New SS: yuhi kat jayega safar... updated on pg- 13 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Great part..
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Awsm Update...
love the dialoug.. "ab chal rahi ho….ya uthake le jaoon"….
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
loving the story 😊
tee-rathore k jhagre k wajah se ab bechare teeno juniors bhugat rhe hai 😛
loved shree's dialigoe of 2 se 3 ho gae..
and the lst dialogue my fav "uthake le jaaon" ❤️
continue soon 😊
Edited by priya00147 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
awesome awesome awesome

i didn't read this ss before ...but this is awesome

update soon and add me to your pm list

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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
part- 5

After hearing that they are going to leave for Rajsthan.. everybody left office for preparation to go to Rajashthan, but Tee became upset… some unknown fear or worried can be seen on her face… Arjun's words echo in her ears…"hume aaj hi RAJASTHAN" ke liye niklenge… she was talking to herself "Rajasthan, Rajasthan…. Phir se… kaise hoga??... nahi mein phir se sab nahi face karpaungi… Arjun inturpted her thought process and asked, "tum theek ho…??!!" she wasn't able to say anything to him just nodded her head… Arjun observed her face and waited for her for sometime…. When he about to leave, she called him, "Arjju…" Arjun felt same old feelings that they used to share…. She continued, "woh… mein… kal"…she was unable to say properly but Arjun understood what she was trying to say… and said, "okay…." And both of them left office…
On the same day at 6:00 pm…. Everyone reached to ETF office with their luggage… Rathore asked his team, "aapki ACP Tanirikakaha hai? Roz ka natak hai uska…. Jab bhi kabhi kisi important kaam ke liye jana ho to madam humesha late aati hai… aaj kya woh aanewali nahi hai?!!" Arjun instantly replied, "nahi.. woh hamare sath nahi aarahi hai…" Rathod was shocked to hear that Tee wasn't coming with them.. he became little upset…then Arjun added, "ab chale… waise bhi kafi lamba safar hai…" shree cracked joke as soon as Arjun finished,…"Lamba safar hai dost banaate rahiye, dil mile ya na mile, haath milaate rahiye" and he signaled Riya to go to Arjun's car and he and chhotu laughedand she shook her head and went to Arjun's car… she sat next seat to Arjun…while shree, chhotu, and Rathod were in to another car….
On their way to Rajasthan… Rathod was still upset… Tee's absent was affecting him.. he was irritated and angry… he doesn't know why he was keep thinking about her… he wished bottom of his heart that she would be here with him…but doesn't want to accept it… shree and chhotu noticed it.. they looked at eachother… then Shree turned on Radio FM… at sametime, in another ETF car… Riya was sitting next to the Arjun… she was happy that she was able to spend a lot of time with Arjun… she was looking at him and sometime looking outside from window… the she also turned on the Radio FM same station as Shree put…where RJ announcing that kishan had just requested a song dedicated to his love meera- she was not there with him…he wanted to give her message by this song how much he love her and plz forgive him… so it's for her, Riya informed Arjun that, "yeh mera favorite radio station hai.. is waqt ispe pyar karne wale- specially who jo ekdusare se dur hai ya phir naraaz ho to unko manane ke liye message send karte hai aur apni pasand ke songs ki request karte hai"….and song was played on radio "Jeeta tha jiske liye… liske liye marta tha..ek aisi ladki thi jise mein pyar karta tha… ek aisi who ladki thi jise mein pyar karta tha"
riya suddenly realize that Arjun could be hurt.. She looked at him… his face was calm but there was a pain in his eyes… he remembered all the beautiful memories with Roshni….
While Rathod also remembered the moment he had with Tee…In the flashback… Tee was wearing shorts and white tanks… with lose curls… and Rathod was wearing black shorts with blue t-shirts… and they were on the beach… she was teasing him..she was as innocent as a kid… her smile was pure…she was just the opposite Tee right now she is… sweet, fuuny, and bubbly girl.. who used to believe in living each and every moment of life… he also remembered some precious moment with her such as, he, Arjun and Tee were on vacation to Kerala, Rathod and Tee's first dance, she cooked dinner very first time, however it was the worst food ever he ate in his life..still he ate all.. all the romantic moments they had came in front of his eyes… first movie together, going in the garden… and then suddenly he remembered… tee was going…. He was looking at her back… there were tears in his eyes… and she left… he came out from his flashback
Arjun and Rathod- both of them eyes became wet… on the other hand Tee were in her house and crying… she was also remembering all the beautiful memories like… their college days, her, Rathod and Arjun's masti… Rathod and her dance… painting that rathod had made was horrible… and she got yellow color on her cheek and Rathore wiped it but he was very close to her… how all four of them Sameer, Tee, Arjun and Roshni.. went to picnic and had a fun…then she remembered wedding day…she was in bridal wear… and sitting alone in temple and crying… all these made her cry more…
Riya saw pain in Arjun's eye and she turned off the radio… Arjun looked at her but didn't say anything but she knows he wanted to thank her…
It was getting darker at night.. Rathod was sad… shree and chhotu realized that it was very serious than they thought… they were quite..and felt bad for Rathod…

thank you,, and plaz read and leave your comments here.. tell me how it is..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
nice update..v emotional...continue soon plz!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
great story dear...👏 looks like there is something fishy with that model..😕
would love to read more asap..😃
and it was too emotional to see rathod and arjun craving for their love ladies 😭
and at the same time, Tee was crying her heart out at home
hopefully they will be safe in Dholpur😊
please continue soon😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the flashback 😊 dos beautiful moments 😊 and painful ones saddened them 😔 continue soon and thanks for d pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
awesome ss loved it cont sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Vry vry nyc & emotioal part.
plz continue asap
why Tee crying in temple.. plz reveal mystety soon.
thx 4 PM.

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