OS- If riya would be there./upd pg-43.*imp note-pg47*sorry - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb one yr...!!
thank god riya is safe...!!! loved everyone's concern for her...
fb was lovely...!!! and when arjun said will be backs soon it was shoo cutee...!!!
shree liza bhi na😆 but how does liza know riya?
continue soon...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
"Will be back soon" was amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Index


pt 1 - pg - 1
pt 1b - pg - 4
pt 2 - pg - 7
pt 2b - pg - 8
pt 3 - pg - 10
pt 4 - pg - 13
pt 5 - pg - 14
pt 5b - pg - 18
pt - 6 pg - 20



sorry guys bhul gayi thi..
Thanks to

WJ.MAD

to remind me...
Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
phewww thnk god riya is save again n thnk u sooo much for the update n pm...

i hope yeh dono ko jaldi se pyaar ho jaye or humare akdu rawte apni fellings ko reject na kare...

good update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting part, i hope Arjun realize his love for Riya,
I love shree and Liza fight continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb...
'Will be back sn' hay kitna acha lagta hai arjun ke muh se sun ke.
Liza ri ko kaise janti hai.
Yar mera naseeb he kharab hai. Sare amazing stories ke bare me mujhe he akhi me pata chalta hai. Aaisa kyu?
leave my bakwas nd
Update soon aur pm karna mat bhulna
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey its nice update and please continue soon dear eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 12 years ago

big wala thank you for reading this...

i am a goldie now..

so guys this is my first ariya work..

and big wala sorry for late update...

now enjoy this part...

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Riya was in the hospital bed thinking about the past words said by him...

He do cares for you riya... and he said he will be back...

In the confrence room--

Shree was pissed off with liza now... 100th time she asked him about riya but no answer...

shree- bas karo... pehele ye batao ki tum riyqa ko kaise jante ho...

liza - 3 years pehele riya CBI mai as a research specialist kaam karti thi in the desk.. and mai waha as a forensic expert thi , so hum dono ki acchi banti thi...

shree is now feeling jealous that his one and only best buddy riya ko ab share karna padega ... wo bhi iss liza ke saath..

no way..

shree- wo ree ko na saap ne kaat liya tha... iss liye..

tum chaho toh mil sakti ho...kaam khatam hone k baad..

liza- chaho toh.. ofcourse i want to meet her...

rathod comes there and asked , kya chal raha hai..

liza- wo sir , reports aa gaye...

jis snake ne arjun sir ko bite kiya tha.. usmai zeher bilkul tha hi nahi..

arjun comes there

rathod- matalb...

arjun- matlab ki.. pehele hi unka zeher nikala gaya ho...\

rathod- par kyun???

liza answered..

liza- kyun ki snake venom ka kafi demand hai international market mai... khas kar ke pharmacetual companies mai bahaut demand hai iss poison ki.. aur ye toh snakes ka king hai...sabse jada khatara isse hi hai..

arjun- sahi kaha... snakes ke poison se cancer and tumors ki medicine tayar kiya jata hai.. kai anti-biotics bhi banaya jata hai..

rathod- toh ye kaam kaun kar sakta hai..

liza- koi serpent ( researcher of snakes) ye phir koi zoologiest...

arjun- hume wo mil gayi...

rathod- matlab..

arjun- shree, uss area mai kaun hai jo iss jhute iccha dhari nagin per article likh raha ho aur research kar raha ho...

kuch samje ya samjahun...

shree- yes sir.. wo press reporter aur wo aurat..

rathod- lets go hume jaldi jana hoga..

liza tum bhi hamare saath chalogi ... tumhari jarurat pad sakti hai...

then the total team , shree -liza-sameer-arjun reached at the photo studio of the researcher ..

on glare of arjun and ratthod and he spilled out every thing..

( guys u know about the case , so i wanna focus more on ariya and on those case where i will include riya

is it ok guys

or any complain ..

do let me knw about taht,,)

arjun in the end-

agar is environment mai hum jee rahe hai puri aazadi k saath toh kisi dusre ki zindegi tabah karna hamara haq nahi hai.. chahe wo insaan ho ya janwar.. samjhi ya samjahaun...

aur bharat sambidhan k niyam k anusaar banyaprani ko hani pahuchana gunah hai...

shree le jao inhe...

2 hours later---

she was waiting for him..

kaha gaye ab tak..

riya in her mind- ye mujhe kya ho raha hai.. abhi 5 ghante pehele hi toh dekha tha unhe..

pata nahi mera dimaag..

chotu was the silent observer of her behaviour and he was trying very hard to supress his smile..but he can't absorb her glares anymore..

chotu- ree..itne time se uss door ko kyun ghoor rahi hai.. wo aa jayenge..

riya- nahi toh... mai kaha kuch kar rahu hoon...aur tum ye kya keh rahe ho...

chotu- accha ab mujhse chalaki... arjun sir ka wait kar rahi ho na...

riya blushed...

chotu- dekh dekh...kaise laal ho rahi ho unka naam sunte hi...

riya - mujhe pareshan mat karo chotu...

in the mean time rathod and arjun along withy shree and liza entered her room...

rathod was the first one who moved towards her ..

he sat opposite to her on the stoool...

rathod- ab kaise tabiyat hai tumhari...

riya- thick hoon sir..

then her eyes fell on liza..

riya- lee..tu yaha..

her happiness have no boundary now...

liza came forward and hugged her...

liza- ree... tu ab thick toh hai na...mai toh dar hi gyai thi...

riya - pr tu yaha kaise..

liza- aap jaha ho waha hhum chale aaye...

ria- what...

liza- are maine ETF join kiya hai ...

riya- wow..ab toh bahaut maja aayega...

the buddies didn't realised that their seniors are surprised and two other are burning lava inside..

our great choree..

both glared at li-ya

then riya looked up to shree and chotu-

riya - arre tum dono ko kya hua... aise ghoor kyun rahe ho ...

shree- accha ab ye aa gayi toh hume toh bhul hi gaye wow...

chotu- haan.. jao isi se lage raho..

both liza and riya bursted on laughing...

rathod looked at his team members and smiled at their cute antics...

arjun was sooo happy to see riya happy... the missing glow of her face is returning ...

he signalled rathod that he want to talk with him ...

and comes outsied of the room...

rathod followed him...

arjun- mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai rathod...

rathod- haan raute bolo..

arjun- riya k bare mai..

rathod- riya k bare mai...kya..

arjun- usse research desk wapas bhej do ...

rathod- what??? aur ye kiske liye...

arjun- hamari team ki bahlayi ke liye...

rathod- sayad tum bhul rahe ho raute ki wo bhi team ka ek ahem hisssa hai... aur sabko uski jarurat hai...

tumhe bhi... kaho toh sabse jada tumhe hi uski jarurat hai...

arjun- mujhe kisi ki jarurat nahi hai rathod... mai toh bas

[in his mind- jarurat hai rathod.. bahaut jada jarurat hai... ab toh uski aadat si ho gayi hai... ab aur iss aadat ko nahi chod sakta ...

har baar jab usse kisi aise halat mai dekhta hoon toh ... pata nahi dil ko dard hota hai.. aur ye dard dobara seh nahi sakta

bardast nahi hota ...

kamse kam wo safe toh rahegi...]

rathod- tum toh bas kya raute..

sach baat toh ye hai ki tum usse iss haal mai nahi dekh sakte...

arjun- mujhe kuch nahi pata ...mai jaa raha hoon usse baat karne...

arjun sprinted out of the corridor...

After such a long time , sameer damsingh rathod found his old arjun... his best buddy..

the same care..the same fear..but that time it was for roshni and now it was fro riya...

he thanked riya in his mind for giving his old friend back to him...ab bas iss raute ko samjhna baki hai...

In her room-

they stopped their chit-chat when arjun entered the room...

shree- sir hum chalte hain ...

coz his facial expression was is like that ki wo riya sde kuch imp baat karna chahata hai...

ria looked at his face...

riya- in her mind- ab inhe kya hua..

koi na.. aaye toh sahi...

shr-li-cho , the trio left the rooom leaving arjun and riya in the room...

arjun moved towards her... she lowered her gaze...

arjun took a seat next to her...

arjun looked at her face..it have angelic glow.. her smiling face... how will he tell riya about it.. but he have to tell her ... for her sake... nope for himself..

arjun- riya ... ab kaise feel kar rahi ho..

riya- better sir.. aur aap..

arjun- mujhe kuch nahi hua..

ah..wo ..riya , muje tumse kuck baat karni hai riya...

she was confused ..

ab inhe mujhse kya baat karni hai...

he closed his eyes , and said... riya research desk wapas chali jao...

she was hell shocked to hear this from him...

but she answered unexpected -

agar aap yahi chahate hai toh mai chali jaungi...

arjun was more shocked than her...

riya - sir mujhe rathod sir se baat karni hai...

arjun thought- unpredictable is this girl... everytime her talks made him speechless... now what is coocking up in her mind...

arjun- ok ... tum thick ho riya.. i mean tumhe koi problem nahi...

riya- sir problem toh aap ko thi... but aap chinta mat kijiye ...aapki problem solve ho gayi...

arju mentally cursed himself... this stubborn girl still thinking about him ...

arjun didn't answered her question and left the room...

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after sometime rathod comes out of the room...

but rathod comes out with a smiling face...

arjun looked at his face...

what the ..ye has raha hai..

ab kya kaha iss ladki ne... totally unpredictable...

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so guys ye long part tha ya nahi..

ab case khatam ho gaya..

new case bhi baki hai...

so next case mai hum aisha ki entry karwa denge...

phir ...

padhoge toh pata chalega...

and mai bhi unpredictable hoom , riya ki trah..so pls bear with me.. jo hoga accha hi hoga ..aur ariya toh pakka hi hoga...

so jitno ko pasand aaya hit the like buttons and do comment...

pms thode late milega..tab tak pls samhal lena

thank you soo much...

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update :) loved it
awww shree was jealous that he has to share riya with liza now 😆
oh so riya used to work in CBI with liza
awww riya was waiting for him
and love the way chotu was teasing riya
love riya and liza's bonding :)
loved arjun's concern for riya
riya agreed to go back to research desk
why was rathore smiling at the end?
continue soon

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