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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for late comments,Vampu.
Tumhe nahi lagta hai ki,humare ACP sahab ko thori jald hi farak parha????
*glares*
update was awesome.
Love the team's concern for Riya.
I wished this would have happened in reality...
Waiting for ur next update.

Mention not di, chalta hai.. 😊 N haan usse kuch jald hi farq pada..huh.. Bt ab riya ko kuch nahi hoga.. Arjun ko farq jo padta hai.. 😳
Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nabeela99

I am really glad that you are including Riya in every case!!!


Seriously you don't know how happy I am!!!
PLease don't stop writing about them!! Include her in every way as possible until ...the serial ends...
but I don't want that to happen either!

Please don't stop!

I am just glad that Ariya is still alive!!!!!
I just love them to the moon and back!! Yup that's how much I love!
I might sound like a maniac but it's true!!!

Update soon!!
and Pm me
please please

😊



😊

Thank you soo much fr liking it.. Yeah thts exactly wht i want on every ariyan's face.. Our cute dimple smile.. So no more sheding tears.. Coz riya wll always stay alive here..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for ur support, likes n comments..
It really meant a lot to me..


Next continued...


Riya was in OT. Once again fighting for life... Doctors are trying the level best for her treatment...


Here shree, chotu n rathod are very tensed for her...
They can't see her in that state...
Shree was praying to god to save her..
Once againg they can't afford to loose her...
Their best friend... The statistics queen...


Arjun was outside of hospital in the garden...

He was very worried for her..

'' farq padta hai sir.. Aap ko farq padta hai..'' these words are echoing in his ears..

Why ??? Why?? Againg his brain asked this question to him..

He thought...
Har baar jab tumhe uss haal mai dekhta hoon toh farq padta hai riya...kyun ..jabab nahi hai..
Magar farq padta...

Nahi seh pata mera dil tumhari har dard ko ..
Pata nahi riya ..
Tum meri aadat ban gayi ho..
Aur sayad..
Jarurat bhi..


Uss waqt bhi aisa hi mehsoos hua tha riya..


Flashback-

' doc , kuch bhi kijiye ,, lekin isse bacha lijiye..''

after 2 hours..

The doc comes out from the OT..

All the four of them runs to the doctor...

Rathod was the first woh asked..
Rathod- doc , kya hua ? Kaise hai wo..
Arjun stood silent there ..waiting for answer...
His heart rate is very high..
He don't want to face his past again..loosing someone closed to his heart..

Doc- dekhiye... Humne unka total body blood transfusion karwa diya hai..
Aur unk intestine mai bhi hume surgery karwani padi..

Unhone sirf uss tablet ko gulp kiya tha..
Kyun ki uss tablet ka concentration unk body k saliva k concentration se kam tha , iss liye uss tablet ki fluid, unk body mai mix nahi ho payi..

Aap ne bilkul sahi samaya pe unhe admitt kiya hai..

Shree- par wo thisk toh hai na doc..

Doc- dekhiye .. Wo iss waqt comma mai hai..
Unk body ko stable rakhne k liye unhe komma mai rakhna pada..

48 hrs k observation k baad hum kuch clear kar sakte hai..

Chotu- matlab..

Doc- chinta mat kijiye hum bacha lenge unhe..

They all sighed in relief..

Arjun goes to the door n looked her through the viewing hole..

Her pale white face, lifeless body and her last words..
Just acheing his heart..

He told himself..
Kyun riya,,kyun samajhna chahati ho mujhe...


Flashback end-


arjun told himself...
Iss baar bhi tumne wahi kiya riya..
Ab aur tumhe iss haal mai nahi dekh sakta..
Kuch karna padega riya..

Har baar mai hi hoon wo wajah, jo tumhe kuch karne par majboor karti hai...

Ab aur nahi...

His chain of thought breaks wen shree called him..

Shree- sir..
Arjun- haan shree..
Shree- wo riya ko..
Arjun- riya ko kya...
Shree- hosh aa gaya..

Before shre could say anything else he runs to the hospital room.

He goes inside..

Rathod was there sitting beside her and speaking to her about how she was feeling..
Ok or not...

Her face had lost the glow ..

She looked at him..
Their eyes met..
Milloins of unknown feelings , n questions are expressing both of their eyes..
Bt their silence is the best thing tht was speaking with them..


The sudden shrill of rathod's phone brought them out of their trance..

Rathod received the call..

Rathod- ok hum abhi aate hain..
Raute chalo..
Forensic reports aa gaye hain..
We need to go..

Arjun just nodded ..
Then he looked at riya..
She seems upset..

Rathod saw him gazing at her..

Rathod slowly comes out of the room..

Arjun moved forward..

He touches her cheek n said..
'' will be back soon.. ''
she looked at him n flashed her dimpled smile...

Yeas this smile is the best needed thing for him now...

He goes out..
He saw chotu there..
Arjun- chotu.. Take care of her..

Chotu- yes sir.. Mai usk saath hi rahunga..


Now in the forensic lab..

Shree was shocked to see the forensic expert..

Liza D cruz- he muttered ..

Rathod looked at him..
Then at liza..


Liza introduced her self..

She told that ye dono hi khun snake bite se hui hai..
Lekin jo saap hume mila hai ussse nhi..


Suddenly something sturks in arjun's mind..
Arjun- saap na toh mujhe bhi kata tha...
Par mujhe inta affect nahi hua jitna ki riya ko hua..
Maine anti-venom liya tha..par kuch toh hona chahiye..

Liza- sir , i think aapka blood test karwani padegi..

Aur riya,, ye..

Shree- etf ki research specialist..

Liza- tumse kisine nahi pucha specky..
Shree- kuch jada hi bol rahi ho ok...

Rathod- wht is this.. Tum dono ek dushre ko jante ho..
Shre- haan sir hum ek hi college mai the..

Rathod- ok..

Liza- kahi ye ,. Riya mukharjee toh nahi..

Shree- tum ree ko janti ho..

Liza- sayad haan..


Guys the case will be solved in the next part..

If u liked it then do comment pls...


Thank you..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am loving this OS more & more.Thank you So muccchhh🤗.I loved this line when he touches her cheek & says "Will be back soon..".Thanks for the PM 😊
Edited by ariyaFan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) loved it
loved everyone's concern for riya
flashback was so emotional
hospital scene was lovely when arjun sees riya
shree and liza are always fighting 😆
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing concept dr.

read it in one go.

thanks fr keeping riya alive.

th way u potray her involvement in evry case is mindblowng.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am just loving this OS more and more the way it is progressing.
Thnks,Vampu...
Flashback was emotional.
Shree and Liza alwys fighting like cats and dogs...
Ekdum tom and jerry hai dono...
What???
Liza knows Riya???
Now,thats interesting.
Will wait for the next update...
Thnks for the pm,dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the "will b back soon" aww !!!!

continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

loving this OS... thanks 4 keeping Riya alive in this OS... continue soon
How does Lisa know Riya?????


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Posted: 12 years ago
Waooo anki..
grate update..
ups ab ye arjun kya sonch raha hai...
kahin riya se door jaane ke...????
nooo ehsa maat kerna...vampuuu...tum to cute vali vampu ho...
wopiiooo riya is fine..
lv the fb...
that was most heart touching...
we will come back...how sweet...
uppp achha adharoraaa
update soon...plxzzz

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