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Posted: 12 years ago
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part- 7

After taking breakfast they left for Dholpur… and around 9 o'clock at night they reached at Dholpur… when they enterd in the border of Dholpur some people attacked on them… they had little fought…those attackers couldn't face the ETF and ran away… Chhotu said, "wahh… kya welcome hua hai humara…" Arjun said, "situation bahut hi kharab hai yah pe… jitni meine sochi thi usse kai jyada…hume bahut hi savdhani se kam karna hoga… khas kar tumhe Rathod"… they left from there and reached to Rathod's haveli….
They reached to Rathod's haveli… his Haveli is reflecting his family's royal status… it was a very huge 3 story building… with huge garden… several guards protect haveli 24/7… and many servants served them…. Their ETF cars entered in the haveli through big gates…. All of them came out from the car and about to enter in the haveli through the main enterance… where Rathod's mother, his sister inlaw, his nephews and neice, his grand mother, his brother and his bua(aunt) were standing there with pooja ki thali…. His whole family were very hapy to see him…they all have tears of joy… and rathod ki maa ne uski aarti uteri… Rathod touched his mother, grand mother, aunt, and sister inlaw's feet… her mother said wipping her tears, " kaise ho beta? …kitne saalon baad dekh rahi hu mein apne dono beto ko?" rathod replied "mein bilkul theek hun masa…aap rona band kijiye" and he huged her mother…arjun also touched her feet and gave her huge… Arjun also touched his all family members feet…riya, chhotu and shree now shocked to know that Rathod and Arjun used to share very strong friendship… they knew that they know each other for long time but never thought they were best friends… Shree said very surprisingly, "Agneepath key eh angry hero to Dostana bhi kar chuke hai…" Chhotu replied… "aur kuch kuch hota hai bhi… Woh Tee ke sath"… all of them laughed…Arjun was behaving very different to all family members… he was the different ACP Rawte… actually he was not ACP rawte at this time at all… he was just Arjun Rawte…the old Arjun Rawte… Riya was just looking at him and very happy to see him like this and smiling… Rathod's grand mother read this feelings in to Riya's eyes… and she was smiling… they all enterd in the haveli… when Her grandmother hold Arjun's hand and stopped him to talk something… Arjun said, "ji dadi sa.. kahiye … aaj aap ka tajurba kya kehta hai… aisa kya apni tazurbedar ankhon ne dekha!!??" Dadi said, "beta guzare kal ko to koi badal nahi sakta… lekin ane wala kal ko tum zaroor badal sakte ho… jab tak guzare hue kal ki padchhayion se bahar nahi nikalo ge tab tak (turning his head towards Riya) tum aane wale haseen kal ki dastak nhi sun sako ge… he understood what dadi sa trying to say… he didn't say aword and dadi sa left… he was staring Riya for few seconds… where somebody called him, "Arjun bhaisa…" he turned his head and it was young, beautiful, and traditional girl was standing there…she was very sad but pretending to be happy… Arjun said happily … "chhoti…" and that girl huged him and was crying… Rathod came there and said "chhoti apne sameer bhai sa ke liye bhi thoda pyar bacha ke rakhna…" and she huged Rathod too… entire ETF team was meeting Rathod's family… and Rathod's father Thakor Vikramsinh Rathod came down … he has the very strong personality… was wearing traditional kurta payjama, with treamed mustache, he looked like a Royal king when he was coming through the stairs… Everyone became quite when he came… Arjun reached to him and touched his feet… he gave him blessings said, "jeete raho… (looking at Rathod he said to Arjun)… jankar achcha laga ki kam se kam tum to apne sanskaro aur parmpara ko bhule nahi"…Rathod was still standing there ignoring what his bapu sa said but his mother signaled him to go and touched the feet his father… he touched his father's feet…
Shree said, "Ree aisa nahi lagta ki hum log HUM DIL DE CHUKE SANAM ke set par aagaye hai"… chhotu added, "aur Rathod sir ke father ko dekha..ab pata chala Rathod sir aise kyun hai"… Riya continued, "tum logo ko nahi lagta ki Rathod sir aur unke dad ke beech kuch problem hai"… Shree said to her, "chhod na Ri hume kya... humara to in sab se dur rehna hi theek hoga… pata nahi inke aur kitne Raaz chupe hue hai.. har bar ek naya angle samne aajata hai… pehle Tee, phir Rathod sir aur Tee ki love story… uspe Arjun sir aur Rathod sir ka Dostana… phir uspe yeh Rathod sir ki hum sath sath hai wali family… pata nahi abhi kitne angle khul ne baki hai…mujhe to lagta hai kal subah Rathod sir ka koi beta na ajaye unke atith se"… "Sahi hai yar in logo par to ek pura suspense tv show ban sakta hai aur agar inke angle ko chudane gaye to hum apna angle hi kho denge"… chhotu agreed with shree… Rathod's servent came to inform them that their rooms are ready and they can go and take rest there… Arjun and Rathod came where shree, chhotu and riya was standing… Arjun said, "tum log jakar sau jao… hume kal subah case pe kam shuru karna hai.. Waise bhi do din to aise hi chale gaye hai… ab baki ke do dino mein case solve karna hai"… they all went to their rooms…
In the morning after breakfast they all met in the room that they have made their conference room…Arjun said, "kal raat ke hamle ke baad hum sab ko bahut hi alert rehna hoga… koi bhi akele kisi ko bina bataye kahi nahi jayega"… Chotu said to shree, "ab bathroom jane ke liye bhi inki permission leni padegi kya?"…. Riya said, "sir us hamle ke peechhe Mr. Talwar ki family ka hath ho shakta hai… unhone badala lene ke liye … shayad" Rathod agreed with her and said, "shayad nahi Riya… mujhe pakka yakin hai… ki is hamle ke peechhe Talwar ki family hi hai"… "Rathod tumhe un sab mein sabse jyada kis par shak hai?" Arjun asked him… Rathod replied, "mujhe to Talwar ki family waise hi pasand nahi hai... mujhe to sab pe shak hai.. haa use parivar mein sirf ek insaan pe mujhe bharosa hai.. aur woh hai Revati kaki… unki patni"… shree informed them, "sir unka chhota beta Rishabh Talwar who bhi nahi hosakta.. kynki uski call ki last location out of india dikha rahe the"… arjun said, "aage ki lead hume Talwar ki haveli jake hi milegi…" they all left for Talwar's haveli with local police…

thank you for Reading... and plz leave your comments and let me know how was it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
loool i loved the comments the trio was passing !!!1:))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
loved it 😃
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Hum dil de chuke sets😆, that was a good one😆
But loved it , please continue soon😊
Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
great yrr
finallyy Arjun rathod raaz is opeinnig too ETf
loved dadisa statment about arjun
cont sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
lovely update 😊
chotu and shree were damn hilarious 🤣 cudnt stop laughing 🤣
arjun-rathore ka dostana acha lga 😉 😊
rathore father seems strict!!
carry on with the case..update soon and thanks for the pm 😊
Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Chotu & Shree Really😆
Rathod's family introduction is ossam..😊
Thx 4 PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
ohh chotu n shree damn hilarious man 🤣
dostana,hum dil de chuke sanam,agneepath,hum saath hai 😆 lagta hai chotu aur shree film par research kar rahe the 🤣 now what is wrong with rathore n his father??? interesting update n thanks for pm dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
part- 8

Talwar's haweli looked like a some king's palace…it was a very huge mension… with a big garden and with royal and antiques interior design… there were guards and servents in the house… they stopped at the gate by guards… Arjun showed them their ETF cards with his arrogant style… and they let them come in to haweli… they entered the haweli… Talwar's brother in-law girish Tomar came with Talwar's eldest son Teemir Talwar… Teemir got very angry after seeing Rathod there…he pulled the gun from the wall and aimed it to Rathod but the otherpolice officers and ETF members took out their guns and pointed to Teemir and Arjun said, "apni gun neeche rakho …verna humare goliya chalne par to sawal bhi nahi uthenge.. samje ya samjaoo" … Teemir's mama Girish signaled him to put the gun down…
Rathod and Arjun interogatted Teemir and Girish… they all were sitting in the living room… Arjun asked to Teemir, "tum to 26th September ko to Mumbai mein hi the… us raat ko Mumbai mein kaha the?" Teemir angrily said, "mein apni wife seema ke saath apni hi hotel meintha… subah police ka phone aaya to pata chala ki dad ki death ho chuki hai… aap chahe to hotel mein phone karke puch sakte hai" Rathod said, "wow… apna hi hotel aur apne hi staff… unki juthi gavahi dene ke liye to tumhe unhe kitna convince karna pada hoga… I can understand that?" he stood up in anger and said, "what do you mean? Mein jooth nahi bol raha hun… mein sach mein wahi tha.. apni wife ke saath… ma ko manana tha… Seema se shaadi karne se who bahut hi naraz thi… isliye hum unka intazar kar rahe the hotel mein?" arjun and Rathod was shocked after hearing that they looked at each other… Arjun asked "Mrs. Rewati Talwar Mumbai meinthi?" Teemir replied, "nahi woh yaha nahi aayi thi…who aane wali thi… par raste mein unki tabiyat kharab ho gayi thi to unhe waha nazdik ke hospital mein admit kiya tha… aur dusare din dad ki maut ki khabar ne unhe pura tod diya… aur yeh sab isi Sameerr Rathod ki wajah se hua hai"…Arjun stood up angrily and said, "kiski wajah se hua hai yeh hum tay karenge.. aur ha jab tak investigation chal rahi hai tab tak aap Dholpur chhod ke nahi Jayenge"…
Rathod asked Girish, "Talwar ki maut ke waqt tum kaha the.." he looked at them angrily and said, "katil to yeh Sameer Rathod hai.. usine jijjaji ka katal kiya hai… hume itne sawal kyun kar rahe ho?" sameer answered him, "jitna puchha jaye utna hi jawab do…" he informed them that "mein use raat Dholpur mein hi tha… mein minister Vijayendra jain ke saath dinner kar raha tha… par usi raat ko didi ka phone aaya ki unki tabiyat kharab ho gayi to mein unko milne seedhe hospital gaya tha"… Arjun curiously asked, "Vijayendra Jain to wohi hai na… do no family ke common friend?" Rathod said, "ha wahi hai"… Arjun said to Rathod, "hume unse bhi milna padega"
Riya was asking the ladies and servents of the house… they all looked very busy and tensed… she first askedGirish's wife Pooja Tomar, "Mrs. Rewati Talwar kaha par hai? Unhe bulayengi plz… mujhe unse bhi puchhtachh karni hai"… Pooja replied, "who didi ki tabiyat bahut hi kharab ho gai hai… who abhi bhi sadme mein hai…doctor ne araam karne ko bola hai..woh apne kamre mein hi hai"…Riya asked her again, "aap kab se yaha Mr. Talwar ke ssaath reh rahe ho?" "jabse shaadi karke aayi hun tabse… mere saas sasur ka to saalon pehle hi dehant ho chukka hai aur who didi se bahut hi lagav hai… woh haesha kehte the ki didi unki masa jaisi hi hai…unki apni ma ke sath jyada yaade nahi hai par didi ne hi unhe sambhala tha… wo hamesha didi ke sath hi rahe hai… phir didi ki shaadi ke baad inhone apna paisa jijjaji ke business mein laga diya tha… tabse hum unke saath hi rehte hai"Pooja answered. Riya asked her again, "aap 26th September ko kaha par thi".. she replied, "mein to ghar pe hi thi… aur kaha jaungi… dekhiye is ghar ka sara kaam mein hi sambhal rahi hun pichhalle kuch hapto se… ek minute ka bhi shanty nahi hai… upar se shanta masi bhi kuchh hapto se chhutti par hai" she seemed very busy to Riya. Riya asked , "yeh Shanta masi kaun hai?" Pooja replied, "woh Rewati didi ki bahut hi purani naukrani hai… who naukrani kum aur saheli jyada hai… bachpan se unki dekhrekh karti aayi hai… par unke pote ki tabiyat kharab thi to unhone chhutti li hai"… Riya asked question to other servewnts too.
Shree and Chhotu interrogate Talwar's Munim who came their haweli to hand in some cash accounts files to Teemir… he said, "woh sirf Talwar saab ke gaav ki khet aur zamin ki income ka hi hisab rakhte hai… unke baki business ka hisab to who khud hi rakhte the"… Chhotu asked, "khet aur zamin yani woh kafi logo ko paise girvi dete honge"… munim replied, "ji haa… log apni jameen, ghar ya gehne girvi rakhte the aur paise le jate the… jab who paise lauta nahi pate to unki jameen ya job hi unho ne girvi rakha ho who hum le lete hai"… Shree asked, "aap ki yeh job hi lenden hoti hai uska koi records to hoga na … mujhe sare records chahiye"… Munim gave all the papers to shree… and chhotu and Shree left from there… Shree took pics of haveli and all the family members and… there were many antique decoration in the haveli and he took pics of them as well becoz he was very impressed with all the interior and royal test of Talwar… while he was taking pics… he saw a big photo frame of Rewati Talwar hanging on the wall of study room, with some lady… one servent told him that that lady in the picture with malkin is her old servent Shanta masi- she was her servent since her childhood, and used to stay together all time…
Chhotu asked Shree, "are shree in logo ke ghar kitne bade hai… meri to puri colony hi isme aajayegi… Shree agreed with him and said, "yahan to ek kamre se dusare kamre mein jane ke liye bhi map lagta hoga.. kahi koi kho jaye to!!"
Riya, Chhotu, Shree, Arjun and Rathod all met and Riya informed them, "sir sab kuch theek bhi lag raha hai aur nahi bhi… kuch samaj nahi aaraha… aur ha Mrs. Rewati Talwar apne kamre mein hai… Doctor ne unhe rest karne ke liye kaha hai" Arjun and Rathod went to Rewati Talwar's room she was sleeping ther and nurse was taking care of her there… they all left for Rathod's haveli… when they reached at Rathod's house, Arjun got a phone call… he went a side and after few seconds came back… and told Chhotu, Riya and Shree to go inside… and he informed Rathod that, "tee ka phone tha… woh rajasthan mein hai…bahut hi disturb lag rahi thi… use lene ke liye waha kisi ko bhejna padega… Rathod suggested, "chhotu ko bhej dete hai" Arjun said, "nahi waha chhotu ko nahi bhej sakte… I think tumhe apne driver mein se hi kisi ko bhejna hoga… pas hi mein to hai 1 ghante mein to aajayege waps"… and Rathod sent his driver to picked up Tee… when they wwere entering inside the Haveli Shree hit hisself to a young girl, she was Poonam's friends… they got eyecontacts and shree and that girl were smiling at eachother…a nd girl was shying and left from there… Riya and Chhotu went to shree and Riya slowly said to him, "Shree yeh Mumbai nahi hai… yaha par kisi ladki ko tum itne pyaar se muskurakar dekho gen a to yah ke kawar sa banjaoge… yani shaadi karwa dege tumhari"… Shree's reaction sudden changed and he was little sacred after hearing the word "shaadi" and said , "kya!!!??" Chhotu and Riya was laughing at him
Knowing that Tee is coming Rathod became very happy… he thought, "aaj kitne salon baad who yaha aayi hai… waise to yeh pehli bar hi hai jab who mere ghar aayegi"
A beautiful song of Kailash kher, "AAJ MERE PIYA GHAR AAVENGE" played in the backgroung…here is the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jz_UKzB6eX8
Everyone noticed that Rathod felt little Relief… there was some sadness on his face but sudden they noticed a relief and happyiness in his eyes …
Shree started checking all the paper works and Riya joined him…Arjun and Chhotu made board of pics of everyone with their details… and Rathod was still thinking something… Arjun and everyone in his house noticed it…
Tee arrived there in 2 hrs… Rathod's family were staring at her… his father was very disappointed with Rathod coz he called Tee at their house…Tee and Rathod's father gave a bitter looked eacdhother… but Rathod's grandmother was happy… when his father about to leave her grand mother stopped him and said, "vikram beta… mein samaj ti hunk e us ladki ka yaha ana tumhe achcha nahi laga… par yeh to bhagwan ki marzi hai… bhagwan ne jinki kismet mein ek sath judna likha hai woh to alag ho ke bhi ek sath jude rehte hai… 4 saal pehle jo kahani yaha khatam hui thi… aaj fir 4 saal baad yaha par shuru hogi"… and thakur vikram sinh Rathod left in anger and Dadi sa was smiling and pray that "mata rani sab theek kar dena"…
Tee got freshn up and met her ETF team in their conference room… riya told her the total progress of the case so far… Tee asked Shree if he had found anything in that accounts that they brought from Talwar's Munim… and Shree said, "yeh sare hisaab to kafi gadbad hai… kuch samaj nahi aaraha hai…par sab se jyada karza kisi Shibu namm ke aadmi ne liya tha… par ek ajeeb baat hai ke Sheebu ne apna karza sahi waqt pe lauta diya tha… aur inme sirf uska hi hisaab sahi hai"… Arju said, "heesab sahi kabhi nahi baithe ge shree… Talwar Zameendar tha to usine paiso ke liye un gareeb kishano ko galat heesab mein uljakar unke paise aith raha tha…" chhotu curiously asked, "to fir is Shibu ne apna karza kaise pura kar diya who bhi bina gadbad ke"… "who to hume Shibu ke ghar par jake hi pata chalega" Rathod said…

thank you for reading this SS... i am trying to post update as soon as possible, before saturday... so plz read and leave your comments


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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
loved family's bonding with arjun nd rathore
shree nd chotu were funny
thnks for pm

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