OS: Bounce back to life-last part pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
nice plot...
i have my guesses for Aisha's reason for that erratic behavior but i will wait for ur story to unfold!

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Next part here...

Shree went out slamming the door and spoke to chotu.
'wo khud ko samajhti kya hai? Khud ki ek bacchi hai aur kehti hai bacche sirf noisy hotel hai and are nuisance... How dare she?!'
'shree, shayad wo koi tension mein hogi...'
'koi nahin chotu... Wo badal gayi hai.. Ghamand hogaya hai usse...'

at the same time arjun came and scolded shree...
'kissi ke baare mein bina kuch jaane kuch bhi nahin bona chahiye shree... Ye galat baat hai. Bdw baby kahan hai? I have got her some cloths and baby food... Riya doc ko leke aa rahi hai...'
'sir wo so gayi hai.. Sir ke cabin mein hai..'
'oki...'
arjun went to sam's cabin and he saw her there... She took the crying baby in her arms and rocked her to sleep. The scene cmpltly contradicted what shree was just talking outside. Aisha spotted arjun and immediately made baby sleep on the couch.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Jas always,Fab.
Loved it.
Shree's anger was justified.
See,told ya.
It was Aisha's daughter...

Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
superb OS :) loved it
arjun married to riya and they have a daughter
and sam married to ankita and they have a son
why is aisha behaving like that?
is that baby her daughter?
where is aisha's husband?
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
First sorry...
Ab se mein apne stories ko bakwaas nahin kahoongi... PAkka and kaan pakadke sorry...
N last update was small as i slept when typing:( ye thoda bada hoga... I ll wait for your reviews...

'aisha, tum yahan?!'
'haan sir... Wo... Wo.main... She was crying and i was being distracted from my work. So i thought of making her quiet..'
'oki aisha... Tq a lot.. Aur zoya kaisi hai...? KAbhi apni beti ko office le aana...' he smiled at her.
'zoya meri beti nahin hai sir. Aur ab wo iss duniya mein nahin hai.'

she rushed out of the cabin leaving a bewildered arjun behind. He immediately thought that to be the reason of aisha's behaviour.
He went to the baby and took to washroom to give it a bath and changed its dress.

Soon riya came with anjali and took over the baby from arjun.
When she was feeding,
'ri, i think you should talk to aisha...'
'kya hua arju?' u look worried..'
'yeah. U remember i told you she is behaving off character nowadays?! I think its related to her daughter. She said she is no more in this world.. May be that's eating her from inside... She is like a sis to me and i can't see her like this...' arjun said cmpltly worried about aisha
'i understand arju.. I ll go as soon as gudiya sleeps...' she pats the baby and soon she fell asleep. She made her lie on couch with pillows around and went to aisha's cabin..

She did not knock. She just opened the door and went inside. She had anjali in her arms. She saw aisha sitting on couch with a photograph in her hand and was crying. Riya kept her hand on her shoulder and aisha looked up at her. She hastily stood up and wiped her tears.
'riya mam aap?'
'just riya. Aur mujhe aansu chupane ki zaroorat nahin hai aisha... Aansu ko behne do. Dill halka hoga...'
'nahin aisa koi baat nahin hai. Wo bas...'
at the same time anjali started wriggling out of riya's hand and started leaning towards aisha. She forwarded her hands to take her in her arms but soon retracted as words from past started ringing in her ears.

**voices in her brain**
'tum itni manhoos ho humare ghar keliye. Ate hi bete ko ghar se alag kiya aur ab uska beti ko bhi mar daala? Undone to tujhpe Bharosa kiya tha na usse dekhbaal acche se karogi! Par tune kya kiya ha? Teri wajah se aaj zoya mar chuki hai...'

'tu apne khud ke bacche ko tak nahin bacha saki. Kisne kaha tha car drive karne ko? Maar diya na humare pote ko? Agar baccha nahin chahiye tha to pehle bol deti, tujhe iss ghar mein late hi nahin the hum. Ab humare jeena mushkil kyun bana rahi hai kalmoohi?'(sry for using this)

'suno ji.. Ye bechari to ab kabhi maa nahin ban sakti... Baanj hai ye..'

'ye panauti hai... Manhoos hai. Apne bacche ko uske paas mat chodna... Bacche pe bura saaya padega...'

'aane do nishant ko.. Tujhse usse talaak dilwake uska doosri shaadi karwaungi main. Baanj ko kyun gale mein latkaye ghoome hum?'

'manhoos... Baanj... Panauti...'

**voices in her brain end**

riya saw her retracting her hands. She saw myriad emotions on her face.. Hurt helplessness anger...

Tears welled up in aisha's eyes as she recalled words hurled at her from part few days... She looked at riya with helplessness in her eyes..
Riya placed a palm on her hand

'wanna talk aisha? Dard ko apne andar mat chupao... Boldo..man halka hoga... Dard bantne se man halka hota hai.. Mujhe apne sister samjho... M here for you...'

tears flowed freely from her eyes...

Ll update last part in some time...
Waiting for your responses...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Fab update...
Loved Riya's charecter a lot.
What????
Ayesha suffered so much...
Oh god!!!
These typical mother in laws...
They should rot in hell.
How could they do such a thing???
How cud they such nasty words to Ayesha???
I m myself feeling bad for Ayesha...
Thanks for writing such a beautiful update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
nice update
awww arjun considers aisha as his sister
feeling bad for aisha 😭 her baby died
just hate aish'a mil
poor aisha she has been trhough a lot
love the way riya was comforting her

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
awsum update...!!!
omg aisha has gone through so much...!!! feeling so bad for her😭
loved riya...!!! the way she is trying to comfort aisha...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
so sad dear!!
update soon
lovely plot
very good work dear!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Aww thats so cruel hw cn someone something lik dat... feeling bad for Aisha... update soon

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