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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello guys,
here I am back with promos of my SS: YUHI KAT JAYEGA SAFAR SAATH CHALNE SE...
IN CH-3 you will see Rathod and Tee's meetings...
Rathod and Tee's reaction... from Ch-3 "Tee went in to flashback and some unclear images of some girl's in her wedding dress... crying...and tears fell from her eyes..."
Rathod and Tee's arguments.. Chhotu and Shree's Masti...

plz Read CH-3 of Yuhi kat jayega safar saath chalne se... i will post it by tomorrow...
and please leave your precious comments after reading... and let me know if i need some changes.. or give me your suggestion.
thank you
Edited by aptl123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sound interesting
continue soon
wating for ur update

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part -3

In the ETF office everyone was in the conference room where Riya told about Mr. Talwar

Mr. Talwar….janemane businessman aur Rajasthan ke jamindar thakur….. bohat hi rangeen mijaz ke the… kai sare restaurants, resort aur bar ke malik…besumar dolat ke malik… aur har who buri aadat jo ek jamidar aur rich businessman ko hoti hai… business ke sheelshele mein akshar ghar se bahar rehte the… kafi waqt who Mumbai mein hi bitate the...aur unka pariwar rajashtank mein Dholpur mein rehta hai… ek aur baat unki thakor Vikramsinh Rathod se khandani dushmani hai… jo inke pitaji ke saath shuru hui thi aur ab tak chali aa rahi hai… hearing the name of Vikramsinh Rathod Arjun and Tee's expression changed...
Riya continued...Thakor Vikram sinh Rathod- ACP rathod ke pitah aur rajasthan ki one of the reputed Rajput family mein se ek hai….aur kafi strong politics contacts rakhte hai… Bade jameendar aur khandani raish hai… woh apne gaav ke logo mein favorite haii… gaav ki unnati ke liye kai sare achchhe kam kiye hai unhone… jaise schools, hospital, aur pakki sadke banvayi thi…. Haal hi mein woh chmbal nadi ke pani ko apne gaav mein lane ki koshish kar rahe hai… jisse gaav ke kishano ko kafi fayda hoga….
In do parivaron mein kai salon se dushmani chali aa rahi hai….Mr. Talwar hamesha se Mr. Rathod ki logo mein badhati hui lokpriyata se jalte the aur kai nakaam koshishe bhi kithi unhai neecha dikhane ki… Is dushmani ko mita ne ki koshish common politics friend – Vijayendra jain ne kai bar ki thee par nakam rahi…. Chhotu eagerly asked "koshish …kaise?"
Riya replied, "do parivaron mein rishta jodkar Mr. Talwar ke bte aur Rathod sir ki behen ki shaadi karwake" Tii and Arjun both shockingly said "kya… shaadi!!??... aur who bhi…."they stopped and looked at eachother…. Vijayendra jain- Dholpur ke minister hai.. aur in dono ke akele common friend hai
At that time two CBI officers entered in the ETF office with Rathod….everyone was very happy to see Rathod back…Tee just stand behind everyone, in the corner of room, so Rathod couldn't see her… one of the CBI officer informed that they only have 4 days to solve the case after 4 days that case came back to CBI… furthermore Rathod can go with them but officially cannot interrogate any person… if he become violent then he would be end up into jail…. After taking signature of Arjun they left… and Rathod spotted Tee who was standing in the corner…. Rathod said "Tee... tum yaha?!!" arjun told rathod that she is a new ETF officer ACP Tanirika Zala. Rathod was confucsed, shocked , and uncomfortable but happy at the same time…both of them stared at each other for few seconds… they forgot everything around them …. Tee went into flashback and some unclear images of some girl into wedding dress… crying… came into her mind and tears fell from her eyes… Then Tee left the room and Riya also went behind her…. Rathod ki aankhon mein bhi pani aa gaya, but he controlled himself… Arjun was observing all of this by standing there in his own style- crossing his hands on his chest, with expressionless face….
Tee went to rest room and cried… Riya entered in the resteroom behind Tee with water bottle in her hand… she was totally confused what was going there?... she offered paper tissue to Tee and then gave water bottle… and said, "mam aap theek to hai!??" Tee nodded her head and replied, "mein theek hun… thank you riya… aur haa… plz mujhe tum Tee kehke bula shakti ho"… "jee… mam… I mean Tee" riya answered.
Rathod was shaking her head and said "wow….already ek musibat hai …. Ek aur nayi musibat … pata nahi kya hoga"…. Tee ansered behind him very rudely "musibat… interesting…. Kind for your information… mein yaha tumhari musibat dur karne aayi hun… SIRR?" Riya, Shree and Chhotu were stunned… Shree mumbled "are yarr Ree… tum bekar mein hi pareshan ho rahi thee….tumhare triangle ka yeh angle to kisi aur angle se hi juda hua haii".. chhotu laughed and said "haa Riya… Mubarak ho.. koi triangle nahi hai"…Shree again mumbled "are yaar Rathod sir ko dekhkar laga nahi ki unki intni hot girl friend..." before he finished, Rathod and Arjun looked at him furiously, so he couldn't finish his sentence… Tee very rudely said "kaam shuru kare… case ke bare mein discuss kare SSIRR!!"...

so guys tell me how is it?...and please do leave your precious comments...
thank you.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome one!!
family dushmani!!!
and rathore and tee have a past!!!
continue soon and thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome!! Do continue soon.. And Shree-Chottu are hilarious.. are yarr Ree… tum bekar mein hi pareshan ho rahi thee….tumhare triangle ka yeh angle to kisi aur angle se hi juda hua haii🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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UR REMINDING ME WHY I LOVE SHREE-CHOTU SO MUCH!!!! AMAZING UPDATE... PLS CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you so much guys for your comments and reading my SS... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part- 4

Rathod became irritated and tried to say her but she ignored him and cut his talk and asked "shree tum plz Mr, Talwar ke phone Records nikalo"…. Shree told her "yes mam.. . meine already nikal diye hai" and handed her the phone records… she further added "aur haa ek aur baat… tum teeno mujhe mam nahi Tee kehke bola shakte ho… mam baut hi old sound karta hai…. Unlike others (rathod aur arjun ki aur ishara karke) mein abhi itani to old nahi hun"… gave her evil smile… Chhotu, Shree and Riya laughed…. Arjun Loudley said "enough… phone records plz?!!" he asked to Tee ... everybody sat into conference room….
In the conference room Rathod pulled chair to sit for himself but Tee came can sit in that chair pretending that she didn't see Rathod… Rathod became angry but he stayed quiet…. Arjun and all the ETF team stared at both of them…. Riya sat in chair that next to Arjun... she already had set up all the documents and ordered his "kating chai" for him… however, she didn't get any appreciation from arjun… looked like he didn't even noticed it… Riya was staring at him and she knew that he can help her, support her but the feelings she had for him, he won't have that for her… but she still have a little hope that one day he might… her eyes wets and wiped her tears the way no one saw that…however, Tee saw her and read that feelings and saw a same pain in Riya's eyes, a same pain that she had … Arjun asked Rathod, "Rathod sabse pehle tum mujhe yeh batao kit um Mr. Talwar ke farm house par kyun gaye the?"… Rathod replied, "meri behen poonam ki shaadi Talwar ke bte Teemir ke saath hone wali thi .. salon se chali aarahi dushmani ko mitane ke liye, par mujhe pata tha ki Teemir achcha ladka nahi hai.. aur nahi Talwar ki niyat achchi hai… woh to is dushmani ko khatam karna hi nahi chahta tha… balki woh to badla lena chahta tha…." Arjun asked ,"kaise?" Rathod continued, "Talwar ke bte Teemir ka pehle se hi kisi ladki ke saath sambhandh tha…aur woh usi ladki ke saath shadi karna chahta tha..isi liye usne janbujhke hamse rishta joda aur usi ne apne bte ko shaadi ke din bhaga diya.. taki hamare pariwar ki badnami ho jaye… majak ban jaye hamara sabke samne… par in sab mein poonam sabse jyada hurt hui hai… kal mein issi ke bare mein baat karne gaya tha waha, humare beech kaha suni ho gayi aur gusse mein mera hath uth gaya use par"
Tee said,"haath uth gaya?? Itne buri tarah se AAPNE peeta hai usko… kafi bruises uski body par mile hai… aur aap keh rahe ho ki sirf hatth uthaya hai… to phir Peetna kise kehte hai SIR?" "woh bhi tum sorry aap bahut jald hi dekh legi" Rathod replied by giving evil smile to her. Tee and Rathod glared at eachother… shree said in very lower tone, "here we go… phir se shuru ho gaye dono… pehle do the ab teen ho gaye… yaar rathod sir ki kisike bhi sath nahi banti"…. Arjun gave a bitter look to shree and he quite…Arjun asked Shree "shree mr. Talwar ko akhari call kin logo kea aye the...specially raat ko dus baje ke baad kin kin logo ka phone aaya tha unhe?"….. "Mr. Talwar ko last call kisi Sheekha Sherawat ka aaya tha… unki maut ke 15 min. pehle… Sheekha Sherawat ek model hai aur tv pe chhoti-moti ads karti hai…. sheekha ke alawa bhi usi raat unhe apni wife-Mrs. Revati Talwar, unke politic friend Mr. vijayendra jain, aur unke bte Rishabh Talwar ke call aaye the…"
Arjun : "Riya tum mere sath … sheekha sherawat ke ghar chalogi"
When they reached at her home, some people were working in her garden… they were planting new plant and installing fountain in the garden…Sheekha's maid opened the door and when Arjun and Riya told her that they are from ETF and wants to meet Sheekha…. Maide told them in Rajasthani accent, "Sheekha madam char dino se ghar nahi aayi…. Meine bahut koshish ki unse baat karne ki par unka phone bhi bandh bata raha hai….waise kabhi kabhi apni ad film ki shooting ki wajah se woh 1-2 hapte bahar rehti to hai… par kabhi apna phone off nahi karti… Meine Talwar saab ko bhi bataya tha iske bare mein... woh pata lagakar phone karenge aisa bataya tha" Riya asked the maide, "Sheekha Mr. Talwar ko Kaise janti thi?" Maide answered "Talwar saab akshar aatejate rehte the yaha… bahut madad ki hai unhone medam ki…. Aur woh madam ka unke saath…." She didn't finish the sentenced… Arjun asked the maide, "yeh sab kya hora hai?" maide replied, "gardening ka kam chal raha hai… pechale 4-5 dino se… sheekha mam ko bahut shaukh hai grdening ka to Talwar saab ne bheja hai in logo ko" "kuch unusual notice kiya tumne undono ke beech mein" Riya asked her…" maid replied , "ha madamji... kuch dino se un dono ke beech zaghada chal raha tha… shadi ko lekkar… madam shaadi karna chati thi…who kafi pareshan bhi thee… darasal who maa banne wali thi… aur saab shaadi ke liye mana kar rahe the.. to kafi zaghde ho rahe the"… they left her house…. Outside of her house Riya told Arjun,"ho shakta hai shayad sheekha ne Mr. Talwar ka khoon kar diya ho aur phir yahan se bhag gai hogi…." Arjun replied Riya, "kabhi bhi jaldbaji mein kisi natize par nahi pahochna chiye… aksar jo hame dikhayi deta hai woh sach nahi hota…." Riya asked, "par sir, uska Mr. Talwar se affair tha.. who pregnant thi aur unse shadi karna chahti thi aur unhone mana kar diya to gussswe mein usne unka khoon kar diya aur bhag gayi…" arjun explained her, "Riya Talwar bahut hi paisewala tha… aur sheekha ek mamuli model… talwar uski ATM machine tha…who uski har jaroorat hi nahi par har shaukh pura karta tha.. talwar ki maut se sabse bada lost usi ka hoga… tabhi mein ne kaha jo dikhta hai who hamesha sach nahi hota… samji ya samjaoo"… riya was looking at him impressively and arjun start walking…. After few steps he noticed Riya was still standing the same place he turned to Riya and said very rudly, "ab chal rahi ho …. Ya uthake le jaoon"…. Riya was stunned… and they left for ETF office
In theETF office…. Arjun asked Shree to trace Sheekha's Phone and to find out last location of her call… Arjun was looking the at the phone call details of Talwar… after an hour shree informed arjun, "sir Sheekha ka phone Dholpur ke pas aakhri bar trace hua tha… uske baad switched off hai"and Arjun said "hume aage ki investigation ke liye Dholpur jana hoga… aage ki link hume wahi se milegi… hum aaj raat ko hi niklege… meine tumhare rajasthan jaane ki permission leli hai rathod"…. Tee became little disturbed….

sorry guys for delays... i was busy last week so .. couldn''t write update... and plz dont forget to leave your precious comments...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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uthake le jayoon... loved this dialogue... awesome update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow great so rathode and tee have a flashback
hope arjun strts noticing riya's love
continue soon

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