FF-Gone with the wind chapter-4 pg15

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ALEKHYA VENDRA

@alee001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

awsomeee... thnks for pm.. continue soon

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Wow...kamal hai dhani...mujhe sach mein ye part dekhana hai...kitna amazing hai...

Rathore console riya...the way...he just stole my heart...

I love you rathore...

Arjun...akadu..but started to feel somthing for riya...awesome hai...wow

Hey today i like chotu and shree...they fight with arjun for the sake of riya...

AND...case is solve(i guess)...but jo bhi h...awesome update hai...

Jaan gale tak aa gayi thi...riya ki fight...wo accident...rathore..arjun ...and our trio...mast hai...

Tu tar khup kahi lapavale aahesh swathachya likhana baddal...Khup sunder lihile aahe...mala manapasun aavadale...

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Tami_
lovely update luv riya rathore convo
awesome

yeah thats was my favorite part too 😳

thanks

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

great update!!! loved rathore-riya convo... arjun outburst n ofcourse rathore's joke...

rathore was great!!! he saw arjun on terrace..loved it..

please update soon!!!

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Hey ...

Amazing update ...

Loved it ...

I truly love Rathod ...

Awww my Arjun baby was just too scared for Riya n didn't want to lose her ... So that is the reason behind his lashing out at everyone ...awww n Shree n Chottu n even Riya apologized to Arjun ... ..

I love the way you are portraying everyone's traumatizing past, their relations with each other and even dealing with the case so well ...

Plz update soon ... :)

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nivanthi2

@nivanthi2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

i have just finished reading all the parts they are wonderful!!!!! i like ur writing style ! plz continue soon!😃

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Moumi

@Moumimon

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Liked Sree-Riya,Rathore-RiyaAnd also Arjun-riya too...And Sree_rathore_Chotu too...update it soon...

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

it was wounderful udate
continue soon

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Dhani

@Dhani_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: priya00147
hmmm...awesome update...mystery ne bhi hila dala..
oh riya apne aapko prove krne k lie prabhat se nipatne aa gyi!!!
par woh car aur old lady na aate toh pakad leti!!!uski koi galti ni hai..
fir bhi arjun ne use kitna sunaya
rathore is a truely deserved chief!!!
riya ko ek family membr k tarah supprt kia! 😊
"sai hai arjun sw niptna hai toh ek kan se suno aur bahar nikal do" 😃
riya aur rathore ka bhi koi past histry hai kya??! 😕
arjun felt relived seeing riya happy...his pain can b felt! 😔
rathore sb samaj gaya 😳
shree and chotu are sooo sweet 😊
mrs khanna was d culprit
writers POV 👍🏼
update soon..