OS: Main hu Ariya Arjun Rawte.Ch5 Pg8

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Ariya: Ramu kaka,jaldi se driver ko kahiye gari nikalne ko.College jana hai.Sab log kahaan hai? Nashte keliye sab kyun nahi aye hai?

She calls out loudly...
Ariya: Aai... Baba... Kahan ho aap log???
Ramu kaka: Beta,tumhare Aai market gayi hui hai aur tumhare Baba subha subha office gaye hai,bina nashta kiye.

Ariya(in an angry tone): kaka,aap jaldi se driver ko kahiye ki car ready kare.Aaj main college nahi jaungi.Aaj indono ki khaer nahi.Mujhe ETF office jana hai,samjhhe ya samjhhau?
Ramu Kaka: thik hai,beta. Undono keliye nashta nahi logi? Tum toh nashta karo?
Ariya(still in a angry tone): Aap mera aur Avnee ka nashta lagaiye.Undono ko aaj khana nahi milega.Nashta karke main aur Avnee niklenge.ETF office jaate waqt Avnee ko school drop kardungi.
Ramu kaka: Thik hai.

Ariya: Aai,Baba... Aaj aap logo ki khaer nahi...




So,how was it?
Should i continue?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely...
so this story is about ariya
she is just like arjun😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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photo copy of arjun!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊!!!

cntinue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc start dear
luking frwd to it
do cont soon
gud concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum start...!!!
loved it...!!!
ditto arjun ki copy...!!😆
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Teaser for Ch2.


Ariya sitting in Rathod's seat,seathing with anger.

Shree,Chotu,Rathod and Ankita try to ask her what happened,
Ariya: Sam mamusaa,Baba ko phone lagaiye.Boliye ki,unki aaj bohut tagri investigation hone wali hai,aur,Aai ki bhi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch2.

Ariya,after having breakfast with Avnee,leaves the house.On the way,she drops Avnee.
Avnee: Bye,Aru tai.
Ariya: Bye,baccha.

Ariya then leaves for ETF office.

As the car stopped at a signal,she makes a call.
Voice: ETF Headquarters,Mumbai. Whom do you want to speak and Who is it?
Ariya: I want to speak with ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod.Connect the call to him,now.
Voice: Who are you speaking,Ma'am?
Ariya(bit angry): Main hu tumhare ETF 2nd in command ki beti,Ariya Arjun Suryakant Rawte,samjhhe ya samjhhau?
Voice: Sorry,Ma'am,galti ho gayi.
Ariya(bit shocked and angry):Tum kya sach mein ETF mein kam karti ho? I dont believe this. As far as i know,ETF mein jo kam karte hai,unse toh galti ki gunjaish nahi hoti hai.Ainda,aisi galti nahi hona chahiye,is that clear?
Voice: Sure,Ma'am.Rathod sir ko abhi call connect karta hu.
(Receptionist transfer the call to Rathod.He was in his cabin).
Rathod: ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod here.
Ariya: Janti hu,Mamusaa,aap hi hai. Kaise hai aap? How is Ankita mami?
Rathod: Arey Aru,tum. Main thik hu,beta,aur,aapki mami bhi.Avnee kaisi hai? Aaj college nahi gayi?
Ariya: Avnee thik hai.Sirf aur sirf uski mamu ki yaad aati hai.Nahi,aaj college nahi gayi.Kya karoo,CBI ki officer jo thaeri.Waise,where is Aai and baba?
Rathod: Rawte aur Riya kisi kam se Police headquarters gaye hai.Kyun kya hua?
Ariya: Main aake batati hu..
Rathod: Ok.

Within 10mins,Ariya reaches ETF Headquarters.Everyone welcomes her.

Ariya goes to the conference room and sits.
Ariya: Aab bolti hu.Mamusaa,Aai aur Baba mujhe bina bitaye bahar chale gaye,bina nashta kiye.Aaj toh had hi hogayi.Mamusaa,can i sit on ur chair,if u dnt mind?
Rathod: Sure,beta...
Ariya: Aane do in dono ko,aaj toh jamke investigation hogi. Mere gusse ke samne Baba ekdum bheegi billi ho jaate hai.
Ankita: Hmm.Beta,coffee piyogi?
Ariya: Agar aap banake de,toh?
Ankita: Abhi lati hu,sab keliye.
Ariya: Mami,mera wala please black coffe with no sugar.
Ankita: Janti hu.Ekdum maa pe gayi ho.

Meanwhile,Arjun and Riya reaches ETF Headquarters.The receptionist informs Rathod.In turn,Rathod informs Ariya.
Ariya(with an evil smirk):Aane do aaj... Aaj toh mere changul se koi nahi bacha paega indono ko?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum update...!!!
loved it...!!!
wow am loving ariya...!!! bilkul arjun ki copy h...!!!😉😆
receptionist ko bhi daant dia...!!!😆
ooo ab to arjun riya gye..!!! ariya unki achi khabar lene wali h...!!!
cant wait for the next part..!!!
continue soon...!!
yayyy me first...!!!😉😆
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21

awsum update...!!!

loved it...!!!
wow am loving ariya...!!! bilkul arjun ki copy h...!!!😉😆
receptionist ko bhi daant dia...!!!😆
ooo ab to arjun riya gye..!!! ariya unki achi khabar lene wali h...!!!
cant wait for the next part..!!!
continue soon...!!
yayyy me first...!!!😉😆





thanks,babe.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haa...haa...enjoying the power of Ariya Arjun Suriyakant Rawte dear! Way of talking pe bilkul baap par gayi! Aur shayad fvrt beverage pe bilkul maa par gayi! Sweet combination. Continu soon...m waiting!

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