FF:Anjaana Anjaani!! Chap5:pg.24 uptd 22/12/2012 - Page 3

Neeli... I love u .. You are too good...*hugs*...

Originally posted by: funkylicious

Khuda kare tera ye Anjaana

Mile ek din us Anjaani se...

Jo dikha de unhe

Apni asli pehchaan..

Aur hum dua karte hai

Tum pohche us mukaam par.

Jaha tumhe koi chu bhi na sake...😉😳

Over all I'm in love with this. Muaaahh and a big Huggieee🤗

phew I'm done with the comment..😉 sorry thoda bada hai..😛

I wish I could clap for you all day.. voh bhi kam hota to actually appreciate your work babes!!! You Nailed it!!👏👏

tu khud ki poem padhti ho ya na,...lekin hum padhte hain dil se aur mann se!!!

Originally posted by: priya00147

phenomenal!!
after all tu meri neela peeli hai...expected tha 😉
mre guns and bullets hamesha ready rahenge 🤣
prologue tak toh kisi tarah sambhal liye par CS!!!!kya poetry hai!!!...bechara chotu motu bol di na usko mre pass aaakr ro raha!!
aur shree toh hai vigyan genius..laila(laptop)k sath ghumta hai!!!shru omg!!!😃
maar dala...!!!!coma mein hai...bachana hai toh aaur likh!!!
aur waise tujhe motivate k sath phasi ka phanda bhi tha toh likhna toh tujhe pdhata hi!!! 😉
agla chap chahiye mujhe bas!!!
samjhi ya tu samajh gai!!!

haan mein samjh gayii..k tu bhi sab samjh gayii lolxx...

Originally posted by: Charli_

res let me read first lol edited first of all

wishing you happy diwali

wow i was shocked reading those poems each word was describing their journey n charecter👏

can't wait for more please update soon n thanks for PM 😃

tnx fro ur seet comemnt...surely gonna update soon!!!

Originally posted by: rockz.diva

weee awsome jis tarah se sabko describe ki amazinggg thaaa

ur shayriii/poems waz also superbbb or ni ruka jata update soon naaa awsomeee

tnk yew dear...will surely gonan aupdate soon!!

Originally posted by: shrutisweety

wow that is wounderfu

poems r awsome,
poems r describing their charcter
so cute

continue soon
thanks for pm

tnks for liking it!!!

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

wow!!! poems 👏!!! never seen before such a charecter sketch... loved it.. waiting for more...

btw how is the pairing..??

arjun-riya
rathore-chinki
shree-shru
chotu-chandini ?????????

tnx fro loving d CS poem !!!

Neeli... Main ne na ek poem likhi hai tere liye... Maine sachi likhi hai god swear... Yes! I hav confirmed it pinchin myself... My 1st eva poem.. Neeli plzz no joota-chappal.. Tu ne hi kaha tha ekdin perfection not needed, only what matters is to try... So, here it goes:::
Ek bhondu si ladki hai, hai thodi is pagli...
Neelima naam hai usska, par sab usse bulate hai pyaar se Neeli.
Anjaana-Anjaana kahani hai usski hi creation...
Jo bass mann mein chhod de chaap, with its very first contribution.
Bass duya hai ki woh bitaye ek safe, sound and prosperous Diwali...
And likhte jaaye yunhi to make her concepts flourish proudly and happily...:D

Originally posted by: -sree13-

Neeli first of all wish you a very *****HAPPY & SAFE DIWALI***** 🤗🤗 enjoy the day with lot of fun,colors & crackers😃

okay do you remember I told you,Sammy & Shru brilliant as poet 2days ago??? now everyone will agree with me & you prove me right my Neeli partner 😛

Before you start your story I would say one thing that it definitely gonna be one of my fav stories for sure coz it is written by you my friend 😊

coming to prologue,yayyy..I am jumping in joy 🥳 I mean how do you manage writting such a awesome stuff yaar..!!! 🤔 truly hats off..!! 👏 👏 👏

oye Shru teri toh lottery lag gayi 😆 crime branch IT specialist,not bad haan?? 😉

thanks for this Diwali gift...you made my day 😃

Thank you so much sree!!!

Neeli now abt the story, brilliant story... Awesome, loved the poems... I wonder how did u create so many poems.. Omg! Mere liye toh its impossible...! U know I wll read it again... I loved it neeli... Update soon... N yeah! Happy n prosporous diwali to u n ur family...
Take care... I love u sis!!!