Ariya's OS: A Journey towards Love

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"Had hoti hai har cheeez ki", He enters in the hall by shouting on her subordinate. " Tum jaisi Irresponsible larki mei nay kahin nahi dekhi, ye meri ghalti hai mei nay tum par ek bar phir bharosa kya, mei kaisay bhool gaya k jahan tum ho wahan ghaltiyan nah un ye kaisay mumkin hai". Her eyes becomes moist by his harsh words , this is not the first time he hurt her. She wipes her tears and says Sorry to him. He again loss his tempered" kitna aasan hai na tumharay liay ghalti kar k sorry kehna". She mumered " next time khayal rakhun gi". He agins scold her " Tumhain next time is baat ki umeed hai k mei tum par bharosa karunga, What ever let's forget it". So, Team today our ETF get a new case related to Shariton Hotel, the same hotel in front of our ETF building. A newly married couple Mr and Mrs. Jaydeep Mishra, jinhon nay shariton Hotel say 8:00 pm ko checkout kya aur around 9: 00 pm unki death body highway k kareeb mili.

Shree: but sir unka is Hotel say kya taluq hai.

Arjun: taluq hai Shree., kyun k Mrs . Ananya jaydeep Mishra , aur Mr. Jaydeep Mishra nay apnay parents ki marzi k against ja k 15 din pehlay shadi kit hi, inki shadi k theek 3 din bad Ananya k Parents k pass ek unknown number say JAydeep ki call aai k unki beti Jaydeep k kabzay mei hai , agar unhon nay Jaydeep ko 20 lakh tawan nahi diya toh wo Ananya ko mar dalen ay.

Chotu: but Sir agar Jaydeep nay Ananya ka kidnap kiya that oh uska katal kis nay kya.

Arjun: yahi point hai Chotu, ,jis nay Ananya k parents ko call ki wo ye baat aachi tarha jantay thay k Annaya k parents us say naraz hain aur wo us say kabhi contact nahi Karen gay isliay us nay jhoti kidnapping ka natak racha ta kay us kay parents say paisay hasil kar sakay.

Rathode: par Rawate, is case ka Hotel Shariton say kya connection hai.

Arjun: connection hai Rathore, kyun k pichlay do din mei teen couples is hotel say ghayab huay hai, ye wohi couples hain jinhon nay apnay parents k khilaf ja k shadi ki hai, aur mujhay lagta hai k ye couples abhi bhi isi hotel mei hain aur kisi nay unhen qaid kar k rakha hai, details k mutabiq un larkiyun k parents k pass bhi isi tarha unknown numbers say call aa rhen hain.

Rathore: toh kya socha hai tum nay.

Arjun: Shree ek kam karo jald iz jald Shariton Hotel k saray system hack karo .

Ayesha: But sir, ap karna kya chahtay hain.

Arjun: ya abhi pata chal jaey ga.

After Few minutes:

Shree: Sir Shariton Hotel k saray system hack ho gay hain.

Rathore: rawate tum karna kya chahtay ho batao gay bhi ya nahi.

Arjun: batata hun rathore itni jaldi kya hai… tum sab apni apni duties sunlo, Rathore tum aur Ayesha wahan newly married couple ban k jao gay aur ye pretend karo gay k tum nay apnay parents ki marzi k khilaf shadi toh ki hai par Ayesha is Shadi say khush nahi hai, Shree tum yahan Software engineer ban k jao gay aur ja k wahan secrete camera's place karo gay ta kay wahan k pal pal ki khabar humain yahan is screen par milti rahay, aur chotu tum yahan k guard ko replace karo gay aur kisi bhi shaks ko bina ID prove k aandar aanay nahi do gay, Aur mei wahan visitor ban k jaun ga,I thinks sab ko sab kuch samjh aa gaya hai,, koi confusion nahi honi chaheay, hum microphone k through connect rahen gay, let's go.

Riya who is silents in the whole case suddenly spoke. " aur mei sir"

Arjun: tum tum yahi raho gi .

Riya: par mei bhi aap k sath chalna chati hun.

Arjun: kyun ta kay humaray liay phir problem create karo, tum wahan nahi jao gi Riya, mei tumhari wajah say kisi ki jaan khtray mei nahi dal sakta, let's stay out of the case , I think you understand.

Riya: but sir is baar koi ghalti nahi hogi.

Arjun: lagta hai ek baar mei tumhain koi baat samjh nahi aati mei nay kaha k is case say dor raho toh tumharay liay better hai, waisay hum kafi hain is case ko solve karnay k liay.

Rathore: par Rawate wo yahan akeli karay gi kya.

Arjun: wo yahan reh k is screen par unki sari movement note karay gi, aur un k har moves k khabar day di, ok are you happy.

Riya smiles that he permit her to involve in the case.

They all takes their position.

Rathore and Ayesha stands in the reception area.

Ayesha: excuse me , humain is Hotel mei ek room chaheay.

Receptionist: ya mam All types of room's are available here, which type of room you want.

Rathore: koi sa bhi room ho jis ka rent kam ho.

Ayesha become anger on him: " What you say tumhain ab bhi apnay paison say pyar hai, "

Rathore: kyun kisi luxury room mei kya faida.

Ayesha: mei aaj tak tumhain nahi samjh pai ye hamara honeymoon suit hai aur tumhain abhi bhi paisoo ki pari hai, lagta hai mei nay tum say shadi kar k buhat bari ghalti ki,

Rathore: what tum nay mujh say shadi kar k ghalti ki, aray meri kismet kharab thi k mei nay tu jaisi aameer larki say shadi ki, jis k har jagha high class soch hai, tumhain ye baat samjhni chaheay k mei tumharay parents ki tarha rich nahi hun jo tumharay har aash o aaram ka khayal rakhun meri itni hi aamdani hai meray sath tumhain isi mei guzara karna hoga.

Ayesha: nahi plz aap mujhay isi room keys dyn dekhti hun ye is room ki kaisay payment nahi kartay..

Receptionist gives her keys and they both ruches toward the stairs.

Rathore: gud job Ayesha.

Ayesha: thanks sir.

Arjun silently watching them by sitting sofa infront of Reception waiting Area

Riya closely observes all the movements by sitting in ETF office.

Arjun calls Riya,

Arjun: ha Riya koi movements nazar aai.

Riya: nahi sir abhi tak unki taraf say koi movement nahi mili.

Arjun: ok stay connected to us.

Riya: ok Sir.

She closely sees each windows on the screen. She sees some movement in the Hotel corridors , She connect with Arjun, " Sir corridor mei koi hai", Ok Riya I see him.

Riya: ok Sir, She watch some strange thing She want to connect him again but he doesn't respond. She types a message on her mobile " Sir wo log aap k pechay hain wo aap par attack karna chahtay hain" She sends him this message but He doesn't read it, She still observing him and the stranger movement But she is helpless what she do, how she informs him.?.

In Hotel.

Someone wants to kill Arjun with a shap knife he face against that man, That man puts his hand in the air and want to penetrate the knife in Arjun back he is just a inches away from his back a palm come in between Arjun Back and the knife the knife across that palm and starts bleeding. Arjun turns back He sees Riya injured plam and a knife is across her plam, he remove the knife and strats hitting that man, That man becomes unconscious.

Arjun: Riya tum yahan kyun aai,

Riya: aap ki jaan khtray mei thi aap ko kai bar informs karnay ki koshishi ki par aap resond nahi kar rhay thay.

Arjun: apna hath dekho Riya.

They hears some noice.

Arjun keepe his finger on her sshhh koi hai yahan ,He encircle his hand around her shoulder and hides behind the walls.

Arjun: wo hamain hi dhomd rhay hain Riya.

He take off his guns , He pulls Riya more closer, She is in his arms , that's the first time She is so close to him , At this time She hears the heartbeat of him, she is lost in his eyes, but he eyes wondering the enemies action,

Arjun: sshh kuch mat kehna wo yahin aa rhay hai.

He hides her face in his chest .and his hand still wrap around her.

Arjun: don't worry Riya mei hun na.

He puts his hand on her head and allows her to rested her head on his chest.

They move from there.

Arjun: dheray dheray chalo wo yahin aa rhay hai, He drag her and She encircle her both arms aronds his waist. They take off from stairs and sees a Store room where all the rejected things and furnishers were place,

Arjun: yahan betho Riya, hum yahan sfe hai, apna hath dikho Riya.

He search some clothes pieces and tie her around her plam. Her hair covers her face , he takes her all hair and want to twig behind her ears but accidently his hand full with her blood fill her part during when he twig her hair behind the ears, her part fills with his finger, she puts her middle finger on her forhead and sees her fill part (Mang) and try to erase blood from her forhead, " bahri mang is tarha mitaya nahi kartay abshagun hota hai", He hears someone follow them, they hide behind the cupboards.

She hold him , they both were wrapped in each other arms.

Arjun: Riya tum yahin raho, mujhay jana hoga, mei tumhari jaan khatray mei nahi dal sakta.

Riya: nahi Sir please aap nahi jaen, She holds her collar.

Arjun: Riya mujhay jan hoga meri baat samjho Rathore akela hai.

A chain of tears flow from her eyes, He holds her with her waist by both of his arms she is very close to her.

Riya: mei aap ko kahin janay nahi dungi, pl zap mujhay chor k nahi jaeay.

He sees his Roshini's image in her face, he thinks that her Roshini's says him to not leave her alone, he smiles and sees Riya.

Arjun: I promise mujhay kuch nahi hoga Riya.

Riya: mei nay keh diya na Sir aap yahen rahen meray pass mujhay buhat dar lag rha hai,

He wants to separate her from him but she never wabt to separate herself from him.

Arjun: Riya meri baat samjhnay ki koshish karo.

Riya: mujhay kuch nahi sunnah.

Arjun separates her from him and hold her with her arms. He kisses her on her forhead, She shivers from the touch of his lips she feels an electricity on her body, suddenly her hand jerk down from his collars and she closes her eyes.

Arjun: mujhay maloom hai Riya tum yahan aa k kamzoor par jao gi , mujhay maaf karna mei nay is tarha tumharay emotion ka istamal kya , but I promise you mei sahi salamat wapis aaunga, mera intezar karna yahan isi jagha, mei tumhain is tarha akela chor k nahi jana chahta , par meri majbori hai Riya, mera farz mujhay majboor kar rha hai, She stills close her.

Riya; aap jaen meri himaat nahi hai aap ko jata huwa dekhnay ki, lekin jab mei ye aankhen kholun to aap ko samnay paun ye wada kar k jeay ga aap.

Arjun: I promide you and again kiss her forhead.

And he go from there.

Shree: sir Room number 67 , ye wo rrom hai jahan saray couples qaid hai.

Rathore: let's go, par hamain har kadam sambhal k uthana hoga k kahin unhen koi nuksaan na pohnchay.

Ayesha: yes Sir.

They breaks the door and arrested all the goans and realize the couples from them

On the other side Arjun enter the manager room,

Arjun: mujhay pehaly hi shak tha k Tum is case mei involve ho.

Manager: mei itni aasani say tumhain ye karnay nahi dunga ACP.

He shots Arjun. Riya heart sinks downs by hearing the shot of gun, her lips become shivers by taking his name " Arrjun..", she bend down her knees and still vlose her eyes and pray god for his safety.

Arjun saves the bullet pass away by touching his arms.

Arjun: You are under arrest Mr. Peter.

Rathore , Arjun , Shree, Chotu and Ayeshs Smiles by solvimg this case.

Arjun: tum log chalo mei Riya ko lay k aata hun

Rathore: Riya yahan.

Arjun: yes.

Ayesha: ok Sir hum chaltay hai aap unhen lay k aaen.

Riya is bend down on her knees " please god ap unhen kuch nahi honey dijeay ga, you know un ki life meray laiy kitni important hai, agar unhen kuch ho gaya toh mei kaisay rahungi"

Arjun: kuch nahi hoga mujhay Riya

She opens her eyes and runs towards him and hug him. He put his arms around her shoulder and she keeps her hand around his waist and put her head on his shoulders and takes step of the stairs.

Shree: aray Riya ye tumharay hath mei kya huwa.

She push Arjun aways from her and blush." Kch nahi shree "

Shree: aur ye teray mathay par lya laga hai.

Riya sees in Arjun eyes " mera hi khoon hai Shree"

Rathore: aab chalen .

All of four walk forward while Riya and Arjun in on the back of whole teams , he holds her fingers. They both sees each others and smiles.

" This is the beginning of new journey of Two

lovers toward Love"

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear, awesome OS, I loved it.

Luv u<333
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww ariya is so cute
awesome os with happy ending👍🏼


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely os dear... Bhari hui maang meetana apshagun hota hai...Riya, maat meetao yaar! Akhir Arjun ne bhara hai!

Excellent work. Keep it up and keep presenting us with such lovely writings...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS.

Arjun: Bhari hui maang ko mitana apshagun hota hai.
Aww... Such romantic lines...
Riya,apni maang ka sinoo maat mitana,Arjun ne bhara hai.
I loved it.
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very nice OS dear👏

thanks for the PM.

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awesome update...
ariya scene was so nice...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ariya is too cute!
Awesome OS! Keep writing more 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum dear

loved reading it

it s very interesting

do write more

Ariya were amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was such an awesome OS :) loved it
ariya were so adorable :)
do write more OS's like this

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