SS:My Brother,My Parchayi.*ON HOLD* - Page 3

Originally posted by: ankita2804

omg...its totalllyyy diff concept...
how cud u Roshni...wo to tumhare apne bhai the na...
n u arjun... jealousyyy ???? aise jeolosy k sath kaise chief ban paoge...
poor soul Rathore...feeling so so sooo bad for him... :'( :'( :'( nind bhi mushkil se ayi unhe... :'( :'(
wow shtee n chhotu r married...
loved their bondinggg..
simplyyy superb... wat a grt family...
u r gone mr. rawte... :-@
riya...u r sooo nice... sooo sweet n caring sis...who else wud do this much for his step brother's pride... :-) **claps**

awww... Rathore will b back wid d support of Anki... chhhooo chweettt...
cant simply wait...
zebbie ki nai story... aur meri heaarbeats rajdhani ko speed pakadti h.. ;-)

Ch3.
Next Morning.
Shree and Ashima,and Chotu and aparna went to their homes for the rest of the packing and came back within 2 hours.
Riya was packing her clothes and her Bhai's too.
As she went to Rathod's room to help him pack his clothes,she saw a new form of her Rathod bhai infront of her.
A broken Rathod.
A helpless Rathod.
A sad Rathod.
She couldnt hold herself,but,she has to be strong,strong for her family and her Rathod bhai.She quickly composed herself and went towards his wardrobe.
His was brought back to reality when he heard Riya was opening his wardrobe.
Rathod composed himself.
Rathod(in a soft tone): Choti...
Her head shot up hearing up that word from her brother's mouth.She yearned to hear it from her Bhai for so many years.She was feeling very happy.
Rathod: Chotii... Main tujhe bula rahi hu,Ms.Riya Damsingh Rathod.
Riya: Boliye,bhai.Main sun rahi hu..
Rathod(in an apologetic tone): Mujhe maaf karde,Choti.Maine tere saath bohut bura bartav kiya hai.Najane maine tujhse kya kya kahaa hai. Kya tu apne iss bhai ko maaf karegi?
Riya(turning around and wiping his tears): Nahi,Bhai.Aapki koi galti nahi hai.Halat uss waqt kuch aise hi thhe jo aapko majbur kiya thha mujhse aise bartav karne keliye.Main bhala apne IDOL se naraaz kyun rahungi? Jo hua,usse bhul jaiye.Arjun Rawte aur Roshni ne apke saath jo kuch bhi kiya,usske liye main unhe kabhi bhi maaf nahi karungi.Arjun ne aapka haq cheena hai.Aapki pehchaan main wapas dilaungi.
Yeh appki Choti ka vadaa hai.
Shree: Aur hum sab ka bhi.
Rathod was very pleased to see his other team members supporting him.
Rathod: Shree aur Chotu,tum dono ko Mumbai ETF nahi chorna chahiye thha.
Chotu: Sir,humare liye aaphi ETF ki chief hai aur humesha rahenge.Rahi,uss akdu Arjun Rawte ke under kam karne ki baat,mar bhi jaunga,phir bhi,unke under kam karke main apna aur Aparna ka future kharab nahi karna chahta.Humein aapke saath rehna hai,humare bare bhai ke saath.
Aparna: Haan,Sameer bhaiya.Mujhe toh apne bhaiya ke saath rehna hai.Apnehi toh mera aur Chotuji ki shaadi karwaye thhe.Apne hi mera kanyadaan kia thha.Main aur Chotuji apke saath,apke har safar mein saath rahenge.
Ashima: Sam bhai,aapki iss behen ko maat bhuliyega.Hum bhi chal rahe hai.aap fikar maat kijiye,hum sab aapke saath hai.
Rathod(tears welling up in his eyes): Main tum sab ka shukria kaise ada karu.Mere saath jo hua hai,woh kabhi bhi nahi hona chahiye thha.Maine socha thha Arjun abhi bhi mujhe apna bachpan ka dost maanta hai,par,main galat thha.Jo bhi ho,aaj se,humari ek nayi shuruat hogi.sabki packing hogayi?
Everybody: YES SIR.
Rathod: Great,Team...
Chalo,baki saare kaam khatam karlo.
Everybody: SIR.

Riya was feeling happy to see her ola Rathod bhai back,not fully,but,slowly.Slowly,he is trying to forget all his pains.
Chotu and Shree patted her back.
Shree: Dekha Ri,thori der keliye hi sahi,par,humare wahi purane Rathod sir wapas aarahe hai.
Chotu: Haan,Shree.Bas,Bappa se yahi prarthna hai ki,yahi progress aise hi barkarar rahe.
Riya: Haan,Chotu and Shree.Mere bhai ki chehre pe yeh khushi sada bana rahe. Jisne mere bhai ki pehchaan,jiteji unse chheenli,Bhagwan unke jholi mein sirf aur sirf dukh se bhar de.

After all packing has been done,Riya and her whole family leave Mumbai for Rajasthan,for starting their new life afresh.
With the promise of bringing her old gussewale and strong determined workaholic bhai,SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD,back.

wow really nice!!

riya ko bhi ek hero lao na!! a handsome second in command for rajasthan ETF!! 😉

arjun rathore shree n chotu everyone has a pair... poor riya akkela pad gayi!! 😭

Wow...it was really nice, specially the Sam-Riya convo. I love your SS and the update was awesome.

wow!!! old rathod is backk!! but only for moment!!!

wow great start continue soon

Ch4.

3 years after.

In the palatial house,two kids were running here and there,with toy guns in their hands.
Aparna:Chetan beta,kyun itna doura rahe ho Aai ko? Chalo,jaldi Bournvita peelo...Papa se shakti shali kaun banega?
Chetan; Main banunga,Aai.After all,main Chandrakant Patil ka beta hu.
Aparna: Good boy..Jaldi peelo.
Chetan takes the glass of Bournvita in his hands and drinks it quickly.

Here,Ashima runs behind Nandini.
Ashima: Uri Baba.Nandu beta,jaldi khao Bournvita,warna aapke Mamu se daant khani paregi.
Nandini: Nahi,Maa.Abhi peeti hu.
Nandini takes the cup of Bounvita from Ashima and finishes the drink.
Ashima ruffles her hair.
Ashima: Lokkhi Meye(good girl).

The servant takes Chetan and Nandini and drops them to school.

After 10mins.
A voice straightened everybody's back.

"Team,where the hell are you? Time ki itni laparwahi?" yells a voice.
"Sorry,sir.Hum abhi aate hai."
Everybody take their gun holsters,guns and ID Proofs.
"ACP Riya Damsingh Rathod,reporting,Sir."
"Chief of Technical Team and Senior Officer,Shreekant Sen,reporting,Sir."
"Chief of Commando team and Senior Officer,Chandrakant Patil,reporting,Sir."

"Good.Agar phir se late huye,toh,traffic signal pe transfer kar dunga.Is that clear?",shouts a voice.

"YES,SIR," the trio replied.

After a while.

"Bare Mamu...", shouts Nandini.
"Mamusaa",shouts Chetan.
Both the kids' run into the arms of the Rowdy Rathod,DCP Sameer Damsingh Rathod,Deputy Commissioner of Police and chief of Rajasthan ETF.

Yes,the old Sameer Damsingh Rathod,in his old avatar,is back,with the help of his family's endless and continuous support and with the love and care of his loving wife,Ankita.

Ankita: DCP Sameer Rathod,kahaan ja rahe ho bina aarti leke?
Rathod(wrapping his arms around her neck): Humari itni majaal,ki,hum,aarti liye bagaer kahin jaaye?
Rathod takes the aarti and Ankita applies mangal tika on his forehead.It has become a habit of everyone to go to work with taking the aarti and mangal tika on their forehead.
Riya: Anki,hum bhi line mein khare hai.Agar bhai ko tika lagana ho gaya,toh,kya,aap yahaan kasht karke hume aarti lene dengi?
Ankita comes to them and everybody takes the aarti.
Nandini: Mami sa,humein bhi aarti dijiye na,please?
Chetan: Mujhe bhi,Mami sa?
Ankita: sure.Hum apne ladle bhanje aur laddli bhanji ko aarti nahi denge to aur kisko denge?
Nandini aur Chetan takes the aarti.
Now,it was time to leave for all the officers.
Riya: Bhai,aap sab office jao,Main thori der baad aaungi.
Rathod: Janta hu,Choti.Siddharth se milne jarahi ho,Aakhir,woh toh ETF mein hi humare saath kam karta hai,ETF ki second in command ki post mein.
Riya: Hawww...Bhai... Aisa maat bolo.Aaj toh Sid ka birthday hai,isiliye,uske liye kuch kharidne jana hai.Aapko toh pata hai,he loves red roses and chocolate mud cake. Aap sab jaiye,main adhe ghante baad aaungi.
Rathod: Sure,choti.But,make it fast.DCP Siddharth Singhania ko aur DCP Sameer Damsingh Rathod ko intezar karna pasand nahi hai.
Riya: SIR...
Nandini:Mamu,jaldi aiyega.Raat mein aapke saath bohut baate karni hai.
Rathod: Sure,beta.
Rathod: Shree,Lets leave.
Shree: Sir.
Shree over his walkie talkie.
Shree: DCP Sameer Rathod is coming out.Bring the SUV.Over and out.
As the SUVs were parked on the entrance of the house,Shree,Chotu and Rathod drove towards office.
Riya: Ramsingh,meri SUV thori late le ana,ok?
Ramsingh: Yes,Ma'am.

Ankita: Ooo... Humari Riya Sid keliye red roses aur mud cake le jarahi hai.
Aparna: Aai shapath,Riya.
Ashima: Uri baba,Riya.
Riya blushes hard and her cheeks turns tomato red.
After a while,she leaves in her SUV for buying red roses and mud cake for her fiance,DCP Siddharth Singhania.

yay yay!!!!!!!!!! rathod is backk!!! i m happyyy!!!

just read last 3 updates ...
awsum updates...
loved it...
love how everyone is there to support sam...
wow rowdy rathore back...
hmm riya engaged cool...
continue soon...
cant wait for the next part...