Sequel OS: Dard Mujhe Hota Hai

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola...
People,this is the sequel OS I am writing.
Link to the main story of OS: Dard Mujhe Hota Hai,is,
www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3480970.

So,hope u will all like the sequel,as much as you liked the main OS,Dard Mujhe Hota Hai.

Scroll down in the next post for the story.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey zebbie continue soon i can't update few days due to pc prob n i can't rely on my mob yar will try to give update later.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was Holi festival.
Sameer Rathod and his beautiful wife,Ankita,threw a Holi party his ETF family.
Shree came with his wife,Amisha.
Chotu came with his 11:30 wali wife,Pinky.
And,Arjun came with his wife,Zebbie.
Sameer and Ankita greeted all of them,by smearing colours on everybody's face.

Everybody was enjoying the Holi,when,suddenly Ankita noticed Zebbie.She was very quiet throughout the party.Same with Arjun.
She wondered what happened between them.
She felt worried for them.
Instantly,she went to Sameer.
Ankita: Sam,aapse ek zaruri baat karni hai.
Rathod: Haan,Anki.Bolo.
Ankita: Samajhne ki koshish kijiye.Its regarding Arjun and Zebbie.
Rathod(worried): Kyun? Kya hua hai undono ke beech mein?
Ankita: wahi toh mujhe nahi pata.Ek kaam kijiye.Aap jaake Arjun se baat kijiye aur main jaake Zebbie se baat karti hu.
Rathod: Thik hai.

Ankita and Rathod went to Arjun and Zebbie,respectively.

Convo between Rathod and Arjun:

Rathod: Arjun,mujhe tujhse ek zaruri baat karni hai.Mana maat karna.Main janchuka hu ki tere aur Zebbie ki beech mein kuch tension hai.Aur,yeh maat sochna ki khud Zebbie ne yeh sab kaha hai mujhse.ETF ki chief hone ke naate,mujhe pehle se hi pata chal chuka hai,Arjun.
Chal,mere saath.
Arjun: Nahi,Sam.Mujhe kuch baat nahi karni.
Rathod: Baat toh tujhe karni hai mujhse.
Rathod dragged Arjun inside.
Rathod ordered Arjun to sit.
Arjun and Rathod sat on the sofa.
Rathod: Arjun.Dekh zara Zebbie ko.Woh har waqt yahi chahti hai ki tu khush rahe.Tere upar ek kharoch aane se,woh khud toot jati hai.Tujhe agar kuch hota hai,toh,Dard Usse Hota hai.Tujhe agar chot lagti hai,toh,dard ke maare uske aakho se aansu nikalte hai.Uska dil zor se dharakne lagta hai.Arjun,hum sab married couples hai.Couples ki life mein thore bohut anban hoti rehti hai.Its our duty,infact,the duty of both,husband and wife,not to increase it.Samjhhe ya main samjhhau?
Arjun understood each and every word,Sameer Rathod said to him.He felt the depth of the word's meaning.
Arjun: Haan,Yaar.Sab samajh gaya.Aage se aisa nahi hoga.Ab Zebbie ko bohut khush rakhunga.Zebbie kya soch rahi hogi?
Rathod: Arjun,larkiyo ka mann bohut hi nazuk hota hai.Aur,humari Zebbie nazuk zarur hai,par,bohut samjhdar bhi.Jo bhi soch rahi hogi,I am sure,positive hi soch rahi hogi.Dont worry,Anki uske saath hai.Anki se baat kar rahi hogi.
Arjun: hmm.Chal,niche.Holi khelte hai.
Rathod: Haan,Chal.

Rathod and Arjun left after their convo.

Convo between Ankita and Zebbie.

Zebbie was leaning against a wall.She was clutching her mangalsutra.As she closed her eyes,two tear drops fell from her eyes.She quickly opened her eyes and wiped the tears.She turned around to see that Ankita was watching her.
Ankita smiled at her and went to her.
Ankita: Kya hua,Zebbie? Itni pareshaan kyun ho?
Zebbie: Aisi koi baat nahi hai,Anki.
Ankita: Agar jhoot bolna tumhe nahi ata hai,toh,jhoot kyun bolti ho? Sach boldo,Zebbie. Warna yeh dard tumahre andar nasoor ban jayega.
Zebbie knew that she has been caught.
Zebbie was in tears now.
Zebbie: Kal raat,jab sab log case ke paperworks khatam karne ke baad,ghar aaye,toh maine dekha ki Arjun ke bazu se bohut khoon beh raha thha.I knew that his hand was injured,that too,seriously.I instantly took his hand to check,but,he yanked away his hand and told me not to interfere in his matters.I was very hurt with his behavior,but,I kept it away,because,Arjun was in pain and I cant see him in pain.I still went to him,but,he slammed the door on my face,which resulted in hurting my fingers.
For me,my husband is first,and,I am second to myself.He didnt let me attend to his wounds.Anki,kya mera koi haq nahi hai unke paas rehna ka? Kya mera koi haq nahi unke dard ko samajhne ka? Janti ho,Anki.Jab Arjun ko chot lagti hai,toh Dard Mujhe Hota Hai.Unka dard mujhe asar karta hai.Unka dard mujhe satata hai ki kaise main unke dard ko halka kar saku,par shayad,yeh mere naseeb mein nahi likkha hai.
Ankita: Aisa kyun sochti ho,Zebbie?Accha,chalo.Main tumhe Arjun ke paas le chalte hu.Tum dono guest room mein jaake aaram se apne saare gile shikwe baat karke mitana,samjhi ya samjhhau?
Zebbie smiled at Ankita's antics through her tears.
They both turn around to go,but,they see that Arjun and Rathod standing there.
Zebbie gets the biggest shock of her life.
Rathod and Ankita's plan worked.
Zebbie was sweating like hell in nervousness.She was looking at Arjun.
Arjun was amazed at her words.
He understood it finally,that,how much Zebbie loves him.
Arjun goes away from there.
Zebbie looks at him.
Ankita nudges her to go behind him.
Zebbie runs behind him.
Rathod: Ab indono ko kuch waqt akela chhor dena chahiye.Akele saath rahenge,toh,indono ke beech ki dooriya nazdikiyo mein badal jayega.
Ankita: yup. I hope so.Hum chalte hai yahaan.Let them remain alone for some time. Chaliye niche,warna mehman kya sochenge.
Rathod: haan,Chalo.
Rathod and Ankita goes away from.

Arjun,puting up a fake anger on his face,goes away from there.
Zebbie runs behind him.
Zebbie: Arjun,rukiye.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lst prt.
Zebbie:Rukiye,Arjun,please.
Arjun doesnt stop.
He infact goes inside the guest room and closes the door on her face.
She feels bad.
She starts crying.
Zebbie knocks at the door.
Zebbie(crying):Arjun,please darwaza kholiye.Please,Arjun.
No answer...
Ekdum Silence.
Zebbie(thinks): unhe kuch ho toh nahi gaya.
Zebbie again knocks the door.This time a bit loudly.
Zebbie(in tears): Please,Arjun.Darwaza khol dijiye.Mujhe andar aana hai. Aapko kya hua hai?
Arjun finally speaks up.
Arjun: Darwaza khula hai.Andar aa jao,jaan.
She froze after hearing the word,"Jaan",from him.
She was smiling amidst her tears.
She slowly opened the door and the sight infront of her her shocked her to the core.
Yes.
Arjun stood there.His back was facing her.His injured arm was very visible.Blood drops were falling from the injured place.But,the most shocking sight was that her Arjun was not wearing his white kurta.He was trying to attend to his wound.
His bare body was visible.His well-toned body,his biceps,his six pack was totally visible.
She immediately went to him.
As she went to touch him,he removed her hands.
She felt bad,very bad.
Her eyes started to brim with tears.
As she was going to other side of the room,to get the first aid box from the drawer,Arjun held Zebbie by her wrist.
She was stunned.
Zebbie: Arjun,mujhe...
He didnt let her complete her words.
He pulled Zebbie towards him and pinned her to the wall.
She was feeling sad and scared,as well.
She was trembling with fear.
Arjun was observing this carefully.
She was shivering.Tears started to fall from her doe shaped eyes.
Arjun's gaze were troubling her.She lowered her gaze,because,she couldnt see her husband in pain.
Moreover,she,actually cant see the blood dripping from his arms.
Finally,she mustered the courage.
Zebbie(not looking into his eyes): Ar..jun,mujhe jaane diji..ye. Aap..k..e haatho se khoon beh..raha..hai. First aid lagane dijiye mujhe,please,Arjun.
As Zebbie tried to move,Arjun made his grip on Zebbie,tighter.
Now,she really couldnt move.
She broke down,finally,accepting her defeat.
Arjun couldnt see tears in her beautiful eyes.Her tears affected him a lot.
Arjun leaned down a bit and sucked away all her tears and also,placed a soft,wet kiss on both her eyes.
Zebbie felt as if she was in Heaven.
Still,she couldnt see her husband in pain.
She tried to speak,but,before she could speak,his lips met hers.
He pulled her for a passionate kiss.
At first,she couldnt respond,due to the shock.
But,after Arjun started rubbing his hands on her back,just to calm her down,she responded.
Zebbie threw her arms and encircled his neck tightly.
As Arjun bit her lower lip,she moaned a bit...
"Arjunn...", she moaned.
This brought a sweet smile on his face.
As they broke the kiss to grab some air,Arjun pecked her lips gently,this time,to make her believe,that,he will remain hers,always.
Now,Arjun spoke up.
He kept his forehead on hers.
She felt his minty breath on her face,that soothed her a lot.
Arjun: Mere dard ki dava koi first aid nahi,sirf aur sirf tum ho,Zebbie.I love you.
She slowly opened her wet eyes.
Still she didnt rise her gaze.
Arjun slowly pulled her chin towards him and said,
Arjun: Aakhein kholo,Zebbie.Tumhe iss halat mein dekhke,Dard Mujhe Hota Hai.Please,apne nazre mujhse milao.
She slowly lifted her gaze and looked towards him.
She immediately tore a part of her dupatta and tied it on Arjun's arm.After tying the dupatta,she placed a warm,soothing kiss on the wound.
Zebbie couldnt hold herself.
She hugged Arjun tightly,as she could.Arjun also hugged her tightly.
He found the situation apt to remove all the pains and sorrows from their life.
But,he didnt want to do anything without her consent.
Arjun was about to ask her permission,when she said,"Arjun,main aaj se humare rishte mein koi gile shikwe nahi chahti hu.Aaj main saare gile shikwe ko mitana chahti hu."
he got his answers,and,Zebbie,being his wife,understood.So,she let her husband do the needful to strengthen their relationship.
Arjun removed her hair and threw it back.He leaned down and placed a trail of wet kisses on the nape and let his lips linger their,for a while.She felt peaceful.He brushed his nose on her cheeks and placed a warm kiss on them.
He then broke the hug and slightly pinned her to the wall.She was now looking at him,intently.Arjun kept his hands on her waist and tightened the grip.He pulled her for another passionate kiss.As they kissed each other,Arjun's finger played with the dori of her blouse.He tried to untie the dori of the blouse and he succeeded in it.Then,he grazed his cold hands on her back.She felt calm.
After their romance,Arjun picked her up in his arms and carefully placed her on the bed.He went to the other side and sat,hugging her tightly.
Zebbie placed her head on his chest and spoke up.
Zebbie: Arjun,I love you a lot.Agar aap ko kuch hojata hai,toh,Dard Mujhe Hota Hai.
Arjun:Main aisa kabhi nahi karunga.Jab tum roti ho,toh,Dar Mujhe Hota Hai.Love you,too.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note.

In the previous story,Arjun was paired with Riya,but this,i paired myself with him.
Dont get angry on me.
Please,iss bacche ki jaan mat lena.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was awesome di..
Again rthod and ankita helped them ..

But why always zebbie suffers so much... She even hurt herself ..

I was crying.
Di koi aise os likho na jismai ye sab arjun k saath ho..
I knw u don't want nythng happened to arjun...but
uss samjhe ya samjhau ko bhi samjhna chahiye..

Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

It was awesome di..
Again rthod and ankita helped them ..

But why always zebbie suffers so much... She even hurt herself ..

I was crying.
Di koi aise os likho na jismai ye sab arjun k saath ho..
I knw u don't want nythng happened to arjun...but
uss samjhe ya samjhau ko bhi samjhna chahiye..

Nice update


i know.
Arjun ko samjhna chahiye par,I cnt see Arjun suffering because of me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update zebbie...!
heart touching!!!
lakin mujhe zebbie ke liye bura laga!!!😭
bahut bura laga...
lakin happy ki zebbie ko end mein arjun mila!!!
because he desrves her!!

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