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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-2



all the three of are confused. Then the three came up to her n introduced themself..

Then they gathered to discuss about the case.

Rathod n anika are sit opposite to each other.
But to her good luck arjun sits beside her.
Rathod was still angry at him.

Rathod- guys case k bare mai baat karte hain.
Maharastra k ratnagiri , waha jo jangal hai ..waha kuch illegal kaam ho rahe hain aise info hume mili hai..
Arjun- par ye case ETF ko kyun diya gaya hai.

Anika- tum bina sune kyun bol rahe ho...pehele puri baat sun lo..

Arjun just glared at her. But she didn't react.
Shree into chotu's ears.- yaar ye hai kaun n arjun sir ki bolti kyun kar deti hai hamesha..

Anika - tum dono ko kya lagta hai yaha koi kitty party chal raha hai..jo gossip kar rahe ho..

Shree- sorry mam..
Anika- its just anika...agli baar yaad rakhna.
Shree-ok.

Anika- sameer u continue!
Rathod- ok guys.. Ye case etf ko iss liye diya gaya hai kyun ki iss mai desh k bahar k log bhi involv. N local police ye handle nahi karsakti hai issliye.

Rathod- hum waha undercover jayenge..
Aisha- but kyun sir.
Anika- kyun k forest department k log bhi in sab mai involved hai...
Pata nahi bt kuch bahaut bada plan ho raha hai...

Rathod-- aur hume usse rokna hai..

The chaiwala come n placed the cutting chai on the table n left.

Arjun was thinking something.
When he traced his hand for the cup, it was already taken..

Then he saw anika was sipping his chai and thinking something while twriling the pen ..

Every one was shocked except arjun..

When she feels everyones gaze
she looked at arjun..
Anika- oh ye tumhare liye tha ...
Koi baat nahi dushri managalena.

Rathod in his mind- ye dono cutting ko kabhi nahi chod sakte hain..

Anika- toh hum waha undercover jayenge..

Rathod- mai shree , aisha, n chotu waha tourist bankar jayenge..
Aur tum aur arjun n liza waha bio-scientist ban kar jayenge..

Arjun- waht ?? Bio-scientist!!
Mai nahi jaunga..

Rathod- dekho raute har baar tumhari manmani nahi chalegi..

Arjun- dekho rathod ma...

Anika- oh shup up guys!
Tum dono ne agar dobara ye sab shuru kiya toh 3rd time kya hoga ye tum dono acche se jante ho..

And arjun tum waha jaa rahe ho, boi scientist ban kar n wo bhi mere saath...
Samje ya tumhare bhasa mai samjhaun...
N sameer ye tumhari team hai ..isse kaise sambhalte hai ye tumhe pata hona chahiye...
Samjhe tum..

They both walked out of the room.

Ankia - in dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta..

She also left..

Chotu- yaar ye ladki hai kya cheez..
Warning toh isne aise di jise abhi abhi dono par hirosima n nagasaki ki tarah nuclear bomb girne wale hain.

Shree- kuch toh chut raha hai chotu
chotu nodded and smirked...
N said - samaje ya samjhaun..

Aisha- damn it ! Tum dono band karoge ye sab...

Here arjun was in his cabin . He was just thinking about this day waht have happened..
He drifted to a thought..

Sam- juno dekh mai ye kark hi rahunga..
Arjun- nahi mai jaunga..
Sam- nahi anika meri behen hai..
Arjun- toh kya hua? Mai jaunga..
Usse anika ko cheda hai..uski toh khair nahi..

They both again started fighting..
Anika comes to them n said..
Tum dono chup ho jao

sam - nahi.. Usne tumhe cheda..
Anika - tum dono kuch nahi karoge..

But the both still fighting ...

Anika goes to the table n took their cell phone n threw that through the window..

Sam- ye kya kiya?

Anika- ab jao tum dono..
Sameer tum mobile repair store jao n raute tum hospital jao..
Arjun- don't call me that n hospita kyun??

Anika- kyin ki maine uss ladk ki dono tange tod di hai..

Bil kul tum dono ki phone ki tarah.

Sam- what??
Anika- mai badi hoon toh maine khud handle kar liya..
Sam - kitna , sirf 42 mins 26 sec badi.. Hum twins ha n hum dono same hai ok..

Anika- tumahra laptop kaha hai..

Sam- chalo arjun warna agli bar hum dono ICU mai honge...

Flashback ends


arjun thought - accha hua mobile pocket mai tha..
Shree ko usse bach k rahana chahiye..

Here shree comes n told him that
anika ne conf room mai bulaya hai..

Arjun - ok chalo..mai abhi aata hoon..
N for the lst tme he glanced at his phone... Huh ! Safe mode pe hai.


Guys this the 2 nd part n .
Thanks all of you for ur comments n likes..
Pls shre ur views.
N if there is ny mistake pls tell me..

Thank you guys
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it,meri entertainment queen...
There must be some reason towards my changed behaviour.
Loved it a lot.
Mujhe bohuthi pasand aaya hai.
Next update kab karogi.
Loved the flashback.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waow...awesome update...
she throwed their phones out...hahaha...
shez sam's tein...
loved the way shutsup whenever arjun-sam fights...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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just read both the parts...!!
awsum...!!
omg she threw their phones🤣🤣
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
nice update :)
oh god anika threw their phones and broke the leg of that guy 🤣
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-3


they all again gathered at the conf.room.
Now anika seem at peace.

Anika- so team hum parson thick 8 baje niklenge .
Shree, chotu ,sameer n aisha tum log gogreen tour guide bus mai jaoge as tourist..
Aur mai aur arjun usi bus mai jayenge as scientist..

Is that clear.
All nodded.
Anika- shree muje case k bare mai jo details hai uski copy de dena.

Shree- ok anika..

Now only arjun n anika are in the conf. Room.

Anika looked at him.
He is still devilishly handsome n cross- armed man . But his eyes showing the pain. He was hurt by the wound given by love. How badly she wanted to go to him n wipe away all his sorrows.

But no he is not her 'raute ' nymore. Jo baat baat par hasta tha.. Khus rahta tha..

Suddenly arjun comes to her n ask
kya tumhare yaha aane wajah kya sirf ye case hai?

Anika- tum kya sunna chahate ho arjun?

Ajun was silent.
Anika- nahi hai na jabab..
Aur aaj jo hua...
For god sake wo sameer ki best friend thi arjun aur tum usi ko..

Arjun- mai abhi kuch nahi sununga!
Anika- tumse toh baat hi karna bekar hai...

Anika- muje laga tum apna ye wada kabhi todoge bt ..u ..
U broke my trust arjun

tum hi ne kaha tha na dosti duniya ka wo rishta hai jo pyaar aur zindegi se bhi badh kar hai ..
Toh tum iss baat ko kaise bhul sakte ho arjun.

Anika- wo aaj wahi sam hai par tumne khud usse khoya hai..

Arjun couldn't stand there anymore .
He walked out of the room.

Anika- humse toh bhag rahe ho arjun , khud se kab tak bhagoge..

Tum apne aap ko nahi chod sakte raute..nahi chod sakte.


2 days later-

the team was ready for the mission.
They all get into the bus.

Arjun n anika in one corner
shree-chotu n aisha-rathod are in another corner.

The bus starts .
Arjun looked at his fake ID which was hanging around his neck.
He slowly muttered' boi-scientist'

but it was enough to reach anika's ear.
She looked at him . But he didn't resopnd.

He was lost in his past memoried

flashback-
'' oye nikki miki' tune ye suject kyun liya..
Oye raute tune bhi toh physics liya na'
muje raute mat bulao nikki- miki

muje niki miki mat bulao raute.

Ok , nahi bulaunga sorry, dekh kaan pakad raha hoon.

Anni sorry yaar..

Ok ok ..tume phy liya n bio sc. Ko bura bol rahe ho..
Kisi din tumhe koi poison inject kar dega n tu injection ka pressure naap ta rahega...

Say this she ran..n arjun also runs behind her..

Aaj tujhe nahi chodunga..

Ooye pehele pakad toh sahi..

Fb ends

he came out of his thought when he felt a little weight on his shoulder.
He saw that anika was sleeping childishly by resting her head on his shoulder like before.

Arjun thought -
aaj tak ye ghode bech k soti hai
huh... Niki miki..


Precap- more arnika scene n case details


pls guys if u liked then comment.

Thank u for ur previous comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Main na tere paer pakarke pranam karna chahungi...
Sach mein it ws really beautiful.
I loved each nd every bit of it.
Loved the flashbacks a lot.
U r truly an amazing writer.
Thank you so much,darling.
Love you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great start... Why do I have a feeling she might be ex-lover of Arjun or Rathore's wife...

Edit

I just read part 2 and 3

So she is Arjun's ex girlfriend and Rathore's sister... wow... she has same attitude like her brother and Raute... every good... please post pic who play the new girl
Edited by MistiofMistz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Awesum
loved it dear
nice arnika scenes..!

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