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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Superb
Want to know abt arjun.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dr i read ur updates awesm concept difrent i likd vry much i proud on riya who handle the whole team in tough time i really like the cnvrstion b/w riya nd rathod hw rathod call riya choti i like it my nck name is choti
i hope u dnt feel bore 4 such long cmment sorry if bothrng next time pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
nice concept dear ...pls do add me n PM list for any story u write pls :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola Amigos.
Sorry for updating the story so lately,coz,i had to go thru an emergency abdominal surgery.
Still,i m quite weak,but,i m in full josh to update the story.
So,please forgive me for being so late.
The next update is in the next post.
Scroll down for it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch 6.

As Riya finished writing those lines for Siddharth,she had tears in her doe-shaped eyes.Those were actually tears of joy.She was having flashbacks of the day when they first met and when they were finally engaged.
She finally kept the cake and the bouquet of red roses and the card safely on the passenger seat and started the car.
After half an hour,she reached the Rajasthan ETF Headquarters...
As she entered the office,every office staff saluted her.
Ashna,Riya's PA,greeted her.
Ashna:Good Morning,Ma'am. Aaj aap bohut khush lagrahi hai?
Riya: Good Morning to you too,Ashna dear.Haan,aaj toh main bohut hi khush hu,kyunki,aaj mere liye sabse bara din hai.Mere DCP ka birthday hai aaj.
Ashna: Wow!! Siddharth sir ki birthday hai aaj? Aaj toh double celebration hogi.
Riya(confused): Double celebration?? Matlab???
Ashna: Ma'am,ek toh aaj Siddharth sir ki janamdin hai,aur upar se,aaj meri aur Azhar ki nikah hai.
Riya: Kya??? Tumhari nikah hai aaj aur tum aaj office mein ho? Jao,abhi ke abhi.
Ashna:Haan,Ma'am.Rathod sir aur Siddharth sir se chutti le li hai.Aur yeh rahi meri nikah ki invitation card.Aab sab ko aana hai.
Riya: Ashna,alag alag invitation cards kyun? Hum toh ek parivar jaise hai.
Ashna: Woh toh hai,par,aap sab married ya engaged hai na,isiliye.
Aur,yeh lijiye.
Riya: Yeh kya hai,Ashna?
Ashna: Maine sab keliye layi hu.Yeh aap keliye red colour ki sharara layi hu aur kuch jewelleries,joh,humare yahan pehente hai,aur Siddharth sir keliye yeh white embroidered sherwani with golden colour touches.
Riya: Thank you so much,Ashna.par yeh sab lane ki kya zarurat thhi?
Ashna: Nahi,ma'am.Rathod sir aur aapki family meri bhi family hui na,isiliye.Itna toh haq banta hai mera.
A voice broke their convo.
It was DCP Siddharth Singhania.
Sid: Sahi kaha tumne,Ashna.Hum sab tumhare aur Azhar ke nikah mein zarur ayenge.Aur,where is my birthday gift?
Ashna: Thank you so much,Sir. Aur haan,aapka gift maine Riya Ma'am ko de di hai. Aiyega zarur.
Assalamualaikum.
Riya and Sid(in unison): Walekum Assalam.
Ashna leaves.
Now,its only Riya and Siddharth in Riya's cabin..
Siddharth pulls Riya into an embrace and hugged her tightly.
Riya(whispered in Sid's ears): Happy Birthday,Jaanu.
Sid: Thank you,My Riyu. I love you a lot.
Sid leaned down to place a soft,wet kiss on her lips.She equally responded to that lovely kiss.Tears of happiness rolled down her eyes.Sid broke the kiss and wiped her tears with his thumb.
Sid: Why are you crying,Riyu?
Riya: Sid,maine pichle janam mein koi punya ka kam zarur kiye honge ki tum mujhe mile.Bhagwaan se yahi prarthna karungi ki hum dono humesha ek saath rahe.
Sid: main bhi yahi prarthna mangunga Bhagwaan se.
Riya was in his cosy and warm embrace for a while.After a while,she broke the hug.
Riya: Sid,yeh lo.Tumahare liye maine tumhara favorite Chocolate Mud Cake layi hufrom our favourite pastry shop,The Cupcake Lovers,and ur favourite,red roses ki bouquet,and ur birthday card.
Sid: Thank you so much,Riyu.itna sab kuch karne ki kya zarurat thhi? Ek tum aur Rathod hi hai jo mujhe sabse zyada jaante haan.Mere maa baap toh mujhe bachpan mein anaath ashram mein chh...
Riya clamped his mouth and shook her head in negative.
This time,tears were coming out of Sid's eyes.
Riya hugged him tightly and kissed away all his tears.
Riya: oye,DCP. Tumhare aakho mein aansu acche nahi lagte hai.Aur,jaldi chalo.Cake kato jaldi se.
Sid: Oye,ACP.Mujhe dhamki de rahi ho.Accha nahi hoga.
Riya:Tab ka tab dekha jayega,par,pehle,cake katna hoga.
Riya takes the phone and calls Shree.
Riya: Hello,Shree.
Shree: Haan,Ri.bol?
Riya: Shree,sabko bolo main area mein aaye.
Shree: Ok.

Riya ends the call.
Riya: Jaldi jaldi cake cutting ceremony khatam karke,sab kam khatam karke Ashna ke nikah mein bhi toh jana hai.
Sid: Haaye... Bohut excited ho rahi ho.would be Mrs.Singhania?
Riya blushed at that.
Sid: Haaye... Agar Ashna aur Azhar ke nikaah mein humara nikah ho jaaye toh bohut ghani maza aavegi.
Riya: Haattt... Chalo jaldi.Warna,mere bhai sabka tai tai phis kardenge,yani,transfer ki dhamki denge.
Sid: Haan,chalo.
Precap: Riya and the whole family shocked to see Arjun and Roshni in Ashna and Azhar's nikaah.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Koi toh comment kardo,yaar????
Warna...
This time,i am really serious.
I m NOT going to continuw with this SS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Wow Zebbie you are an awesome writer. I liked the concept and story. Except the fact that I hate Arjun. Can we get longer parts pls?
Continue super soon :)

Luv u<333
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
awesome update :) loved it
loved riya's conversation with ashna
riya and siddharth are so cute :) love them both
they are going on ashna's nikkah :) nice
precap seems interesting.. they are going to see arjun and roshni at nikkah..
can't wait to read more
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
sid-riyaa aree so cute coupleee!!!

wht arni in nikah????

chalooo update soon!!!

wanted to see deir reactions
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
superb update...
awww riya and sid aree too cutee...
precap is interesting... arni in ashna's nikaah...
continue soon
next part ka intezar nai hota...

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