New SS: yuhi kat jayega safar... updated on pg- 13

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aptl123

@aptl123

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Posted: 13 years ago

hello guys...

i am trying to write new SS... i am new here and this is my first SS so do let me know how do you like it or what changes i should make it.. i am going to show you the past of Arjun and Rathore... their college days...and rathore's love interest...

YUHI KAT JAYEGA SAFAR SATH CHALNE SE

part-1

Story starts where somebody was fighting and arguing in some farm house' it was Rathod who was fighting with somebody and Rathod beat that man and left that house' he felt somebody was following him but when he looked back there was no body and he left then..

Next day in the ETF office, Shree was working on his computer and Chhotu was watching news' then Arjun enters'He looked at Riya... she smiled at him but he didnt react... Riya prepared tea for him and gave that to Arjun. Arjun gave weired look to riya and very rudely said, "main is waqt to apni katting chai khud mangwa shakta hun ..to yeh mujhe nahi chahiye." Riya became upset, Arjun saw that disappointment on her face and he realized that she was hurt. Riya sat next to Shree...she looked upset and Shree said slowly to Riya " kyun tum apna sir diwar pe mar rahi ho Riya...tumhara hi sir photega.. ek bar agar pathar hota to bhi shayad peegal jata... par yaha koi chance nahi hai"... Riya gave "shut up" look to shree... and Chhotu laughed at them..

Rathod entered the room .. He seemed very tensed' right behind him some people from CBI entered to arrest Rathod in charge of murder of Devendra singh Talwar'every one in ETF team were shocked' he told everybody that he didn't do anything' but one of the CBI officers informed them that they found some evidence against him so he had to go with them...Shree and chhotu looked at eachother with confused face.. Riya asked them that they just cant take rathod like this... he is responsible ETF chief... one CBI officers said, humare paass pukhta saboot hai aur court ka warrant bhi hai to please cooperate kijiye"... Arjun was quietly listening this..they took Rathod' while Rathod was leaving with CBI officer, he looked at Arjun and Arjun signaled him by slightly shaking his head.

Arjun and Riya went to commissionaire office to take the incharge of rathod's case... and Arjun convinced commissioner for that' commissioner also informed that a new officer is going to join ETF from now and handed an envelope with all the information about the new officer to Arjun '' but Arjun didn't care to open and read that, he gave that to Riya' commissioner also told them that she' a new officer had requested to join ETF specially for this case'and Arjun will be chief of ETF until Rathod came back.

plz do let me know if i should continue or not...

thank you

part- 1 on pg.1

part- 2 on pg. 2

promos of part 3 on pg. 3

part-3 on pg. 3

part-4 on pg. 4

part-5 on pg.5

part-6 on pg.7

part-7 on pg. 8

part-8 on pg.10

part-9 on pg.11

part 10- on pg. 13

Edited by aptl123 - 12 years ago

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Shru

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow...this is interesting...continue soon😊

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Rukhsar ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

omggg i think somthigns fishyy with the new etf officer !!!!!!!!

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sneha

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Posted: 13 years ago

continue soon dear it looks interesting..

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Posted: 13 years ago

gud update and
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and also update next part as soon as possible

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Posted: 13 years ago

very nice plzzz update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow new chief interesting pls update soon

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aptl123

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Posted: 13 years ago

part- 2

Arjun called Shree and Chhotu to meet him at crime scene... and he and Riya left for crime scene...on their way to farm house, Rriya was sitting quietly in the car and looked little tensed... Arjun noticed her concerned about Rathod... he told Riya with his rude and arrogant way that, "statically speaking Riya, agar officer apni tension ya pressure me aake kam karte hai to unke case solve karne ke chances 40% kum hojate hai' aur waise bhi aise chupchap baithna tum pe suit nahi karta' samje ya samjaoo"... Riya was shocked to hear that from Arjun and she was looking at Arjun with wide open eyes... and she also got little smiled on her face... she felt good that atleast Arjun noticed that she was upset... after a moment Rriya turned on a radio FM and a beautiful song was played ..."Mann yeh saahib ji, jaane hai sab ji...Phir bhi banaye bahaane'.Naina nawaabi ji, dekhe hain sab ji,Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare'.Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere'Jiya ko dheere dheere bhaayo re Saibo"'... Riya went into flash back and remembered all the moment she had with arjun... their first meetings, together they solved a cases, how Arjun saved her life, how he hold her after she got shot... and was smiling' Arjun also looked the smile on her face and he felt relief that she is okay... now' a tiny part of her bangs fell on her face... Arjun stared at her for few second...suddenly a wide right turn came in a way and Riya hits her head in Arjun's shoulder' her heartbeats became much faster and Arjun also started feeling something for the first time.

Chhotu, Shree, Arjun and Riya enterd to the murder sight... It was a big bungalow with swimming pool... and Mr. Devendra Talwar's body was laying in the hall... they entered into hall where some women had started investigating the crime scene... she was stylist, with long loose curl ... with black casual pants and with light blue shirts and multi color scarf on it'she was standing by keeping her beck to Arjun'.and Arjun got irritated and asked, "excuse me, kya ap ko pata nahi hai ki crime scene par kisi ka bhi is tarah aana mana hai ' aap yaha kya kar rahi ho"' that girl turned around to Arjun and arjun was shocked to see her.. and surprisingly said "Tee!!!?? Tum..yahan kya kar rahi ho"' she gave him big mean evil smile and very arrogantly answered that "its Tanirika... Tanirika Zala'. Aur mein yaha wahi kar rahi hun jot aap kar rahe ho ACP Arjun Rawte" and looking toward everyone she further added "mein hi woh new ETF officer hun, ACP Tanirika Zala'"and looking at Arjun she sarcasticly said "SIR!!??" Shree, chhotu, and Riya introduced themselves to Tee... Riya said to Tee, "welcome to ETF mam... i hope aap ko hamare sath kam kar ke bahut achcha lage.." "i am hoping samething" Tee replied by looking at arjun... Arjun didn't say anything to her but Riya had noticed that Arjun's reaction after seeing Tee... he was surprised, but happy...Riya was staring at Tee and Arjun, and started to figured it out the relationship between Arjun and Tee on her own... Shree noticed it and slowly said into riya's ear "Rii kaam pe dhyan de' warna yeh samjo ya samjaoo ko hume data ne ka ek aur moka mil jayega"... Chhotu and Shree both console to Riya... Arjun ordered Riya to find out about Mr. Talwar... Shree took pics of crime scene... and he and tee observed crime scene very carefully... they all met in conference room in ETF office...

thank you

please give me your reply...

Edited by aptl123 - 13 years ago