FF-Gone with the wind chapter-4 pg15

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neelima

@purecure

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

awesome u goin as d shoe...i mean cute small lil ariya moments...i luvd it...
nice update...n tnx for marathi ...arjun ki behen 😉

plss update soon...n pm kar lena

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ALEKHYA VENDRA

@alee001

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

nice stry...👏👏👏. 👏

thanks 4r pm..

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sneha

@Sneha113

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

kya mast update hai dhani!!!
perfect description of apna famous five...
mystery toh mast hai yaar!!
baba toh papi baba nikla 🤣 🤣
shree awesome job for your best friend..aur riya ka tez dimag..i loved it!!!
arjun ko praise krne mei kya prob hota hai!
marathi translation k lie thanks 😉
ariya moment was fab..!!
thanks for the pm 😊
jaldi update karna!

Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: haruhi26
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Pride and Prejudice?

One of my favorite books by Jane Austen

Was a wonderful story, i wanted to write an Ariya FF on this in Future😉

will be back later for comment😉

edited:

wonderful update dear, the case is becoming more interesting as we go on

and love the cute scenes between Arjun and Riya😳

Please continue soon

hi haruhi
well its my favorite too
arjun quite like mr Darsey
well i'll love read that too😳
yeah case is making do hard too lol
actually thats how i love in show
perfect blend of romance and thriller
thanks for reading it 😊

Edited by Charli_ - 12 years ago

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

@shruti
thanks dear 😛
@pbphattacharya
thanks for compliment 😊
@queen bee
thanks i'll try to add more scene in next update😳😳

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: KiSha13
Dhani love you babes for this beatiful update,thanks for keeping marathi 😳 tu hamare liye Arjun show ki official traslator ban ja 😉 love you too swetie .. and you are most welcome

sahi kaha tune ki friends ke liye jhoot bolna padhta hai toh ek aur jhoot sun,tu bilkul acchi writer nehi hai 😆
lol ek jhut mera bhi i hate hate you so much...

moving to the update,you realy write the case well with bang on timing of logic,I have to say you have such a detective mind 👍🏼

lol me n detective sochna padhega anyways thanks for reading it..

smal small Ariya moments are very cute 😊

off course ariya rocks always

update soon sweety & thanks for pm 😃

yeah i'll surelt pm about update

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

wow...riya arjun aur rathore se itna darti hai ki need mein bhi un dono ka naam leke uthati hai...😛hmmm bechari bahot thak gayi hai...so sad yaar...but shree really work hard and its for his best friend ...hmmm sleeping beauty shree hmmm...lovely yaar...aur shree ka javab beauty with brain kamal hai...perfect for shree...

riya really hmmm she is so sharp ...aakhir wo case ke bottom mein pahoch hi gayi...i really proud her...

RATHORE...dhani my hero aa gaya ...haye padh ke hi usako imagine kar rahi hoon...kitna hot lagta hoga na uss blue check's shirt and black jeans mein...hayeee...dekha ek aawaj mein hi shree ko hila diya🤣

arjun and riya ...takraye...riya arjun ki bahomein aur arjun riya ke baho mein...awesoem

kya beautiful moment hai...i totally lost in ariya dreamland

wa wa wa wa...riya tumne sab ki bolati band kar di specially arjun ki...wa...par ye kya arjun rathore ne riya ko excellent kaha aur tum ...kuch bhi nahi..,,,uff akadu kahi ka...😲

wa to ye baat hai ki arjun riya ko apane aap se dur rakhata hai...kunki riya arjun ko pagal kar deti hai...hayeee kya baat hai

dhani ...tune to kamal ka likha yaar...sujh hi nahi raha ke kya comment likhu...phir bhi thoda sa hi likha hai...words hi nahi mil rahe feelings express karane ke liye...

mast hai yaar...maza aa gaya ...

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Fantastic update ...
I loved it ...

Well Riya is really smart ... Awww love the roof scene between them ... Riya's presence affect Arjun a lot ...

I even like the crime story ... Love the way it's progressing ...

I'm really looking forward to read he next update ... :)

thanks dear.

well she is super detective like arjun,,, match made in heaven

yeah i too love writing that

crime story well i'm not satisfy with it

i'll try make more intersting in next update😊

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

@kgmu86 thanks sweetie 😊

@prava

i'm glad you like it

keep reading it

thanks 😃

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Dhanshri

@Charlie_

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: purecure
awesome u goin as d shoe...i mean cute small lil ariya moments...i luvd it...
nice update...n tnx for marathi ...arjun ki behen 😉

plss update soon...n pm kar lena

actully thats i loved about show natural romance no forceful intemedaiting scenes

i'm glad you like it

lol marathi anytime welcome

behen hogi tu i'm soon to become MRS rawte

samejhi ya samjhau