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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Ohhh fulll of emosionssz tum to mujhe rula ker mano giii..
poor ayeshaaa...
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
AWW... Such an emotional part!!! AWESOME!!! Waiting 4 more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey sry for the late reply😭!!!!!!!
hayeee!me big fan of ur emotional stories!
very nice concept!!!!!!!!!!1
my heart goes out for aisha!!!!!!😭
i loved riya character alot...arjun concern for aisha was good!
fab updates...very good emotions!!!
aishaaa!!!😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
pooorr aisha!!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi m back...
First thanks to all those who read liked and commented on this story...
I guess this ll b last part...

Aisha completely brokedown after hearing to riya's words. She kept her head on riya's shoulder and cried her heart out.
After some time riya offered her some water and she accepted it. Then she started speaking.

'mera aur nishant ka love marriage tha. Sab bahut khush the iss shaadi se. Hum dono bhi. I had found someone who respected me, treated me like a princess. Warna mujh jaisi anaath ko kahan itna pyaar milta hai... *sigh* he respects me for the person i am. Mera job sirf mere liye nahin uske liye bhi maayne rakhta hai.. But that was not with my mil.first she hated me for the fact that i was an orphan. She always wanted grandson and i was not conceiving. Mere jeth and jethani ko beti hui thi... Zoya... 6 months pehle jab wo log US jaa rahe the to zoya ko mere paas chodke gaye. Didi never trusted my mil in zoya's matters. Unke liye to zoya ek bhoj thi...'
again tears started flowing from her eyes.
'najaane ye log kyun ladka ladki mein farak karte hai..samajhte kyun nahin hai ki beta beti ke beech farak karne ka zamaana gaya...' riya said with tears in her eyes.
'phir uske baad i had to go for undercover mission. TAbhi uske beech i got to know i was pregnant... I immediately informed my seniors and came back. All this was just a month ago... Jab main wapas aayi ti maaji bahut khush thi. Baar baar kehte the ki pota chahiye.. I was quiet. Nishant was also very happy riya... Soo very happy. He wanted to be with me.. But usse California jaana tha ek meeting ke liye. I sent him. Abhi bhi wo wohin hai. But unke jaate hi kinsman ne apna khel khela. Mujhse maaji ne chupaya ki zoya mere absence mein beemaar thi. Uska treatment hua tha but she was not completely cured. Her health went worse again. Main office se chutti leke uske treatment ke liye bhaagdaur kar rahi thi. But docs ka kehna tha ki uska bachpana bahut mushkil tha. Last attempt uska surgery karne waale the... I was arranging blood. But raste mein gaadi ka breakfail hogaya aur...'
she broke into sobs again.
'aur... Maine... Maine mera baccha khoya... Aur...aur zoya ko bhi nahin bacha payi...'
she cried again, riya too had tears in her eyes. She was reminded of the time she lost their 1st baby.
' i can understand aisha'... She said emotionally.
Aisha flared up.. ' koi nahin samajh ta... Jispe guzarta hai sirf wahi jaanta hai wo...'
'isiliye to kehrahi hun aisha ki main samajhti hun.. Even i lost my 1st baby in a car accident... I am not saying this because i sympathise you for your condition. Its because i understand your loss. Do you have something more to tell me? Apne man mein Jo bhi hai tell me aisha... U ll feel better..'
'haan. Iske baad sab mujhe panauti, manhoos kehte hai... Baanj ka label daal diya hai mujhe. Hard waqt taane, hurting words... Bas hogaya hai mujhe. Aur to aur nishant ki doosri shaadi tak ke baare mein socha jaa raha hai... Ab to sachme lagne laga hai ki mein manhoos hon. First my parents den my brother, phir zoya and mera khud ka baccha. Jinhe bhi mein pyaar kartihu hun they leave me. Ab pyaar se Dar lagne laga hai mujhe.' she cried... Arjun came in with gudiya. He had heard everything. He just asked her.
'does nishant know about this?'
'no. Himmat nahin hai mujhme..'
'usse abhi bata do aisha. Baadme agar kisi aur se pata chala to it ll create problems for you and your married life. And ye kabhi mat sochna ki tum manhoos ho... U r the beat person i have seen ever. Himmat mat haarna aisha.. Ye to sirf bura waqt tha Jo ab chat chuka hai. Ab sirf tumhari zindagi mein khushiyan hoga.. Unhe baahe kholke apnao...' he handed gudiya to her. She smiled at the baby and baby smiled at her in return.
'dekha aisha...ye bacchi bhi tumhare saath khush hai. Iss baar nahin hua to kya hua... Ali baar zaroor hai.. Zindagi hume make deti hai. Bas hum uska use kaiser karte hai ye humpe depend karta hai. Zindagi ke positive aspects ko dekhe aisha... Tumhare pati agar tumse saccha pyaar karta hai den he ll not blame you. Just give life and happiness a chance.. '
riya while speaking to her saw her interacting with gudiya and saw her smiling. She squeezed arjun's palm and he returned the gesture.
'agar tum gudiya ko apne paas rakhna chaho to rakh sakti ho. We will speak to orphanage.'
aisha looked at him confused so he continued. '
She is orphan and was kidnapped thinking to be a boy. Jab pata chala to garbage mein daal ke chala gaye hai.'
'log kitne bure hote hai na... I ll 1sat speak to nishant and clear everything. With him i ll adopt gudiya sir... Thanks for giving me a reason to bounce back to life...'
'no aisha... It was eating me to see you soo agitated all the time. 8 tum khushiyan homna? Tum life haste jeeyogi na?
'yes sir... I ll...' she gave them her dazzling smile.
' you can call me bhai you know!'
'ji bhaiyya..' she hugged them both with 2 babies...

Oki... I end this here. Do comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow
beautiful n heart touching end
loved it..
claps!!
Amazing dear..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
awww..
So sweet nd emotional..
Lovd it..
Edited by aroojarain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!!

beautiful ending!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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**edited**

I love how different this concept is.
Well done!

Hope to see more awesome stuff from you.
Edited by Arya1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Amazing update... Loved Riya comforting Aisha nd Arjun's talk with her...

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