FF:Anjaana Anjaani!! Chap5:pg.24 uptd 22/12/2012

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neelima

@purecure

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Posted: 13 years ago

Welcome

First of All,

Happy Diwali To All Of You...!!!

& a special song for all of you on this celebration day...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZj-MEqy2CM

Please like & Scroll Down...!!!

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neelima

@purecure

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Welcome Evryone To...

SS: Anjaana Anjaani : 8 Zindagi 1 Paheli

On this Special Day , im here with an SS:Anjana Anjaani, a special Diwali gift from me to ol of u!!

This my first ever try, i hope u guys like it. If there is any statemnt or opinion which is against your thoughts or u feel abusive...i apology from now itself!!

& an apology to ol english readers specially fro poems as most of the time it wld be in hindi...bt story wil definitely go in /english medium...!!1

Credits: I would reaaly like to thank CC ETF ka Adda members fro motivating me n supporting me...especially kavs,priya & importantly shru, for making me write this & supporting ol over!!!

ok, i know enough of my blabbering...

Prologue & CS - Page 01

Chap1 & Chap2 - Page 12

Chap3 & Chap4 - Page 18

Chap5 - Page 24

{Scroll Down For Each Chapter On Respective Chap Pages}

Like & Scroll Down...For Prologue & Character Sketch!!!

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neelima

@purecure

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 13 years ago

'Shuru ki jab hamne padhni kahani tumhari yaad aagayi hame film anjana anjani
Shayari se he samajh gaye ehmiyat iski
Dil hai bechain padhne ko agay ki kahani iski
Poetry mein he diya taruf kirdaro ka
Aur poetry mein he samjhaya pesh-e-lafz iska
Lagta hai aage b aap is tarah likhoge achi si shayari
kyunki ati hai hame aur apko samajh zubaan sirf shayari
Dil ki baat kehne ke liye liya zyada waqt
Magar yakeen hai maaf karne mein nahi lagao ge zyada waqt(sorry for commenting late)
Now now kahan se shuru karo chalo pehle happy diwali to u too.
Meine socha abi kuch nasar(prose) mein hoga lekin yahan toh ahle -sukhan ki zuban mein he pura qaseeda likha gaya tha.
I really really liked it neeli.the way u wrote prologue n introduction was amazing.wating for next chap.just wanted to tell u
'koi chand sitara hai
koi phool se pyara hai
koi khushi ka ishara hai
hame bas itna batana hai
woh naam tumhara hai'

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 13 years ago

I was waiting for 1 more res! 😆 stupid me😛

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1st things 1st...

Mashallaah honestly there's nthng to be changed loved each and single word of it...

sach bolu mai khud poems likhti hu bt I dnt like reading anyone elses poem unless title is interesting bt recently tera aur Sammy ka padhti hu selected logo ka hi padti hu hayeee m ur pankhi yaar sach mai<3

Actually mai khud ki poem read karna pasand nhi karti🤣 I havent read anyone else with poetry on IF yet!!!

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I had told you the above thing just few minutes back via PM... anyways...

Omg I absolutely love the PROLOGUE wowww.. tune toh mujhe bhi piche chod diya neelu😉 (Referring to POEM)nothing else😛

Love love love it... I wonder already kon do khush naseeb h voh jinhe unka pyaar mila...❤️😳

Ohh before I move on... I'm your biggest pankhi yaar🤗🤣

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YOU blew me up!!!! Seriously you did... with the CS...<3 ek ek ko kya describe kiya hai...

and sachi bolu I didnt like 'SHRU' ka CS...😔 but I seriously, honestly and dil se sachi... I LOVE IT...you have definitely described me somehow😉 I don't know how you did it but yayyy... but yar I wish mai Forensic karti but..but but... I have no regrets coz I'm IT SPECIALIST... woahhhooo

IF ke emotions kitne kaam pad jayege mere emotions bayan karne k liye sachi... I loved Rathore and Arjun's CS...😉 hayeee and also Chinki's😉😆

but haan Wigyaan ko muthi mai rkha matlab? I didnt get it...🤣 I'm nt that brainy tho😆

"Par aaya ek din aisa

Jisse isne bhi seekha

Ki zindagi bhi kabhi hoti hai

Garam pawan ke jaisa

phir bhi ye rehta tha bilkul free"

^^ I wonder who😉😳😛

"Ladko se thi isko ek chidh

Bataana chahti thi duniya ko

Ladkiya bhi kar sakti hai wo

Jo ladke karte hai ab tak ko

Jaane Kyun tha iska yeh swabhav"

This is absolutely me darling.. definitely...ek ek word is me!!! I'm serious😉

Khuda kare tera ye Anjaana

Mile ek din us Anjaani se...

Jo dikha de unhe

Apni asli pehchaan..

Aur hum dua karte hai

Tum pohche us mukaam par.

Jaha tumhe koi chu bhi na sake...😉😳

Over all I'm in love with this. Muaaahh and a big Huggieee🤗

phew I'm done with the comment..😉 sorry thoda bada hai..😛

I wish I could clap for you all day.. voh bhi kam hota to actually appreciate your work babes!!! You Nailed it!!👏👏

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 13 years ago

Shru is baar meine bazi mar li he he

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sneha

@Sneha113

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Posted: 13 years ago

phenomenal!!
after all tu meri neela peeli hai...expected tha 😉
mre guns and bullets hamesha ready rahenge 🤣
prologue tak toh kisi tarah sambhal liye par CS!!!!kya poetry hai!!!...bechara chotu motu bol di na usko mre pass aaakr ro raha!!
aur shree toh hai vigyan genius..laila(laptop)k sath ghumta hai!!!shru omg!!!😃
maar dala...!!!!coma mein hai...bachana hai toh aaur likh!!!
aur waise tujhe motivate k sath phasi ka phanda bhi tha toh likhna toh tujhe pdhata hi!!! 😉
agla chap chahiye mujhe bas!!!
samjhi ya tu samajh gai!!!

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