FF-Gone with the wind chapter-4 pg15 - Page 6

Originally posted by: priya00147

kya mast update hai dhani!!!
perfect description of apna famous wife...
mystery toh mast hai yaar!!
baba toh papi baba nikla 🤣 🤣
shree awesome job for your best friend..aur riya ka tez dimag..i loved it!!!
arjun ko praise krne mei kya prob hota hai!
marathi translation k lie thanks 😉
ariya moment was fab..!!
thanks for the pm 😊
jaldi update karna!

Originally posted by: Tami_

lovely update

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

wow...riya arjun aur rathore se itna darti hai ki need mein bhi un dono ka naam leke uthati hai...😛hmmm bechari bahot thak gayi hai...so sad yaar...but shree really work hard and its for his best friend ...hmmm sleeping beauty shree hmmm...lovely yaar...aur shree ka javab beauty with brain kamal hai...perfect for shree... wow itni long coment ..i'm so happy thanks kav..actully woh show meh arjun se jyada darti thi lol

i love shree so much he's my favorite charecter after arjun. he indeed is smart one should give him credit. aww he is sleeping beauty n rathore is snow white lol
riya really hmmm she is so sharp ...aakhir wo case ke bottom mein pahoch hi gayi...i really proud her...

yeah too love that as i'm full feminist

RATHORE...dhani my hero aa gaya ...haye padh ke hi usako imagine kar rahi hoon...kitna hot lagta hoga na uss blue check's shirt and black jeans mein...hayeee...dekha ek aawaj mein hi shree ko hila diya🤣

lol you too crazy on rathore megha bare meh soch jara ...yeah he look hansome in oufit.

arjun and riya ...takraye...riya arjun ki bahomein aur arjun riya ke baho mein...awesoem

what tp say about it ariya is my forite jodi

kya beautiful moment hai...i totally lost in ariya dreamland

awww thanks yarr

wa wa wa wa...riya tumne sab ki bolati band kar di specially arjun ki...wa...par ye kya arjun rathore ne riya ko excellent kaha aur tum ...kuch bhi nahi..,,,uff akadu kahi ka...😲

he is not akdu he is confuse yaar he suffered from alot

wa to ye baat hai ki arjun riya ko apane aap se dur rakhata hai...kunki riya arjun ko pagal kar deti hai...hayeee kya baat hai

just like show the way i love it ..i'll try to write more ariya scene

dhani ...tune to kamal ka likha yaar...sujh hi nahi raha ke kya comment likhu...phir bhi thoda sa hi likha hai...words hi nahi mil rahe feelings express karane ke liye...

thanks dear itna sara likha our kitna likhegi

mast hai yaar...maza aa gaya ...

Originally posted by: Kareena1994

Superb

Arjun – thik se dekho rathore ye corner meh jo hath hai use chaot gayi hai.

Shree –right humeh roof pe jo blood mila thaw oh monish ka nahi tha ..matlab woh khuni ka tha ... aap ka matlab jab POLICE waha thi tab khuni bhi waha tha.

Arjun – exactly shree har mujrim ko ye dar hota ki uss ne kuch sabut nahi chod diya..iss liye woh uss jaga par wapas jarur ata hai.

Riya – but sir is pic meh toh sirf hath chehra nahi..

Rathore – koi baat nahi riya..uss din uss ke sath bhi police ne puchtach ki hogi

Toh un sab logo ko bulao jo waha.. so we can identify who's our criminal among them.

So shree called all of them in ETF headquarters arjun rathore took them in interrogation room, some of them complain about why they are here what their mistake is and some warn them about filing case on their behaviour.

This wasn't new for them so they ignore it so far they didn't have any lead.

Riya – shree abhi tak kuch nahi mila.

RATHORE- damn shree sab log aye hai kya?

Shree- mo sir one is missing ye koi 'prabhat' naam ka admi aya nahi.

Chotu – uss ka address hoga abhi le ata hu usse, its long time since i got to try my action skill.

Arjun – chotu use your power when it's necessary.

Rathore – stop it rawate, tum chotu our shree uss prabhat ko dekho meh commissioner sir milne jaa raha hu.

Riya – our meh sir?

Arjun – tum yahi ruko riya.

Riya – but sir i also want come with you.

Shree – ye kya jid hai riya.

Chotu – We will handle it very well

Riya- you both stop pampering me i'm not small kid.

Arjun – its order riya. Samjhi ya samjhau

Riya tried to defend herself but her efforts were against all of them and with arjun saying that all men left the room. Her dad was always disappointed from her now even when she joined ETF her team mates are treating same, why there was such gender bias; society is always partial woman. If they are stubborn so is she she grab car keys, she is going that criminal by hook or crook.

Here arjun reached at prabhat's house he knock door twice but it would opened.

Shree – sir may he is not home.

Arjun – shhh shree listen.

They heard fain footsteps inside that house, arjun signed shree and chotu to block each exit of house; they follow his orders and grab their respective position, took out gun from pockets read for worst situation. Arjun in flash kicked the door opening in he made his way inside the house he found a guy trying get out from window, he slide his gun in pocket run in that direction but he was late as he was already escaped from window.

He called chotu and shree as the chase begins, prabhat entered in crowd team spread out to look for him. Chotu found him in main road crossing, he ran after him suddenly riya came in pointed her gun in prabhat black his way. Prabhat pushed a old lady standing there on road she fell on ground hilted her head on road blood was oozing from it. Riya got distracted by this as vehicles were passing nearby that lady direction she was unconscious using this moment prabhat pushed her gun ran from there.

Riya was helping that lady when car came in their direction driver was talking on phone didn't noticed them but chotu quickly shoot tyres stopping car from some inch away from them.

Chotu reach to riya help her getting up that old lady; shree and arjun reached there too. Shree called ambulance. Ajun shoot glare at her his blood was boiling what the hell she was doing here. Shree chotu walked towards riya kept one hand on her shoulder giving all their sympathies to her.

Chotu – riya we had him, what you were doing her?

Shree –why you risked your life riya?

Riya – i was just

But before she justify herself arjun interrupted saying

Arjun – i need everyone in ETF headquarters.

Everyone was quite in car chotu and arjun in front seat while shree, riya in back. Arjun was driving car harshly one can easily guess he was highly mad, riya looked at him gulp down lump in throat. Shree pressed her hand with his giving faint smile but he too was unable to protect her from Arjun.

ETF headquarters

Rathore was their already specking on phone, arjun loudly bang his hand on table shree, chotu and Riya was standstill no one was daring to move. Unlike Rathore was surprised by all this he hung on phone asked arjun.

Rathore- ye sab kya hai rawate?

Arjun – why don't you ask riya Rathore. She know everything riya.

And he went towards riya she was looking at ground; he grabbed her shoulder shaking it forced to meet his gauze.

Arjun- right tum ko sab pata hai na. It was your master plan.

Riya was crying now, his rough words twisted her self-esteem.

Riya – i was just trying to you sir.

Arjun – kya madat ki hai riya. Tumhari waje se Prabhat hamare hotho se nikal gaya. You dangered that lady's life.

Rathore freed riya from arjun's grip, point figer on his face and said.

Rathore – Rawate control yourself she is my team mate i'm not going to tolerate such believer. This is how you treat a woman.

Riya had enough first they amend her to for going on mission and now rathore was telling to treat her nicely all because she is woman.

Riya – oh just finished it saying once. Why you all keep reminding that i'm woman and don't deserve to be here. You know i always tried my level to perform best well thats not enough for you.

Arjun and other are shocked hearing all this as like split personality Happy-to-go kind of riya who having this side too. Shree and chotu tried to calm her down.

Shree – just calm down Riya.

Chotu – no one thinks like that we all care you.

Riya – please stop giving me those sympathies

And she went out from there, shree and chotu was upset by arjun's attitude.

Rathore – i'm disappointed rawate.

Arjun was still holding blank face and crossing his hand his chest, he just turn away as answer.

Shree – sir i think i should go and see riya.

Rathore – no just let me handle this.

Rathore look out riya in whole ETF building finally found her on terrace.

He marched towards her placed his hand on her; she was lost in her world when his touch made her alert. Still she refuses to look at him as she didn't want to see her crying.

Rathore – i know his words was not appropriate, but didn't meant to hurt you riya.

Riya – why sir i'm not perfect sir, i keep disappointing people around me. I just can't be that perfect.

Rathore- no One is perfect and no one can be. Neither do you nor i, we all have our own faults. One thing we have keep doing is just try to improve our self not because other want us to be but for our self.

Riya – but sir i'm here to fulfil someone else's expectation.

Rathore smile faintly cupped her face between his hands.

Rathore – wasn't that yours dream too riya. You took those expectations so seriously that you forgot yourself. I've experience this phase in life too riya when someone told me that if i'm not happy i can't make anyone happy.

He ferried his hand and took step away from her.

Riya – i already lost myself sir. Mujhe khud nahi pata that who i am?

Rathore turn and looked back at her

Rathore – but i know who are you; you are gold medallist in shooting academy, you are trained martial artist.

Riya – these are just my achievement sir they don't reflect me.

Rathore – they part of you; you are girl who teached lesson to that freak in GB's ashram. You are chotu and shree's best friend, mine student well arjun's headache too.

They both laugh on this joke she wipe her face with her hands.

Riya – thank you sir you sounded just like my

Rathore – like a family member that who we are riya. You, me, shree, chotu and that Akdu arjun too. You can always share your thoughts with me now can we leave we still need to solve case. And your best friends are upset you have to console them too.

Riya – well that hardest task.

She passed him grin as he replied with same grin.

Rathore- and remember only way to handle arjun is EK kan se suno dusre se nikal do.

Riya – yes sir.

Arjun heard their conversation from door he was relieved that she was fine now. He shouldn't have reacted in such way but he couldn't control his anger, when he saw car was about hit her and he was unable to save her just like roshni. She died in front of him but he was helpless he saw her in pain. He doesn't want anyone to face the same and he cared for riya, he want to keep her away from any danger. It was his care for her which burst out as his anger. He was glad that rathore handle her very well but her sudden change in personality rise so many questions in his heart. Why she reacted that way? Did she have some bad past? But she was so not going answer them when ask,

He quickly went in his cabin he don't them to know that he was listening them

Here rathore and riya entered in conference room found chotu and shree in tension.

When they riya standing laughing on them chotu go and quickly hug her tightly, riya laugh as his gesture.

Riya – mujhe marna hai kya?

Chotu – i'm so sorry riya i was just worried are you ok now?

Riya – off course i'm chotu.

Shree – don't you dare act link that again getting it.

He said in loud voice and he too hug her, as both broke the hug riya looked at them and laugh.

Shree- why are you laughing at us?

Riya – who are some teenage girl you both were so dramatic.

Chotu – stop it riya we fought with arjun sir just for you.

Riya- what did you do? Well it does not good go apologized to him.

Shree- but he was rude.

Riya – it was my mistake so go apologized him.

Here in arjun's cabin he was looking out through window juggling paper weight.

Rathore catches the paper right though his hand.

Rathore – sambhal jao rawte abhi bhi waqt hai

Arjun – kya bol rahe ho rathore.

Rathore kept that paper weight in within his hand.

Rathore – Wahi jo tum sunna chahate ho. you hurt riya and now that's hurting you right.

Arjun – I don't care rathore if that's hurt her. Usse research desk wapas bhej do thats good for all of us.

Rathore – it not hurting you toh aaj terrace pe tare ginanne aye the. I'm not sending her to reaserch desk rawte. Woh kya kehte ho tum haan SAMJHE YA SAMJHAU

Arjun gave him 'i'm so pissed at you' but rather answer that with staked look.

Suddenly chotu, riya and shree entered in cabin, riya was scared so she looked at rathore first; he pressed his lips together nodded his head slightly.

She got bit of courage to meet his gauze said

Riya – i'm sorry sir. Tough i didn't meant spoil our case.

Arjun looked at her expression was quite frankly was not the same she was forcing herself.

Shree/chotu – we too apologised sir.

Arjun – mala ha drama avadat nahi (i don't like this drama). Case ajun apyalach solve karaychi ahe( we still need to sove the case)

Rathore smiled seeing all this moved his hand through his thick hair looking up. He finally managed to keep his team together and always going to keep it glued together.

Rathore – ok now, we can find some clue in prabhat's house just move team.

Prabhat's house

Team was searching house for single clue leading their investigation forward.

RIYA – sir yaha kuch saree and dresses mile hai, matlab yaha koi aurat bhi rehti thi.

Shree –but sir we didn't find her?

Rathore – maybe she left before we came here?

Arjun- iss saman ko dekho rathore, it's enough for woman

Here this riya rolled her eyes and rathore shook his head like he didn't hear it.

Arjun – i mean ki woh yaha jyada nahi rehti hogi.

Chotu – sir look what a found.

All looked at him he found ring, he handover it to arjun; he scanned it his sharp eyes.

Shree – its ladies ring.

Rathore – woh toh hum meh bhi dikh raha shree.

Riya – its expensive ghar ko dekh kar nahi lagta ki ye prabhat ring affort kar sakta tha.

Arjun – we got our criminal Rathore.

Rathore – ye puzzles band karo rawte and tell me what you got?

Arjun – hum meh Monish ke ghar jaana hoga.

Monish's house

ETF knocked the door MRS khanna open it and as team entered in house.

MRS khanna – kya aap ko khuni mil gaya.

Riya – ji bilcul.

Rathore- woh hamesha se hamre akho ke samne tha.

Mrs khanna – who's the killer?

Arjun – aap MRS khanna aap, ya phir meh kahu Mrs koyal khanna Prabhakar deshmukh ki beti, aap pe mujhe shak toh tha, jab aap ne kaha tha ki aap kuch apne papa se milne bahar gayi thi maine hare ek se puncha par koi bhi aap ke family background ke bare meh kuch nahi janta tha.

Shree – aap ka 2006 se pehle koi record nahi no pan card, passport no bank statement just nothing.

Rathore – our hamara shak tab pakka huwa jab hum meh ye ring mili prabhat ke GHAr ke samne.

Riya showed her ring and slide it in her left hand finger which was a perfect fit.

Riya- it perfect match sir.

Chotu – toh boliye prabhat kaha hai?

She was exposed there was no way back from here so she confessed her crime.

KOYAL – monish ne mere baba ko marwaya kya galti thi unki yahi na ki woh ek sacche insaan the. Unhone in logo ko duniya ke samne laye ki koshish ki par badle meh unhe kya mila maut.

She was sobbing so riys passed her glass of water she took some sips and continued.

Koyal – court to declare it a suicide so i decide to take revenge. I change my identity and married monish. Then i found out that GB is master mind behind scam i was waiting for one chance. Uss din jab mazak meh GB ne bola ki monish ki death hogi he knowed that it's all fake. BG kuch puja ka natak karke unhe bacha lega and tak meh mosnish ko leke yaha aa gayi kyu ki yaha jyada koi nahi ata. Maine our prabhat bhaiya ne usse waise hi maara jaise unhone mere baba ko marwaya tha.

Riya – prabhat tumhara bhai hai ?

Koyal – haan wo mera chota bhai hai. Jab monish mar gaya toh maine ghar wapas ane ka natak kiya taki kisi ko mujhe pe shak na ho.

Arjun – iss liye monish ki chikh sunai di jab ki servant house main house se dur tha its not possible to hearing anything from there that was your lie.

She nodded her head as answer.

Rathore – toh prabhat kaha hai jaldi bolo.

Writer's pov-

All the chappals are expected i'm sorry for late update hope you are satisfy by this one.

And yes why? Chain reaction well i believe on destiny that everything happens on purpose which twist human relation to judged their strength. Here arjun's sudden outburst created riya's extreme reaction which further showed us her emotional turmoil rathore understands shree and chotu's care for riya. It's like there is no life without big bang. Form riya we can understand When we suffer some misfortune, we tend to imagine that no one could possibly be as unhappy or as unfortunate. It's easy to drown in self-pity and turn a blind eye to everyone and everything else. But dwelling on our own pain or discontent and hopelessness only causes our life force to wane even further. It is at such times that we need to rekindle our connections with others, to be concerned for their struggles. In doing so we discover a renewed strength and the will to live. Arjun learned that A single word can scar another. A single word can also give comfort and relief or stir one's spirit to courage, i just adore rathore today he was there when they need someone who just wants to be their sunshine and not the air they breathe. Ok now that's enough

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