YADEIN... COMPLETED

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LuckYMAma

@LuckYMAma

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#881

Awsum epilogue...
Such a beautiful journey wid yaadein...
Thanx 4 pm

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#882

Hiii Diii!!!!! bahut hi superb update!!!! arjun ko intezaar nahi ho para bahut sweet aur rathod :-) aisha ki yaadein unhe satathi hai :-D a beautiful journey you have had and im privileged ke mein aapke safaar ke ek part thi!!! cant wait for your future works, hope that there are more ARIYA adventures cause i sure would like to be a part of them, meaning mera saath hamesha aapke saath ;-) xxx

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#883

that was a perfect ending...
Loved it..
Ariya marriage..
Sameer-aisha engagement..
Chotu's gf..
Shree's friendship..
All perfect..

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#884

that was such an awesome ending :) loved it

you have written everything so beautifully :)

loved riya and arjun's conversation in hospital :)

oh god chotu ditched shree for reema 😆

finally ariya got married and awww sameer and aisha got engaged 😃

so happy for both couples

honestly yadein was one of my favorite FF's on this forum :) the way you have portrayed everything is just beautiful

thank you so much for writing such an amazing FF :) will surely miss it

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Moumi

@Moumimon

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#885

Family photo pasand ayaa...
Cute Ending..with lot of love and care...😳

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@MriduB

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#886

Awesome! Fantastic! Amazing! Perfect! 👏👏👏👏
Just one thing : I loved it! ❤️
And ending mein Rathod aur Aisha ki engagement ke liye thanks! 😳
Riya and Arjun toh forever! 😃
Shree and Chotu...as usual Dhasu! 😃
And again thanks for the Kodak Moment 😃
Once again...thank you for creating such a masterpiece! 😃
Loved Yadein! ❤️

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#887

kunchu :

honestly i was a bit shocked at your decision to end this beautiful FF, coz it was quite close to my heart,but then every thing comes to an end and this one is no exception and i respect your decision. back to the FF, i was utterly shocked when you left the story on a cliffhanger by blowing up Dilnaaz and a missing Arjun Raute ..no wonder riya lost her mind and started blabber nonsense, the shock was so great!!! loved the way you had described the search-and-find inside the ship ..it looked so real ! the last update and the epilogue was indeed beautiful ..not just for Ariya , but also for the other relations portrayed in the story, and you were right about shree and chottu, they indeed worshipped their seniors..and the monosyllabic talk between arjun and rathore regarding aisha ..wow!! finally shree is out of his "main aur meri laptop ki tanhaiyan aksar yeh baatein karte hai " mode and found someone ..although i never thought it could be sanuja, so that WAS a surprise indeed⭐️!! and the way you brought up ryaan and rachna to meet rathore ..good to see that you hadnt forgotten them entirely😊. and rathore-aisha engagement ceremony at riya-arjun's reception party was totally out of the world plan ..i felt like whistling at that moment🥳!! and the final family photo ..the ETF family, was picture perfect , kaash aisi hi ek picture hume sach mein dekhne ko mil jaata😉!!

overall it had been a wonderful journey reading Yaadein. will comment on your other FFs soon.😊

Edited by polly_03 - 13 years ago

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#888

Finally..ur Yaadein came to an end...it was such a cute n great ff frm u...loved reading it..
Story was awexome..the end was,really cute..
." Arjun: Shree- Chotu, kaha ja rahe ho? Its a family photo stupid!!"...This line was soo sweet.

M really sorry fr commenting it late...

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#889

Beautiful ending to a lovely story... loved it... Ariya'swedding SameerAishe engagemnt, Shree's new frndshp wth Sanuja nd finallythe kodak moment... it ws perfect... thnk u so much for writing thislovely piece of work