New Ariya OS: Yun tera muskurana..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello dearies, Here's another one from me..🤗

Well, here's the inspiration for this one,

However, this one's slightly different from my previous ones.. The best bit being, No words have been spoken by the characters in this one.. 😳😳 I hope you do like it.. 😳

It might sound a little cliched, but like Gorky Sir says, 'Cliches become cliches because they work!' 😳

So here I present,











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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have no words to express how much I loved dis one... You r defiantly back and how!!!!!!!!! This os is by far one of d best that I've read so far. Abs loved it... Tc
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg I loved it ...
I'm sooo happy that u r back n u r back with a bang n with another great idea
Just loved this ss
I swear I was just not smiling but grinning like an idiot while reading it
It was just fantastic ... I wish this really happens
But no worries I no that u r there n u will fulfill all our desires
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome OS... really loved it...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh the moment was so cute i just lost in it n even at the end i was like "oh ho rok kyun di":)..very nice..the coffee moment from same mug was just awww:)..update soon n thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome Back... Hope you enjoyed your Break..
The OS was awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Could it be anything but perfect, coming form you?

Absolutely brilliant, I was mesmerized by each scene and could picture it perfectly in my head, you are absolutely brilliant at using words to describe each and every moment.

Loved the OS. :)

P.S. Looks like the vacation did wonders for you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cn't find wrd to express.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome back!! 😊

Loved the OS. Brilliantly written...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow it was excellent !!!

It was so well written !
I really enjoyed reading it !

Well the first time I'm reading your work, so maybe I'll try your FFs,
But I admit that I prefer reading OS to FF !

However this OS was nice, nice and nice !
Cute Ariya moments !

the same mug part was awesome, I was picturizing Chotu, Shree and Rathore and I was 🤣


Keep it up 😃

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