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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

very beautifully written OS

N the message you tried to pass was very good, so a smile can make anything worthwhile👏

N yep i was also smilling when i read this, thanks for bringing a smile in our life😉

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Another beautiful work by you

Kuddos to you yaar

Loved it

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

WOWWW...that made me smile all through out...in fact, i am all smiling...

you blended all their past encounters and brought it all in an excellent way...

pls cont soon...

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

i just dont have words to express dear:) 😳

u really nailed it:)...awesome os ever i read on ariya :)👏👍🏼⭐️

loooved it lyk hell:)😆😉😊

i loooved every small gestures of them 4 each other...u wrote them so beautifully...that...i just cant stop myself reading again:)😉😊

thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗

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NeethuEli

@NeethuEli

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Loved it...

I was in a very depressed mood from yesterday and everyone was trying to make me smile, but failed. But you just did it. Thank you sooo much. I love you!!!!!

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mushiroxx

@mushiroxx

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wow now this is called BACK WITH A BANG...👏👏👏

loved it so much...the silent conversations, unspoken words...that's surely my cup of tea(oops i mean coffee)😉😆

arjun-riya sipping coffee from the same mug without even realizing...

the way u expressed arjun-riya comfort n pain they felt being with each other but sill miles apart from each other was fantastic...👍🏼

the last part of splashing rain drops on each other's face ...that was beautiful n the line...HIS SMILE CREPT ON HER LIPS...👏

awww avantika ur a damn good writer...n when it comes to ariya...everything is just perfect...❤️❤️

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ramishafariha

@ramishafariha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

just truly loved it and thanks for the pm...

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

that was really nice! loved it a lot! very nicely written! thank you for the wonderful OS! had a wonderful time reading it!

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

awesome OS dear... seriously loved it...😊

thanx 4 the Pm

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Absolutely loved this one Avantika. Waiting to read more OS from you.

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