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Hola amigos...
There is a bit emotional OS..
I dunno why i always end up writing emotional...
Anyways, to start with, this OS is on aisha, the pain and turmoil she is undergoing after an incident.
The main plot comes when there is a small baby brought to ETF. I know many have used this concept but i ll keep the story bit diff.
Intro: Arjun is married to riya and has a daughter anjali and Sam to ankita, and has a son, about 4 months elder to anjali, whose name is samar.
Aisha was a new recruit in ETF as ammunition expert.
She was a happily married woman. Her husband nishant was a doctor and a dear friend of sameer.
She was very happy, with her husband... Daredevil at work. Wo Jo kisi se na Darti thi, kisike aage na jhukti thi. Attitude to maalamaal tha usme. But very good at heart. She was an introvert by nature. So she had difficulty in making friends.
Samar was about 10 months now and anjali was 6 months Old. Riya was still not back to her work as research analyst in ETF. So aisha never met her but just had heard about her a lot. She wanted to meet her and ankita about whom she had heard soo much.
Achanak one day everything changed. She started behaving rudely with everyone, didnt pay much interest in any case.
Everyone started worrying about her. Most of the time her anger was directed towards shree. Sam wanted to ask nishant about her behavior but he was not available.
She had shut herself from world.
One morning, arjun brought a small baby girl, wrapped in ragged cloths to ETF. All were stunned to see that baby in his arms.
'raute, ye baccha??!'
'bacchi rathod.. ETF ke saamne Jo garbage box hai usme thi. Rone ki awaaz sunaidiya to jaake dekhe to ye baccha thi wahan. Isse sambhalo. I ll get some cloths and food and also call doc. If possible i ll call riya also.'
with that he went out after handing the baby to sameer.
Sameer wrapped the baby in a towel and tried to keep it warm. They were trying to keep her calm, but the baby was crying continuously. They even tried to feed milk to her but in vain.
Finally shree went to aisha's cabin and spoke to her.
'aisha, please baahar chalo. Wo baby tab se ro rahi hai... We are not able to handle her. Please chal na...'
she was facing her back to him and clutched the edges of table tight. It seemed she was fighting with herself.
'no shree. I won't. Tum yahan se chale jao'
'but aisha.. Wo baby...'
'maine kahan na shree just get lost from here. Mujhe koi bacche ki dekhbaal nahin karni.. Wo sirf Rona jaante hai aur kuch nahin. They are nuisance...'
shree was very angry and went out banging her cabin's door.he was fuming.
As soon as he went out, tears started flowing from her eyes...
'm sorry shree... I had to do this. Warna shayad meri buri kismat usse bacchi ko bhi zinda na rakhe...'
i ll update next and last part tmro.
Do give me your reviews.
Pata hai ki story bakwaas hai.. But i had to write kyunki this plot is playing in my messy brain from y'day... Mujhe bardaash karna pls...
Waiting for your comments... :)
and also pls bura mat maan na agar mein kisi story pehanke comment na karu to... Its difficult with my mobile...
With loads of love,
pari
There is a bit emotional OS..
I dunno why i always end up writing emotional...
Anyways, to start with, this OS is on aisha, the pain and turmoil she is undergoing after an incident.
The main plot comes when there is a small baby brought to ETF. I know many have used this concept but i ll keep the story bit diff.
Intro: Arjun is married to riya and has a daughter anjali and Sam to ankita, and has a son, about 4 months elder to anjali, whose name is samar.
Aisha was a new recruit in ETF as ammunition expert.
She was a happily married woman. Her husband nishant was a doctor and a dear friend of sameer.
She was very happy, with her husband... Daredevil at work. Wo Jo kisi se na Darti thi, kisike aage na jhukti thi. Attitude to maalamaal tha usme. But very good at heart. She was an introvert by nature. So she had difficulty in making friends.
Samar was about 10 months now and anjali was 6 months Old. Riya was still not back to her work as research analyst in ETF. So aisha never met her but just had heard about her a lot. She wanted to meet her and ankita about whom she had heard soo much.
Achanak one day everything changed. She started behaving rudely with everyone, didnt pay much interest in any case.
Everyone started worrying about her. Most of the time her anger was directed towards shree. Sam wanted to ask nishant about her behavior but he was not available.
She had shut herself from world.
One morning, arjun brought a small baby girl, wrapped in ragged cloths to ETF. All were stunned to see that baby in his arms.
'raute, ye baccha??!'
'bacchi rathod.. ETF ke saamne Jo garbage box hai usme thi. Rone ki awaaz sunaidiya to jaake dekhe to ye baccha thi wahan. Isse sambhalo. I ll get some cloths and food and also call doc. If possible i ll call riya also.'
with that he went out after handing the baby to sameer.
Sameer wrapped the baby in a towel and tried to keep it warm. They were trying to keep her calm, but the baby was crying continuously. They even tried to feed milk to her but in vain.
Finally shree went to aisha's cabin and spoke to her.
'aisha, please baahar chalo. Wo baby tab se ro rahi hai... We are not able to handle her. Please chal na...'
she was facing her back to him and clutched the edges of table tight. It seemed she was fighting with herself.
'no shree. I won't. Tum yahan se chale jao'
'but aisha.. Wo baby...'
'maine kahan na shree just get lost from here. Mujhe koi bacche ki dekhbaal nahin karni.. Wo sirf Rona jaante hai aur kuch nahin. They are nuisance...'
shree was very angry and went out banging her cabin's door.he was fuming.
As soon as he went out, tears started flowing from her eyes...
'm sorry shree... I had to do this. Warna shayad meri buri kismat usse bacchi ko bhi zinda na rakhe...'
i ll update next and last part tmro.
Do give me your reviews.
Pata hai ki story bakwaas hai.. But i had to write kyunki this plot is playing in my messy brain from y'day... Mujhe bardaash karna pls...
Waiting for your comments... :)
and also pls bura mat maan na agar mein kisi story pehanke comment na karu to... Its difficult with my mobile...
With loads of love,
pari
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