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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch2.

Shree and Riya in Riya's BMW.
Riya: Shree,zara check karna Chotu ko phone karke aur puchna,kya woh dono pohuch gaye kya?
Shree: Sure.Ri,tu chinta maat kar.Main janti hu,Rathod sir kis daur se guzar rahe honge.Par,fikr mat kar.Humare Rathod sir bohut storng hai.He will be back in his old avatar.Tumne jo faisla lia hai hum sab keliye,main tere saath hu.
Riya: Thanks,Shree.I dont know,ki,maine tumhare aur Chotu ke baare jo faisla lia hai,woh sahi hai ya gala,par,main,apne parivar ko bikharte hue dekh nahi sakti.Main bhai ko bikharte hue nahi dekh sakti.Ek din zarur ayega ki yehi ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte mere bhai ke under hi kam karega.Bohut ghamand hai na usko apne willpower aur apne kursi pe.Yehi kursi Arjun Rawte ki barbadi aur demotion ka paigam leke ayegi.Aaiji shapath. Waise,i hope u dont mind going to Rajasthan with us. Chahe toh Ashima ko bula sakte ho.After all,tum dono ki shaadi jo ho chuki hai,aur,Ashima bhi bhai ko apne bare bhai ki tarha maante hai.
Shree: Ri,Rathod sir mere bare bhai saman hai.Main toh bachpan mein hi anath ho gaya thha.Mere yeh parivaar aur Ashima ke siva aur koi nahi hai iss duniya mein.Mujhe aur Ashima ko kyun problem hogi.Chotu ko phone karne ke baad,main Ashima ko tumhare aur Sir ke ghar le aaunga.
Riya: Shree,bhai ko Sir bulana ab toh choro.Sir hum bulate thhe jab woh Mumbai ETF ki chief thhe,jo uss Arjun Rawte hai.Tum mere bhai ko bare bhaiya bula sakte ho.
Shree:Sure,Riya. Thank u so much.Aaj tumne mujhe bohut khush kardia hai.
Riya: Welcome. Chotu ko phone lagao.
Shree: Yup.
Shree calls Chotu.
Shree: Chotu,pohuch gaye ghar Rathod bhai ke saath?
Chotu: Haan.Pohuch gaye. Jaldi ana.Rathod bhai ki yeh halat mujhse dekhi nahi jarahi hai.
Shree: Haan.Hum aate hai.Raste mein hai.
Chotu: ok.Bye.
Shree disconnects the call.
Shree: Ri,kya tum mujhe thori der keliye ghar drop karsakte ho?Main Ashima ko leke sidha tumhare ghar aajaunga,ok.
Riya: Ok.
Riya,on the way,drops Shree on his home and goes away.
After 10mins,Riya reaches her home.She finds Chotu with Rathod.
Chotu: Bohut zor karke sulaya hai.Rathod bhai ko bohuthi bara sadma pohucha hai.
Riya: Haan,Chotu.Mujhse toh unka dukh dekha nahi jaraha hai.Aur,agar tu yeh soch rahi hai,ki,tune jo mere baare faisla lia hai,kya woh sahi hai ya galat,toh,ek baat boldu.You took the right decision.Main aur Aparna tumhare saath chalenge,Rajasthan,apne parivaar ke saath.
A voice speaks up.
It was Aparna,Chotu's wife.
Aparna: Haan,Riya di.Hum aapke saath hai.Arjun ji ne mere bhai ke saath bohut bura kia hai.Aaj se,balki,abhi se,hum aur Chotuji aapdono ke saath rahenge,apne iss parivaar ke saath.
Riya: Aparna,tum bohut hi acchi ho.Thanks for being with us.
Aparna: Thanks,kehne ki koi zarurat nahi hai.Apne bare bhai ki ghar pe rehna koi buri baat hai?Chotuji aur mere Aai Baba dono bachpan mein guzar gaye thhe,aur,humari shaadi toh aap aur Rathod bhai ne karwayi thhi,Toh iss naate se main apne maayke mein nahi rehsakti kya?
Riya hugged her tightly and cried.
Riya: Thanks,Aparna.Humare iss waqt mein humara saath dene keliye.Aur,mujhe Di nahi,Ri kehke pukarna,thik hai?
Aparna broke the hug and nodded he head in a YES.

A voice broke their thoughts.
It was Ashima.
Ashima: Aur mera kya hoga,Ri? Main kya parayi hu?
Riya: Aisi koi baat nahi hai.
Ashima: Rathod bhai ke saath jo hua,woh bohut bura thha. Aab hum sab,ek nayi shuruat karenge.Nayi yaadein ke saath.Nayi jagah pe,wohi pehchaan par wohi apnapaan,kyun Shree?
Shree: Correct,Ashima. Humne sab packing karli.Kal subha aur kuch saman leke aayenge.Aaaj hum sab yahi rahenge,humare Bhai ke saath,kyun?
Everybody: YES.
Chotu;Aparna,sab saman ki packing hogayi kya?
Aparna: jee haan,Sab hogayi,Bas thori bachi hai.Woh kaal subha ho jayega.
Chotu: thik hai.
Riya: Aaj,Main,Riya Damsingh Rathod,promise karti hu,ki,aaj se,balki,abhi se,main,apne bhai,Sameer Damsingh Rathod ke sar pe koi bura saya parhne nahi dungi.Kisika buri parchayi bhi parhn nahi dungi.Unki saari buri yaadein mitake unhe nayi zindagi dungi,nayi yaado ke saath,Ankita ke saath.
Aaj se,hum sab ki ek nayi shuruat hogi,nayi yaado ke saath.
Kya tum sab mere saath ho?
Everybody: Haan.Hum sab saath hai tumhare,Riya.
Aparna: Hum milke humare bare bhaiya ke pehchaan wapas layenge.Hum apne bare bhaiya ki wohi purani avatar wapas le ayenge,vada raha aap sab se.
Everyone(looking at Rathod who is sleeping): VADA RAHA BHAIYA.HUMARE SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD,hum sabki Parchayi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
wow!!!!

itss nice to seee dat everybody supporting rathodd!!


ohhh feeeling bad for rathodd!!!

but y arjun did dat???

update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: alee001

wow!!!!


itss nice to seee dat everybody supporting rathodd!!


ohhh feeeling bad for rathodd!!!

but y arjun did dat???

update soon!!



arjun was jealous of Rathod's fame as the ETF chief,thats y
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
wow!
nice...yeh kya arjun ne???
love riya character alot...great unity!
cont soon...!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
great update :)
love how everyone is there for sameer in this hard time
so shree and chotu are also going along with their wives :) nice
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Thanks everyone for ur lovely comments.
It really encourages me a lot to write more.
Iss bar thori selfish houngi.mujhe lamba lamba comments chahiye.
Agar mila,tab hi agla post update karungi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
different & interesting.😊
continue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
just read d first chap...
i will kill u both arjun n roshni...
jealous ppl...
arrghhh...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
omg...its totalllyyy diff concept...
how cud u Roshni...wo to tumhare apne bhai the na...
n u arjun... jealousyyy ???? aise jeolosy k sath kaise chief ban paoge...
poor soul Rathore...feeling so so sooo bad for him... :'( :'( :'( nind bhi mushkil se ayi unhe... :'( :'(
wow shtee n chhotu r married...
loved their bondinggg..
simplyyy superb... wat a grt family...
u r gone mr. rawte... :-@
riya...u r sooo nice... sooo sweet n caring sis...who else wud do this much for his step brother's pride... :-) **claps**

awww... Rathore will b back wid d support of Anki... chhhooo chweettt...
cant simply wait...
zebbie ki nai story... aur meri heaarbeats rajdhani ko speed pakadti h.. ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
It was fantastic, i loved their bonding! Poor Sameer, lets see how they all will bring back our Rowdy Rathore!

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