FF-Gone with the wind chapter-4 pg15 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: -sree13-

Madam detective you truly rocks the update..well done 👏 👏 you realy solve the case very well 👍🏼
Arjun the great Mr. Akdu ki mood ka koi bharosa nehi..bechaari Riya 😭 😭 help karne ki wajahse bhi daat padhi 😕
absolutely love Rathod in this part...he is indeed like a gaurdian to his team 👏 love the way he consoled Riya & the trio are totaly cool..dost ho toh aisa 😛 😛
very very nice update Dhani..dilkhush kar diya tune 😃 😃

thanks for calling detective i would like to be one for sure
case was hardest part to write
well arjun is not akdu he just little confuse
well poor riys got scolding beacuse of her over excitement he really so sweet and caring
riya rathore convo was best part
trio ke bare meh kya bolu they are super cute
i'm glad you like
thanks for reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: alee001

awsomeee... thnks for pm.. continue soon

thanks dear
yeah i'll try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Wow...kamal hai dhani...mujhe sach mein ye part dekhana hai...kitna amazing hai...

Rathore console riya...the way...he just stole my heart...


I love you rathore...

Arjun...akadu..but started to feel somthing for riya...awesome hai...wow


Hey today i like chotu and shree...they fight with arjun for the sake of riya...


AND...case is solve(i guess)...but jo bhi h...awesome update hai...


Jaan gale tak aa gayi thi...riya ki fight...wo accident...rathore..arjun ...and our trio...mast hai...

Tu tar khup kahi lapavale aahesh swathachya likhana baddal...Khup sunder lihile aahe...mala manapasun aavadale...

thanks i too loved watched it on screen
ok now turn rathore diwaani
so arjun ke liye less competion
arjun started feeling riya thats for sure i'm planning something ariya track
well trio is really adorable the ways bond each is just worth of anything right
case is on last stage
next update new case
aww drink some water you will feel better lol
mi kahi lapvat nahi g ...mala mahit navt ki tumhala majh likhan yevadh avadel
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

great update!!! loved rathore-riya convo... arjun outburst n ofcourse rathore's joke...

rathore was great!!! he saw arjun on terrace..loved it..

please update soon!!!

thanks alot
i too love rathore in update
i specially made show some of his sence of humore
i'll update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...

Amazing update ...
Loved it ...
I truly love Rathod ...
Awww my Arjun baby was just too scared for Riya n didn't want to lose her ... So that is the reason behind his lashing out at everyone ...awww n Shree n Chottu n even Riya apologized to Arjun ... ..
I love the way you are portraying everyone's traumatizing past, their relations with each other and even dealing with the case so well ...
Plz update soon ... :)

thanks alots
aaj rathore bada happy hoga
all of you loved him so much😆
with arjun and riya its complicate understand there relationship
well i'm writing the way i feel
i love them as charecter so devloped story behind everyone
as it triller show we can't keep it aside
glad you like it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
awesome dhani..

Loved arjun's outburst...he was so worried...loved the rathore's care..


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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
thanks you so much 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
thanks you so much 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: nivanthi2

i have just finished reading all the parts they are wonderful!!!!! i like ur writing style ! plz continue soon!😃

aww my thanks swetheart
actully i dont have perticular style😛
i'll try to upadate soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update..:) convo btwen rathore nd ria .. jus lvd it..:)

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