os soniye heeriye

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Buddies i m back wid another os of mine...
lolz dnt be shocked ok??
after getting d overwhelming response on my 1st os bin tere...
i think u r ready fr another torture of mine...
dnt throw anything on me as u knw kitni thand h..lolz!!
i m happy today after getting d unexpected responses..
nw enough of my bak bak..
get back to work...!!
sry fr d errors!!

True Lines-
Kisi ko paane ke liye hamari saari khubiyan bhi kam pad jati hai.
Par ye Bhi sach hai ki
Kisi ko Khone ke liye ek kami hi kaafi hai.

Arjun a super cop wid all d qualities a girl look for
Roshni a dance teacher by profession in a primary school...
one fine day...roshni goes to d way of her school n its raining heavily...
on d same way arjun coming...all d mud of d rain spread all over roshni dress..!!
arjun car coming to halt...arni meet wid d fight...but they fall for each other at d same time
( love at first sight )...they got married after sumtime...as in after marriage couple wants to spend time wid each other...bt arjun had a difficult time to cope up wid d case so he came late many nights...roshni sumtimes manages..understand his condition..but one night arni hv huge argument...arjun in frustation n anger said to roshni dat u are d biggest burden of my life...naturally it hurts n roshni leaves arjun house...after sometime wen arjun realises his mistake ( fr which he is going to repent in life forever ) goes to find roshni...on d other hand roshni is busy in her thoughts n tears continuosly falling frm her angelic eyes...she continuosly walking in road without any concentration in road..!! bt suddenly a truck came n loses its balance which leads to sudden death of roshni...!! who knws dat on dat on dat night two lives r being brutally taken by GOD...As arjun in front of his own eyes watch everything n shocked...he got a paralysis attack..he was taken to hospital by nearby people...arjun able to watch everything bt unable to do anything...as he becomes paralystic!!

soniye hiriye teri yaad aandi ye
seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye...
seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye...

tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar ni..
tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar
tu aaja tenu rabda wasta..
tu aaja tenu rabda wasta..
udekta main tera rasta

kinna tenu chaava ey na samjhi tu..
tere naam kitti zindagii,
jab tu milengi tenu dassange
tere naal meri har khusi...

tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar ni..
tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar
tu aaja tenu rabda wasta..
tu aaja tenu rabda wasta..
udekta main tera rasta

soniye hiriye teri yaad aandi ye
seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye...

suna suna dil da aasiyaana hai
suni zameen ho asmaa..
khoya khoya renda mera paagal dil
aaja laut ke hun aa bhi jaa...

tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar ni..
tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar
tu aaja tenu rabda wasta..
tu aaja tenu rabda wasta..
udekta main tera rasta

soniye hiriye teri yaad aandi ye
seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye...
seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye...

seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye...

soniye ...jaan jandi ye

jaan jaandi ye


"Anything is Valuable only in
2 Situations"
First-
Before Getting It,.,
.
,
.
Second-
After Loosing It,.,
"In Between YOU Never Realise The Value".

P.s. Well i m writing dis as i was listening d song n believe me it made me cry !!!!
One of my fav songs!!

thank u fr bearing dis..
hope u lyk it...
plz coment.!!
my other os be depend on d responses..
tc me running!!

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naughtykittyyy thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
waooo sooo emotionl 1...i alws lv arni
i wana rd smthng on arni...n whr roshni wl prsnt 4 lng time...
agn he losss his tresr😭...
as da song is butiflll so is ur os...👏
keep it up n can u pm me ur odr creations plzz😊
Edited by naughtykittyyy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3


💔💔💔💔
Oh Payaliyaa...
My heart is broken after reading this...
All in 1 pack na...!!!!
When i read d first few lines i become very happy...coz i think its would become a cute Love story in the presence of rain...Coz i love love stories in the background of Rain...!!!!!
Ho after that love at first sight,marriage,misunderstanding,accident, death...😭 My heart is broken...💔💔

Anyway i loved it...!!!!
Looking forward to read more OS's from ur Pen...!!!!!!!

Edited by .9.Sara.9. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Hmmm...heart touching os. But OS ke pehle aur aankhri ke kuch lafzo ne mera dil ko chu liya...really loved that.
funkylicious thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Unres'd
omg this was another awesome one dear..🤗
please next time Roshni ko maro mat please its my request...
This is soo emotional I cant see my Arjun I mean I cant imagine my Shaleen like that😭
but it was very well written another short sweet and emotional one😊
Great work dear👏
Edited by funkylicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Loved it ... it was so emotinal!!!
Do write more on Arni
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Posted: 13 years ago
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payaliya ho ho ho...😆😆😆

Awesome yaar..
so touchy...

Loved it...
Edited by prava55663 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
hey ...
omg that was so emotional ... 😭
rockz.diva thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
True lines i waz very happy i thought it waz romantic love stry but ye kya 😭 Arni <3 kya he payal making us cry???????
itz superb i too love diz song <3
Edited by rockz.diva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Emotional one..
ek hi pack mai sab kuch va..
thx for PM.

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