sth to anika bt to his surprise she wasn't der..

Arjun get tensed..
He started calling her name loudly..

Anika..anika..
Annikaaa

anika- oh ! Ho arjun noise pollution kyun kar rahe ho..

Arjun heard her voice bt couldn't found her..
Arjun- kaha ho tum?
Anika- upar?
Arjun- itni jaldi..
Anika- what...upar nahi... Yaha tree k upar..
Ajrun- in his mind- bandariya ki aadat gayi nahi ab tak...

Arjun- looked at the trees..
He saw the branches of a tree is slightly bent.

Arjun- anika..niche aao..

She was in her full concentration..
His voice break her concentration..
And she lost her balance n fell from from the tree but in mean time arjun comes n catch her..
He was nt ready so he also fell down..
He was on the ground n on his top anika..

Flashback-
' arjun ek baar meri baat suno'..

Ab kya sunna rah gaya hai anika'

arjun yakeen karo mujh par

bt arjun left her..
She started crying..

Fb end

arjun can still see hurt in her eyes..
Kash mai uss din uski un ankahi baton ko suleta..sayad meri anni mere paas hoti- he thought.



Precap- case mystery..n as usual arnika flasbak.


Pls guys tell me how is the part
good or bad..

Pls tell me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Loved it,my vampu...
U r truly an amazing girl...
Loved the update.
The flashbacks touched my heart.
Heh...
I called Arjun,Kumbhkaran!!!
That was damn hilarious.
Tum sach mein multi talented ho.
Cant wait for the next part.
Oye,when r u updating ur Fun factor?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: zebbie

Loved it,my vampu...
U r truly an amazing girl...
Loved the update.
The flashbacks touched my heart.
Heh...
I called Arjun,Kumbhkaran!!!
That was damn hilarious.
Tum sach mein multi talented ho.
Cant wait for the next part.
Oye,when r u updating ur Fun factor?


thank u di
kuch accha sochungi toh updt karungi meri fun factor..
Koi idea do na..
Phir sochungi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
awsum update...!!!
fbs were awsum...!!! khumbhkaran lol😆
wow annika in arjun's arms badia hai😉 annika ki to nikal padi...!!!
precap is interesting...!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen


thank u di
kuch accha sochungi toh updt karungi meri fun factor..
Koi idea do na..
Phir sochungi..


yeh Kumbhkaran ka hi idea lelo.
Likhne se pehle,modify karlena
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Just read it..
It was awesome..
Do inform me when u update next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Sorry sorry sorry
mai late ho gayi..
Pls maaf kardo..



Part-5


arjun n anika are under the tree..
Looking into each others eyes..

Anika thought' kaas arjun uss din tum ne meri baat sun lete'
itni galatfaimi kaise ho gayi tumhe, ek baar bhi bharosha nahi kiya tumne '

arjun thought' kaas uss din tumhari batein sun leta toh sayad..aaj hum iss tarah nahi jee rahe hote anni..'

she can heard his unsaid words
bt one complain , why not he?

There are some leafs that sticking on her hair, n she was irritated by that..
Arjun slowly raised his hand n removed the leaf as well as the hairs which covering her face n irritating her more..

By his one touch she felt a shiver in her body which arjun can feel..

He thought
how badly his presence still affecting her..

Anika thought
yes arjun u hav always the effect on me wer i lost myself..

Flashback in anika's pov..


She was there in the garden ..
Under the trees freely roaming around like butterflies..

Suddenly one hand grabbed her n stuck her to the tree.
She then realized that it was arjun..
She sighed in relief...

Anika- oh tum! Mujhe toh..
He didn't let her complete n keep his fingers on her lips..

She ws shocked by his sudden action..
For the first time in her life she felt uncomfortable with arjun..her best buddy arjun..

Arjun- sshhh!! Bahaut bolti ho tum..

He kept his hands on her waist ..
She trembeled ..
Arjun can feel her tremble..

Then arjun slowly remove the loose lock of hair from her face..

Anika in hr mind-
aare ye pagal ho gaya hai kya? Ye kya kar raha hai..
N mujhe itni bechaini kyun ho rahi hai ..arjun hi toh hai..
Pata nahi ajeeb sa feel ho raha hai..

Anika- arjun tum..ye..

Then he coverd her mouth with his palm..

Arjun- ssshhh!!
Mujhe kuch batana hai tumhe...

Suno...

Then he removed his palm frm her
mouth n he closed the distance betn them n moved his face near her ears..

Her heart is thudding loudly..

Anika- k kk kk ..kya bolna hai..

Arjun- yahi ki..

Anika- ki..

Arjun- ki..

Anika- bolo..

Arjun- yahi ki..
Happy april fools day..

Then anika looked at him with murderous look..

Aaagggrrr

raute!!
Chodungi nahi tujhe..

Arjun - pakad toh sahi ..saying this he jumped away from her n started running around the garden..
Anika before him..

Finally she caught him ..actually not him bt she pulled his jacket n one envelop droped on the gruond from the pocket...

Arjun- oh shit..

Anika opened that ..
Arjun- anni ruk. Isse chod na..
She didn't stop..

N she found that it was the ticket of flight to delhi.. Next day 2 pm..

Anika- arjun ye..
Tum jaa rahe ho..
No..bahaut bana liya april fool..

Arjun- no anni, i m going..

Tears rolled down from her eyes ..
N she sitted on the ground on her knees..

Arjun can't see her tears..
It doesn't shoot with her face..

Arjun bent down..

Arjun- hey..
Anni..pls ro mat yaar..
Bas 3 months ki hi toh baat hai na..

Anika didn't answered ...

Arjun cupped her face..
Arjun- hey tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho.. Jao yaha se meri anni k aankho se nikal rahe ho...

Anika smiled a little..

Arjun- ye hui na baat..
Pls anni kabhi rona mat..
Mujhse bardast nahi hota..

Anika- toh jaa kyun rahe ho..

Arjun- jana padega anni..
Pls rona mat..
Ai wapas jaroor aaunga..

Anika didn't answered bt she didn't cry..

Arjun knows tht it hurts her , so he kept her head on his lap n he patted her head..

She closed her eyes n one last drop of her escape frm her eyes...

She wiped it n said
no arjun i wll never cry..

Arjun smiled n peaked her forhead..


Flashback ends


arjun saw her lost somewhere ..

Arjun- anni,, i .i mean anika..

She snapped out of her thoughts ..

Arjun- u r ok..

She nodded in yes..

Arjun stood up .. N forward his hands towards her..
She refused..

She tried to got up , bt failed .
There ws a heavy sprain on her ankles..

Arjun- zeedi ki zeedi..

Arjun didn't listen to her n picked her up..in his arma n took her to the hotel room..

Arjun kept her on the bed ..
Arjun- tum rest karo..
Mai abhi aata hoon..

Anika- arjun wo..
Arjun turned .
Arjun- kya?

Anika- wo...wo..
Haan wo samples..
Shree ko keh kar testing k liye bhej dena..

Arjun- tum abhi rest karo ..

Anika- and wo sa..

Arjun- rathod ko inform kar dunga

n he left..


Pre-
sam- dekha arjun, lad rahi hai apni aasuon se ..
Phir bhi aaj tak tumhara wada niva rahi hai..
Pls arjun request hai mera..
Aur mat tadpa usse..


Sorry guys fr late posting bt ye track sochne mai time lag gaya..

If u liked pls do comment..
Thank u all fr leaving ur comments..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Loved it,my Vampu...
Loved the track...
Flashback accha laga.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: zebbie

Loved it,my Vampu...
Loved the track...
Flashback accha laga.



thank u di

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